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Post by Skeleton Key on May 29, 2006 19:05:52 GMT -5
If you want me back so badly, then why are you ignoring me?
Do you think you're going insane? That's a nice excuse for so blatantly brushing off my messages. But what about Kit? What about the floating fountain pen that she saw? You have witnesses, Lemony. You can talk to me.
Do you not see me? I suppose that may be possible. But I saw you looking right at me. Are you going blind, dear? I don't think so.
Are you scared of me? I don't see why. I'm just a little singed, I'm not deformed or maimed, I've never done anything remotely frightening. I know that humans fear the supernatural, but really, darling, you must be used to me by now.
There were messages written in steam on the mirror, your typewriter was clicking away on it's own. The dust on the mantle formed letters, but you didn;t even talk to me.
You really are impossible, honey, and you're starting to make me mad.
There are black cats howling on your doorstep, there are crows flying down your chimney. There's no wind, but your shutters are banging, There are mirrors breaking, (Seven years of bad luck, multiplied.) the bathtub is filling up with blood. The kettle is boiling, the pots and pans are rattling.
Desperate times call for desperate measures, love.
The drawer with the matches in it is sliding open.
And my desperate measure is burning your house down.
See what it feels like when nobody talks to you, but at least you have the company of your wife.
You have no choice now, Lemony, darling, dearest, dead.
That was totally choppy and OOC. *headbang*
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Post by Phoenix 4242424242424242424242 on May 30, 2006 1:30:36 GMT -5
*stun*
Tap tap tappity... into my "other" side. You are definitly extremly talented. I'm not really sure if I can describe what I feel... it's so unknown. Maybe later when I'm not so stunned.
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Post by Skeleton Key on May 30, 2006 1:42:17 GMT -5
*gasp* I STUNNED someone? ?!!!!1oneoneone*passoutZOMG*
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Post by Phoebonica on May 30, 2006 3:32:26 GMT -5
That was beautiful. Tragic and haunting and it made me cry a little, from the implications. The style was perfect.
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Post by twistedbrain on May 30, 2006 5:45:50 GMT -5
I love it, Gretchen.
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Post by Jenny on May 30, 2006 9:04:08 GMT -5
Really good! I especially like the part about the bathtub filling up with blood for some reason. It's so good because it gives an idea about why Lemony's so demented! Fab!
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Post by joker on May 30, 2006 9:49:30 GMT -5
*titch twitch* *silence* *mouth hanging* Oh my gosh. Gretchen, I'm saving this thread in my favorites, not on 667, BUT ON MY COMPUTER!!! That was the most completely honestly greatest Fan Fiction I've EVER read. I was stunning, horror, sad, and it even made me think about Beatrice more than I've ever before. It was amazing! Absolutly ..... I've run out of words! I love you Gretchen.
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Post by Amy Lee ALOE Aunt Jo on May 30, 2006 20:57:55 GMT -5
That was AWESOME!!!!!! You should write more fanfics like this!
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Post by Deleted on May 31, 2006 4:55:33 GMT -5
*gasp* This is great! I'm so glad someone recomended it! And I'm even using exclamation marks, which I don't like!
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Post by R. on Nov 18, 2020 12:34:48 GMT -5
I'm not really sure if I can describe what I feel... it's so unknown. I also got an incomprehensible feeling from this fic. I love it!
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