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Post by Violetwashere on Nov 21, 2003 22:26:42 GMT -5
Another poem by me. It's about how I'm always quiet in class but get punished anyways and it's absolutely no fair...pfuey. I'm Not Quiet Inside Every day in misery When will it change? Teachers, subs, scattered hubbub Everything is strange I try now, so diligently To be quiet and good But now I know, no matter how I show I'll never be regarded as I should I actu'ly sleep the class away Does anyone ever see? They forbid I open my lid And speak what haunts me I want to shout, "I'm bored, spare me!" Though I know I can't So here I sit, chomping at the bit And write this pointless chant Not as evil as the last one. Choir class is more evil than school in general.
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Post by Indistinguishable Blob on Nov 21, 2003 22:29:52 GMT -5
Hee! I love it! Made me laugh...Yay. ;D
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Post by negativenine on Nov 21, 2003 23:08:22 GMT -5
God. I had this terrible feeling (exactly the same thing as your poem deals with) a couple weeks ago. I'd come home from school everyday and rant in my diary about how all I ever did was pointless, boring work that I didn't care about, and how it was always the same and how... guh. I felt like every day was repeating itself that whole month: I was tired and I just... did... so much... never-ending crap. It wasn't good. Anyway, it's very good at bringing that all out. I especially like the first stanza. Keep writing!
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Post by Violetwashere on Nov 21, 2003 23:22:33 GMT -5
Thankyou! I will compose a poem as I go along in this very message I'm so happy:
The seatbelt of my heart is unstrapped The strings on my brain have snapped I feel like I'm flying and nowhere near dying and nowhere near crying at all
Whew! It used to be I'm only a poet when I'm sad. I'm usually an author when I'm happy...or a singer. Strange, I'm so bored yet so...giddy!
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Post by negativenine on Nov 21, 2003 23:34:32 GMT -5
Wh()()p! Who was it who said that you have to write when you don't feel like writing to improve? Someone. I bet they weren't very famous. I bet I'm the only person who's ever heard it. I bet I made up half of it.
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Post by Violetwashere on Nov 22, 2003 10:56:07 GMT -5
No one said it I'm pretty sure. Different kinds of literature apply to what mood I'm in and I usually write or start a short story or book when I'm happy, that's all I'm saying. Acting...usually when I'm hyper! woo!
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