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Post by Kit's tits kick ticks on Nov 23, 2012 17:40:34 GMT -5
My drawings are more like 'folk art' style, you know, no perspective and stuff... Thanks for liking it! I like your drawing style, it's so simple and that makes it very beautiful and interesting.
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Post by Tryina Denouement on Nov 23, 2012 22:23:13 GMT -5
ANOTHER TEASER PEOPLE!
WHO IS HIS MAJESTY?
GOOGLE SEARCH THIS TOPIC PEOPLE!!!!
-BYE!
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Post by Tryina Denouement on Jan 6, 2013 23:49:37 GMT -5
Not A Chapter
Translated from the Mainland language by Tryina Denouement
667 A.R
In a building of stature and dignity, a collection of words which here means '667 Dark Avenue', there was a girl, there was an admin, and there was...
Oh! I shall not delay! Or the researchers of Bedina will scold me! Or my name isn't Edirathea Denoona! Oh, agony!
In this particular building of stature, there were fans of books that an author named 'Snickrersded'? Isn't it? Oh, I forgot! Oh, I remember! It's 'Snicket', of course, silly name for the sake of Ahura Mazda!
But that very morning, they were cooking pasta 'pustcasera', or was it 'puttanessca'? Oh, silly names. Tales long ago.
A boy named Lucas was telling the other 667ers that-oh 667ers, silly humans they were.-that if they didn't let him cook the puttanessca sauce he will explode the kitchen."-save for Tryina" the others jeered. But it was not true.
Meanwhile, Tryina was helping Dante at his library. They were arranging books concerning the 'Brhahf9wf iowfuim' ? Or was that the 'Bombinating Beast'? I don't remember.But- Suddenly the door opened and a woman entered with lunch for them.
"Antenora!" Dante said gladly. Antenora was his e-wife, and Tryina was somehow like his unofficial e-goddaughter, I believe. But this is none of my business ,and I must tell you as they ate their own foods, Dante eating fish and chips while Tryina was eating 'pete' (What sort of herb was that?) fried rice. The library smelled awful after that.
"Let's get back to work!" Dante said to Tryina. They still had many books, that if I were to tidy them up, I would have not finished until the Vanadis Manah took my life. But the 667ers were known to be quick and dilligent, and they cleaned it up really quick. But a book fell from the shelves, and Tryina got it before it fell to the ground-I suppose- with a hard thud.
"The One King?" she read the title. It was an upcoming book in her time, and she wondered where Dante had got a copy.
"Where did you get this?"Tryina asked. "Ah, nevermind. If you want it, you can keep it." Dante said. "Thank you Dante! I've been wanting this book for so long!" she answered excitedly. "You're very welcome." he bowed politely.
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This was meant to be like a book where the storyline is filled with journals, letters, and thingy-dings, like Dracula. I got this idea in quite a sudden, I must say.
GLOSSARY
Ahura Mazda: The main 'Vanadis', an entity similiar to gods and goddeses.
Manah: The Vanadis of death.
Bedina: A place in the Vandarian Mainland.
Pete:(pe'-tay) a sort of pea-like entity-why did I use that word?- that is like a slightly large oval, green in color and very smelly. It is delicious either raw or cooked, but watch out of bad breath if you eat it!
A.R: A calendar of some sort, like A.D or B.C. I'm not going to explain much coz' we're not going to go here.
That is all.
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Post by Dante on Jan 7, 2013 7:15:38 GMT -5
This is a pretty intriguing start, Tryina. You clearly feel quite comfortable in your universe, and the provision of a glossary allows you to throw around unfamiliar but important terms with impunity, which is useful. I like that this is set in the year 667 as well as in the building 667, and I'm fairly happy with the presentation of my character, too. I'm really curious to see where you're taking this.
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Post by Tryina Denouement on Jan 7, 2013 8:48:47 GMT -5
This is a pretty intriguing start, Tryina. You clearly feel quite comfortable in your universe, and the provision of a glossary allows you to throw around unfamiliar but important terms with impunity, which is useful. I like that this is set in the year 667 as well as in the building 667, and I'm fairly happy with the presentation of my character, too. I'm really curious to see where you're taking this. The year 667 A.R is the year said researcher Edirathea Denoona recorded the 'not a chapter entry' . Thank you! I just love you as a 667er, really. Hahaha the glossary. Pete does exist in this world, though. I hope Chap 1 will come soon.
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