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Post by Kit's tits kick ticks on Dec 9, 2012 14:18:00 GMT -5
I like the whole chapter, but you're right, the ending is the best.
Is that your second Advent Calendar thing, too? Because if it is you should post the link there and I should add the link to the first post.
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Post by penne on Dec 9, 2012 14:44:44 GMT -5
You have a really big problem with the word "point".
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Post by Dante on Dec 9, 2012 16:56:39 GMT -5
Yes, it is a very strong ending to this chapter, and unusually severe from Justice Strauss, but you can see her point perspective. I like the relationship between the author and his brother, too. Good chapter.
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Post by Isadora Is a Door on Dec 10, 2012 3:33:46 GMT -5
Anka - Yes, sorry. this is mya dvent thing. I was in london all day yesterday,, and only had time to post it here before collapsing into bed.
Dante - Lets just say, Justice Strauss has, er, stood alone when faith was low,
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Klaus' rival for the affections of Fiona Widdershins
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Post by Fiona Fanboy on Dec 12, 2012 17:50:27 GMT -5
Oh crap.
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Post by Poe's Coats Host Toast on Dec 13, 2012 13:26:05 GMT -5
I just took the time to finally read the chapter and what an ending! I wonder if the setting of this book/fic will be in the court room. Also, wishing that your brother is dead, no matter how evil he is, doesn't seem so noble to me, even though it didn't lessen my surprise at this revelation in the beginning. Oh and is the spelling of Baudelaires as "baud ales" a code or just a very peculiar typo?
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Post by Isadora Is a Door on Dec 30, 2012 13:54:39 GMT -5
Just thought I would let you all know I have resumed my research. Expect Chapter 3 some time this week.
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Post by Charlie on Dec 31, 2012 4:42:05 GMT -5
Kay
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Post by Isadora Is a Door on Jan 3, 2013 9:25:03 GMT -5
CHAPTER 3
SATURDAY 5TH JANUARY
CHAPTER 4
SUNDAY 13TH JANUARY
DO NOT READ
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Post by Tryina Denouement on Jan 3, 2013 10:29:36 GMT -5
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Post by Isadora Is a Door on Jan 3, 2013 10:52:22 GMT -5
Tryina, I love you!
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Post by Tryina Denouement on Jan 3, 2013 11:02:32 GMT -5
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Post by Charlie on Jan 4, 2013 22:24:57 GMT -5
Nyaw! Tryiner anyone?
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Post by Kit's tits kick ticks on Jan 5, 2013 4:17:13 GMT -5
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Post by Isadora Is a Door on Jan 5, 2013 4:46:25 GMT -5
As much as I love Tryina, she can never be bee.
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