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Post by Tryina Denouement on Dec 23, 2012 0:55:32 GMT -5
YES!!!!!WE ALL SURVIVED!
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Post by Hermedy on Dec 23, 2012 10:02:57 GMT -5
"An admin power surge," answered Tragedy. Then light began to fade in and out, and everything started again.
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Post by Tryina Denouement on Dec 23, 2012 11:58:31 GMT -5
"An admin power surge," answered Tragedy. Then light began to fade in and out, and everything started again. Oh you, sir, are a very odd admin.
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Post by bryan on Dec 23, 2012 15:16:40 GMT -5
I added this thing I forgot to put in but it's not worth rereading the whole post, so here it is. "Who were the conspirators?" Nobody moved. Bryan looked up at Tragedy to see if he was going to say anything, but he wasn't, so Bryan stayed silent. Out of nowhere, Pandora shouted, "I did it!" Everyone looked at her in disbelief. Pandora stood up, soaking it all in. "Pandora?" Willis asked. "Just kidding I lied," she said. "I'm just self absorbed and wanted you all to look at me." She sat back down. Suddenly though, Sophie cleared her throat and slowly stood up. - Great ending, Bryan! But why didn't you die? "Wait," said Bryan, sitting at the table. "There's still one thing. How did I survive the apocalypse?" "Oh," said Dante. "Probably because you were dead already. You can't die again."
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Post by penne on Dec 23, 2012 15:28:32 GMT -5
Oh, that makes sense.
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Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Dec 24, 2012 0:32:13 GMT -5
Awesome.
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Post by Kit's tits kick ticks on Dec 24, 2012 11:35:22 GMT -5
Great ending!
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Post by B. on Dec 25, 2012 8:08:30 GMT -5
I just had time to read this and holy salsa, it's amazing. I missed your 667 fics, Bryan. My guesses before I read part 2 were the Scottish Dance or the Shepard's pie one, but really it seems like quite a few people had various motives. The multiple view points were done really skilfully as well.
After reading part 2: Wow, that was a fantastic ending with a good message. This is such an awesome fic.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 25, 2012 23:16:33 GMT -5
"Who were the conspirators?" Nobody moved. Bryan looked up at Tragedy to see if he was going to say anything, but he wasn't, so Bryan stayed silent. Out of nowhere, Pandora shouted, "I did it!" Everyone looked at her in disbelief. Pandora stood up, soaking it all in. "Pandora?" Willis asked. "Just kidding I lied," she said. "I'm just self absorbed and wanted you all to look at me." She sat back down. This is my favorite thing that has ever happened.
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Post by soufflé on Dec 26, 2012 0:52:54 GMT -5
I finally had time to make my commentary on this, and just...wow. This is brilliant, Bryan. You captured everyone's personality so well (though I've never really tried/threatened to kill anyone, but, y'know). The multiple POVs that all lead up to one event reminds me a bit of those 3 chapters in TPP preceding the clock ringing. ^_^
I died
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Post by bryan on Dec 26, 2012 9:18:27 GMT -5
Haha thanks everyone, glad you all enjoyed it.
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Post by Charles Vane on Dec 27, 2012 0:43:05 GMT -5
"Who were the conspirators?" Nobody moved. Bryan looked up at Tragedy to see if he was going to say anything, but he wasn't, so Bryan stayed silent. Out of nowhere, Pandora shouted, "I did it!" Everyone looked at her in disbelief. Pandora stood up, soaking it all in. "Pandora?" Willis asked. "Just kidding I lied," she said. "I'm just self absorbed and wanted you all to look at me." She sat back down. This is my favorite thing that has ever happened. You're stupid. Also, stuff about this story.
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Post by Charlie on Dec 31, 2012 4:09:37 GMT -5
Lalala yay, Bryan is wow and stuff lalala
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