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Post by embah on Feb 10, 2004 3:02:04 GMT -5
This is a poem I wrote a few months ago. I want your feed back, though nothing too hard...lol
There's an angel in my pocket It was sent from up above To show you lots of friendship To show you lots of love.
There's an angel in my pocket It wants to be your friend To help you make the right decisions It wants to lend a hand.
There's an angel in my pocket Listen to what it's got to say Always show you're nice and caring And don't let your dreams run away.
Here's two other short one's I've been working on:
1. Best friends like me and you Stick together through and through Even though we're far apart We're still together in the heart.
2. Time and time has come to pass But still our friendship's lasted We've seen each through tough times The tears and all the laughs.
So, what do you think? Though don't be too nasty, i'm only 13!
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Post by negativenine on Feb 10, 2004 18:39:24 GMT -5
Awww... they're like the kind of things you read in Chicken Soup books! ;D
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Post by Scam on Feb 15, 2004 17:17:03 GMT -5
i like them!
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Feb 19, 2004 21:09:49 GMT -5
That's so sweet! Hey, I'm thirteen two...
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Post by embah on Feb 19, 2004 23:57:05 GMT -5
Thanx! I actually wote a few more (longer ones) the other night. So I'll post them when I get the time (after i finish all my home work that is!)
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