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Post by Hermes on Jun 18, 2012 12:14:54 GMT -5
Impressive as ever. I especially like the way you take the virtual reality aspect of this seriously.
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Post by csc on Jun 18, 2012 14:02:24 GMT -5
So good. I don't know what happens at October 18th of 2005 but I look foward to finding out.
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Post by Christmas Chief on Jun 18, 2012 14:33:25 GMT -5
Wow. This is an excellent way to incorporate the past with the present.
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Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Jun 18, 2012 14:56:32 GMT -5
I know what happened on October 18th 2005!
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Post by Christmas Chief on Jun 18, 2012 14:58:44 GMT -5
I didn't even think to check, but now that I have, I even more look forward to the next installment.
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Post by B. on Jun 18, 2012 15:24:30 GMT -5
Wow, this is getting suspenseful!
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Post by Hermes on Jun 18, 2012 15:36:13 GMT -5
I didn't even think to check, but now that I have, I even more look forward to the next installment. Yes, interesting! |
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Post by Sophie Baudelaire on Jun 18, 2012 20:49:50 GMT -5
Ooh I remember October 18, 2005! Interested to see what happens next... ;D
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Post by csc on Jun 18, 2012 21:20:18 GMT -5
What happened?
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Post by Sophie Baudelaire on Jun 18, 2012 22:57:59 GMT -5
It was the release date of TPP.
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Post by Kensicle on Jun 19, 2012 4:33:27 GMT -5
Sixteen, that was so wonderful, and so brilliant - I like the setting of 667, and the Countess Violet part was great. This is my favourite chapter so far.  |
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Post by Shelly on Jun 19, 2012 9:31:01 GMT -5
Incredible.
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Post by Sixteen on Jun 27, 2012 6:55:38 GMT -5
Interlude
While the DeLorean was jumping through time, the lights on the dials flickered. The dates flashed and changed in front of Kensicle's eyes. Momentarily it changed to 2012 and the town square once again formed around the car. Kensicle was still travelling at 88 when she ran over someone. She yelped and smacked the dials which reset themselves, shooting off into the past.
Luckily, this did nothing to change the cyberspace-time continuum as Bryan was destined to die anyway.
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Post by Christmas Chief on Jun 27, 2012 6:58:17 GMT -5
An entire interlude, just to kill Bryan? Brilliant.
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Post by Kensicle on Jun 27, 2012 7:15:22 GMT -5
Killing Bryan (and/or his ghosts) is all the rage right now. A fic isn't complete without a Bryan killing.
Indeed, brilliant.
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