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Post by Kount Kelsey on Aug 23, 2008 8:43:58 GMT -5
did justice and jerome and esme... ( all the noble and past gardians survive the fire???)
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Aug 23, 2008 9:48:34 GMT -5
That's a very good question. I, personally, like to think that there were survivors of the Hotel Denouement fire (particularly Esme, Jerome, Carmelita, Nero, and Colette, since they are my favorite characters and because all of my fanfictions take place after the series). I like the way Snicket/Handler wrote the ending of TPP-- I mean, there were bound to be some lives lost, but at the same time we can still assume that others managed to escape.
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Post by Kount Kelsey on Aug 26, 2008 12:23:18 GMT -5
ya i might write a fan fiction as a continued ending.
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Post by Dante on Aug 26, 2008 12:26:37 GMT -5
ya i might write a fan fiction as a continued ending. . This is exactly what we're meant to be doing, I think. |
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Post by Kount Kelsey on Aug 27, 2008 9:41:26 GMT -5
so far i only wrote 1 paragraph and its coming out really good (well at least i think its good) when i get more done i will post a preview here
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Post by Kount Kelsey on Sept 1, 2008 16:12:45 GMT -5
Here is what i have so far but from now on it will be posted in fanfictions!
After the fire only few people survived it was esme,jerome,frank,nero,a bellhop named sam,sir, and mr.remera. Jerome thought that esme was no longer evil after her break up with oal but of corse she told him, "even thought me and olaf broke up doesnt mean that im going to turn into a goody goody two shoues... thats is so last year" jerome still had feelings for his evil ex-girlfriend. so jerome,frank and that short bellhop named sam went to go search for other survivors and hopefully find justice. while esme complained that searching for survivors was no longer in and that wet hair was , so esme walked over to the pond to get her hair wet. Jerome was despretly searching for justice while frank and sam were searching for any employe's and most importantly frank!
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Post by Dante on Sept 2, 2008 3:00:00 GMT -5
That's an interesting start. You should try and make your chapters longer - perhaps by including some of the things the characters say and the conversations they have (whereas right now your chapter reads more like a summary). If you post some of your work in the Fearsome Fiction section, you'll probably get a more enthusiastic and constructive response (and besides, that's where fanfiction is meant to go). |
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Post by Kount Kelsey on Sept 3, 2008 15:34:36 GMT -5
ya i am goin to add that and i am just starting that isn ot the whole chapter thanx!
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