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Post by Deleted on Dec 15, 2016 2:23:32 GMT -5
welcome to writing corner with the fresh mince, a corner where i post my writing.
ballerina, hi. ballerina, hi ballerina, bye ballerina, fly ballerina, why
ballerinas: a haiku ballerinas ooh spin around jump tuck spin jump ballerinas good
my hair soft, conditioned, blonde smells so nice, so nice, so nice soft, shampooed, blonde
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Post by Deleted on Dec 15, 2016 2:25:34 GMT -5
skate skate skate skate don't be late flip flip please do a trick please skate skate you weren't late
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Post by Reba on Dec 15, 2016 11:58:55 GMT -5
this is like kanye's fast food poem
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Post by Deleted on Dec 15, 2016 13:10:35 GMT -5
this is like kanye's fast food poem i ghostwrote that
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2017 4:39:09 GMT -5
i have been writing a lot lately and i want to use this thread more so it's now not just for poetry. here's a project i have been working on called 'a short giraffe attempting to eat its own tail' everyone let me know what you think no. 1no. 2no. 3
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Post by Poe's Coats Host Toast on Feb 24, 2017 6:12:26 GMT -5
I like #2. And the last line from #1. The whole thing kinda reminds me of the collected writings in Harmony Korine's A Crack Up at the Race Riots.
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Post by B. on Feb 24, 2017 8:29:18 GMT -5
'My hair' is my favourite
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Post by Reba on Feb 24, 2017 10:48:37 GMT -5
i love the footage playing behind the credits, but you need some speedmetal playing or something, and a grungey flicker effect like 90s MTV.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2017 20:55:39 GMT -5
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Post by Grace on Feb 28, 2017 0:22:00 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2017 2:08:41 GMT -5
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Post by Cafe SalMONAlla on Feb 28, 2017 21:57:07 GMT -5
Haha the imagery in the final montage
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Post by Deleted on Mar 6, 2017 4:25:17 GMT -5
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Post by Poe's Coats Host Toast on Mar 6, 2017 7:37:17 GMT -5
sounds like a dream one might have
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Post by Reba on Mar 6, 2017 9:58:59 GMT -5
now you're just writing rejected skits from asdfmovie
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