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Post by MambaduMal on Oct 2, 2003 17:16:42 GMT -5
This song was sent to be by a person who shall prefer to remain anonymous. This person wouldn't post it themselves, but gave me permission to do so...
UNTITLED
Wandering around, misplaced in the murky twilight Maybe I won’t fall apart If I keep my arms tightly bound together
I walk until dusk turns to night And wonder when you’ll have to break my spirit Decide to cut me from my tether
Enveloped in your memory Enraptured at the thought of you Enraged at your apathy Eclipsed from reality and wondering what to do
Watch in interest for a while As a shooting star flees and like me falls apart Must have been a casualty of your twisted smile Just like my pitiful heart
And I can feel you here beside me Or at least I wish that I may shortly I think can hear you singing softly But it’s just the wind moving branches on a tree
Enveloped in your memory Enraptured at the thought of you Enraged at your apathy Eclipsed from reality and wondering what to do
Wandering around, misplaced in the murky twilight Maybe I won’t fall apart If I keep my arms tightly bound together…
But I fall to the ground With a crushing blow I fall to the ground I fall to my knees I fall to the ground I fall to your feet And then I fall to fragments Looking into unseeing eyes Another lover cries
And there is Person's poem. I just had to share the awesomeness ;D
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Post by Shaffuru! on Oct 2, 2003 17:23:14 GMT -5
Oh, that's so awesome. I could never really appriciate poetry or lyrics properly, but this is really good. I'm very curious to know who this anonymous person is...
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Post by Shaffuru! on Oct 2, 2003 22:53:46 GMT -5
Yeah, I like that part too. But my favourite part is
Wandering around, misplaced in the murky twilight Maybe I won’t fall apart If I keep my arms tightly bound together
I have a theory about who this anonymous person is now.
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Post by Shaffuru! on Oct 2, 2003 22:58:58 GMT -5
*Looks around* I'll PM you. I'd hate to be wrong in front of so many witnesses.
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Post by BSam on Oct 3, 2003 2:50:32 GMT -5
no...it wasn't me
i'm nowhere near as good as that...
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Post by ponygirl's vapor on Oct 4, 2003 19:40:51 GMT -5
i have shrewd idea who it is... since it isnt bsam or pennyroyal... but to anoymous, its great...
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 5, 2003 10:25:28 GMT -5
Yeah, its really good. Could you PM your suspicions to me?
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Post by MambaduMal on Oct 6, 2003 17:32:32 GMT -5
Well since everyone is so curious I guess I should let you guys know.. I wrote that song. Me, me, me, me, me! Yes. It was swans. She wanted it to be anonymous... she's so insecure about everything in life... from her songs... to her shoes... to her obsessive crush on Zach...
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Post by Shaffuru! on Oct 6, 2003 18:21:12 GMT -5
Wow. You're good, swans. One, because the song is really awesome. And two, because you had me completely fooled. *Nod*
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Post by Freshie on Oct 6, 2003 18:22:58 GMT -5
ha. that reminds me of my some-what short crush.Anyway..its a great song! Yay for Queen Swan!
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Post by ponygirl's vapor on Oct 6, 2003 19:40:58 GMT -5
Klaus! Not Zach. Yes, I wrote this song for Klaus. I think I can hear you singing softlyHe really has a very lovely singing voice. I'm getting fed up with these too many connections notice... So my suspicions were correct! Hah! So wait, you wrote this for Klaus, the Klaus Baudelaire, not me? I'm hurt Queen... We shall assasinate you.
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Post by BSam on Oct 7, 2003 9:26:48 GMT -5
Wow. You're good, swans. One, because the song is really awesome. And two, because you had me completely fooled. *Nod* me fooled too... mainly because you asked me if i wrote it... then again that was the first i heard of it... i'm apathetic...
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Post by MambaduMal on Oct 8, 2003 19:54:12 GMT -5
This is a song by a DIFFERENT anonymous person... please do not confuse the author of this one with the author of the first one...
DRIFT
I lie in the shadows Where they cannot find me Cannot capture my life Lock it in a cell They creep onward Using my defense Noises come from behind Ensnared in the net I tell myself to run
I look for help But there is none I am alone They will take me Take my children away Poison them with lies Send them away from me Never to see them again
They overcome me Unable to hinder I drift away Into sleep...
Does this song rock or what? ;D
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Post by Indistinguishable Blob on Oct 8, 2003 20:02:58 GMT -5
It rocks Majorly.
I love the line "I drift away Into sleep..."
Spiffadelicness.
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Post by ponygirl's vapor on Oct 8, 2003 20:09:31 GMT -5
How can it be by you? Mamba said it was a differant anonymous person, not the same...
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