Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Divided
May 15, 2005 13:22:34 GMT -5
Post by Antenora on May 15, 2005 13:22:34 GMT -5
I loved every bit of this.
I think you've depicted me quite accurately.
And I look forward to seeing more of Sam and Amber and Dupin, and learning more about the Queen of Chaos. Sam's map is awesome.
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Divided
May 15, 2005 14:49:45 GMT -5
Post by Amber on May 15, 2005 14:49:45 GMT -5
Now laughOh and The lines are meant to be creases, I tried to make it stick-figurey but eh. My camera kills things.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Likes: 113
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Divided
May 15, 2005 15:13:37 GMT -5
Post by Antenora on May 15, 2005 15:13:37 GMT -5
GIS for "stick figure pirate". I imagine the drawing on the napkin looked like the little guy in the bottom corner. Nice internet map, too.
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Divided
May 15, 2005 19:25:34 GMT -5
Post by PJ on May 15, 2005 19:25:34 GMT -5
This just gets better and better with every story. Dante, if your future stories are as good as this, then you'll make millions. Also, I like how I'm the comic relief guy. And this new person....blond, you say? Could it be James? And my traditional rival is Derik! But yeah, you've portrayed me as I am, basically. Great stuff.
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Divided
May 15, 2005 23:24:24 GMT -5
Post by Ennui on May 15, 2005 23:24:24 GMT -5
I hope he doesn't make millions, you know. No one would take him seriously if he reached critical mass. Far better to be a starving hack who always gets brilliant reviews and attends literary fastivals...
PS-Amber, the map is flawless...
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Divided
May 15, 2005 23:29:50 GMT -5
Post by PJ on May 15, 2005 23:29:50 GMT -5
I hope he doesn't make millions, you know. No one would take him seriously if he reached critical mass. Well, we would. And that's all that matters. COUGHHANDOVERTHECASHCOUGH Hang on, this sounds like a Discussion question. Would you rather be popular and well known and celebrated, or would you rather be held in high-esteem by your friends? One or the other. Also, so we're quoting Divided now? Ok.
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Divided
May 16, 2005 2:01:16 GMT -5
Post by A. the Returned on May 16, 2005 2:01:16 GMT -5
Wow I like this muchly. Blonde, James? The enemy comment pointed me this way. I remember Pj's sig saying something along the lines of "created by my nemesis, James." Hmm...
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Divided
May 16, 2005 6:01:58 GMT -5
Post by PJ on May 16, 2005 6:01:58 GMT -5
Wow I like this muchly. Blonde, James? The enemy comment pointed me this way. I remember Pj's sig saying something along the lines of "created by my nemesis, James." Hmm... Oh yeah, that's right! James is my nemesis! Cool. It better be him, then.
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Divided
May 16, 2005 10:50:15 GMT -5
Post by odh on May 16, 2005 10:50:15 GMT -5
I hope it is me. Also, he once said he wouldn't include me, hence his not-prepared-to-have-me-fleshed-out thing. *Doesn't get hopes up* Once again, funderful chapter.
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Divided
May 16, 2005 11:21:13 GMT -5
Post by Dante on May 16, 2005 11:21:13 GMT -5
The map and napkin are great, Amber. The map is quite accurate.
The third character isn't Dupin or James. You won't see it coming now, I think. Originally, I thought that somebody might guess from their physical description and attitude, but it seems otherwise now. You'll probably be disappointed. It's not somebody hugely important who'll cause a great revelation or something. It's just another ordinary 667er.
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Divided
May 16, 2005 12:18:19 GMT -5
Post by odh on May 16, 2005 12:18:19 GMT -5
Not me? *tear*
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Divided
May 16, 2005 12:26:01 GMT -5
Post by Antenora on May 16, 2005 12:26:01 GMT -5
I think I know who the curly-haired youth is, after thinking over his behavior and trying to remember what people look like. At first I thought it was Dupin because I somehow remembered him as having curly hair.
May I state my guess, Dante?
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Divided
May 16, 2005 12:29:27 GMT -5
Post by Dante on May 16, 2005 12:29:27 GMT -5
May I state my guess, Dante? Perhaps a PM would be better - although you're quite right. Very good.
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Divided
May 16, 2005 18:00:03 GMT -5
Post by PJ on May 16, 2005 18:00:03 GMT -5
May I state my guess, Dante? Perhaps a PM would be better - although you're quite right. Very good. Blast! Not James....not Dupin, who could it be? Some member I've missed? Just write the story, Dante, and quit making me feel stupid.
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Divided
May 17, 2005 18:42:53 GMT -5
Post by Akbar Le Grey on May 17, 2005 18:42:53 GMT -5
What can I say Dante? You have, once again, dazzled me with your sparkling prose and talent. I am so glad I managed to get on to read the Fifth Fragment. Do keep up the work, you brilliant artiste.
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