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Post by R. on Mar 13, 2022 1:11:35 GMT -5
Oh! I always knew there was something suspicious about PFB Lemony Snicket.
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Post by Optimism is my Phil-osophy on Mar 13, 2022 3:57:47 GMT -5
Oh... I would like to finally make a criticism, which I hope will be constructive with respect to this fanfic... I think Lemony Philosopher's death precipitated. I found the relationship between the two Lemonys to be very good at first, as if the real and the fictional were getting in touch. I thought the mystery would be to what extent this meeting was true or just in Lemony Philosopher's imagination, and I think it would be more interesting to keep that doubt longer.
The beginning of the story was really very promising. I wanted to read something like this, where Lemony Philosopher would enter (perhaps in his imagination, or perhaps in a real way) in the fictional universe. Well, if I could pick up this fanfic where it left off, instead of ending it here, with the death of Lemony Philosopher, I would borrow my theory about the possibility of TGU being used to transport people. And then through the Beast, Lemony the Philosopher would be taken into the Snicketverse, and Lemony from ASOUE would be left in the real world, and I'd like to read about that reversed dynamic, which would still be pretty cryptic as far as whether it was something "real" or just a mental trip. I think it would be interesting for Lemony the Philosopher to make some observations about the Snicketverse and VFD, as well as it would be interesting to see Lemony from ASOUE make observations about the war in Russia and Ukraine.
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