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Post by Uncle Algernon on Feb 3, 2019 17:06:15 GMT -5
Not sure you really needed to spell the Duo's identity quite so explicitly. I think we all knew who they were very quickly. The last sentence was unnecessary.
Other than that, however, good job! Do carry on!
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Post by veryferociousdrama on Feb 4, 2019 11:56:20 GMT -5
Foxy: Why, thank you! Dante: Thank you! Yes, the submarine is pretty huge; if you've ever seen Futurama, I like to think that it's sort of like the Nimbus. Yeah, splitting everyone up was a sort of must, and I liked having Sunny, Beatrice and Jerome Jr together, especially as in the original books, Sunny was always overshadowed a bit, which of course makes sense as Violet and Klaus were much older, and 6-to-8 year olds are more capable than babies. Yes, I wonder what the Sinister Duo are up to as well. Chasing after the sugar bowl? Attempting to re-recruit Esme onto their side? Taming sharks? If only I knew - oh wait, I do. Uncle Algernon: I hear you, but the Sinister Duo are some of my favourite characters, so I just wanted to have that line. Thank you for both the compliment and constructive criticism.
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