Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Nov 12, 2020 16:21:18 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Early Life I don't remember many things as a newborn. But since I am fairly young, I'll write them down so I don't forget. I remember crying. A woman I don't know. Unless I do. Or she does. Or the Baudelaires do. I need to find them. Memories get clearer later. Birthdays, fictional stories, nonfictional stories, a boat, a symbol - similar to an eye.
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Nov 14, 2020 11:23:52 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Leaving HomeThe boat. It had my name on it. I wasn't even a toddler yet when we left. We left the island where I learned so many things. And ate so many apples. I miss the sound of Sunny slicing apples for me. *Chomp Chomp* But nevertheless, babies aren't aware of many things. So I wasn't sad when I left, but I am now. We went on the boat. "Beatrice" Why was it my name? There are too many secrets I have not yet learned. Though a very lonely man downstairs is helping me uncover them.
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Post by Optimism is my Phil-osophy on Nov 14, 2020 11:35:01 GMT -5
You know what would be really cool: if you put some illustrations (even if simple) to depict the adventures of Beatrice JR. And it would be nice to not necessarily have a chronological order. This would imitate LSTUA style well. And it would be nice to include some letters and reports.Or something like the audio description of a Sunny radio program.
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Nov 14, 2020 12:21:27 GMT -5
I've never drawn any ASOUE
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Nov 14, 2020 12:22:37 GMT -5
Also, I don't want the story to mimic Lemony Snicket's Autobiography, and I want it to be child-like.
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Nov 14, 2020 12:29:34 GMT -5
Chapter 3: The Wild RideIt is v ry rainy out, s me lett rs are smudged, th s is the st ry of my boat ride w th the Bau elai es. T h b H k
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Nov 14, 2020 12:50:15 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Mr. SnicketThis chapter is entirely dedicated to Mr. Snicket, the man who taught me many things. First of all he taught me this, a little secret poem I made. "My-my, the wedding bells, the wedding bells are ringing! You may now kiss the bride! Hooray! Let's go get can of pea soup! Husband and wife, follow me to exit the building! You are the best! No, you are the best! Alright, lets just go to our very luxurious apartment!" See, Mr. Snicket taught me this code, I forget the name... It started with an "S"... Anyways, every ten letters is the word in the secret message! Let me underline them... Also, when the text says, "ringing", that indicates the start of the message! So, if I was sending a message to an "associate", it would read, "You can exit the apartment.", in case any enemies were nearby and left. Mr. Snicket also taught me, the man who made the code, who's name I've forgotten, also made various plays with secret messages, in that code, hidden in them. For instance, some plays are called, "Zombies in the Snow", "Werewolves in the Rain", and, "Vampires in the Retirement Community".
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Post by Optimism is my Phil-osophy on Nov 14, 2020 12:57:03 GMT -5
Oh, the Sebald code looks really cool! And I'm sorry for the unsolicited suggestions. These chapters showed your true intentions. I misunderstood the title of the book.
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Nov 15, 2020 14:56:38 GMT -5
Oh, the Sebald code looks really cool! And I'm sorry for the unsolicited suggestions. These chapters showed your true intentions. I misunderstood the title of the book. It's alright.
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Dec 23, 2020 13:50:29 GMT -5
Chapter 5: SearchingMr. Snicket is helping me search for the Baudelaires. It's been a long time since I've seen them. We're heading through the ocean to where we crashed the boat. Wait. A ship is appea ing on o r radar. No... th t's no a ship. Wh t is t at? Th Gre t nko n!
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Mar 22, 2021 11:45:27 GMT -5
Ch pt r: 6 T e G eat U kownWe've been spotted! Everything they've taug t me l ads to t is! I n ed a ph tog aph! R r j v
To be finished...
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Mar 23, 2021 8:24:40 GMT -5
Chapter 7: The End I regret to inform to whoever wrote in this journal, the pages have been ripped out. Though it seems like someone did this themselves. - Lemony Baudelaire
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Post by misstastrophe on Mar 23, 2021 10:47:42 GMT -5
Another character? Are we going to get anything from their perspective? Could it be a reference to The End when Violet finds out her name could have been Lemony? I really liked the idea of BBII:TUA & hope it's not over.
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Ewok50
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Post by Ewok50 on Mar 25, 2021 11:17:43 GMT -5
There will be a sequel.
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Post by R. on Mar 25, 2021 12:04:17 GMT -5
Happy Birthday!
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