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Post by Charlie on Apr 3, 2013 23:55:17 GMT -5
Well now I notice it and feel that it implies a certain inner joy, allowing the poet to express her inner interpretation of the world around he. I've bullsalsated far too many assignments this week
Oh, and it's excellent once more. I like the personal tone it takes pointing our Sherry Ann's proficiency at stalking. Also, I love the celery pun
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Post by soufflé on Apr 25, 2013 20:00:36 GMT -5
Came up with another
Roses are red Violets aren't blue This poem doesn't rhyme Jk it does potato you
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Post by Charlie on Apr 25, 2013 22:00:28 GMT -5
Wow. I love the subversion evident in the second line, as well as the use of colloquial language to breed familiarity evident in the last line.
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Post by soufflé on Apr 25, 2013 22:15:56 GMT -5
thanks chucky
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Post by penne on Apr 26, 2013 16:36:37 GMT -5
You should seriously consider a future making rap music.
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Post by Charlie on Apr 27, 2013 9:11:25 GMT -5
Jeez I don't know Pen, I know I'm gangsta and all, but I think I just don't think that's my thing ( )
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Post by soufflé on Apr 27, 2013 9:48:26 GMT -5
Your rapper name could be Big Chucky
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Post by Charlie on Apr 27, 2013 9:54:21 GMT -5
God it could be... or maybe not. I mean, either way
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