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Post by ŘỠßëřŦ on Mar 6, 2004 12:07:34 GMT -5
I'm having stinkin' writer's block. I would appreciate it if another person wrote the NEXT part to the sequel of Duncan V.S. Quigley. Only ONE, though. Just show me a paragraph, and I'll put the best one posted on the story. I'll also give you recognishen on the fanfic.
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Post by badlee on Mar 6, 2004 12:10:09 GMT -5
I'd try, but I already tried George's.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Mar 6, 2004 12:11:21 GMT -5
Hm..isn't this copying me a bit?
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Post by badlee on Mar 6, 2004 12:12:28 GMT -5
I guess it is. How 'bout we just suggest ideas?
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Post by shiningkira on Mar 6, 2004 12:26:59 GMT -5
Here's something: It was a few days after the break-in incident, and everything was getting back to normal. Quigley and Violet had to work late that day, and asked Isadora to look after Eddie. When Isadora brought Eddie back from preschool, she took a shower. While Isadora was showering, a mysterious person quietly broke into the house. He took Eddie while he was sleeping, and left a note to Violet. After the person crept quietly out, Isadora came out of the shower and discovered that Eddie was missing.
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Post by badlee on Mar 6, 2004 12:30:13 GMT -5
A little short.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Mar 6, 2004 12:35:25 GMT -5
A few days after the break-in, Violet and Duncan went on a picnic during their lunch break, since they had no work that day. Eddie however, was at preschool, playing with all his little friends. " Do you think it was Duncan?" Violet suddenly asked. Quigley shrugged. "I dunno," he said," It'd be best if we didn't talk about it." Violet sighed. "It won't happen again, will it?" she asked nervously. Quigley gave her a glare. "Please Violet, just leave it," he said. He packed everything up and placed it back into the basket. "I think it's time we went to go pick Eddie up," he said. Violet nodded. "You're right," she said, and they walked off to the preschool, not talking. They arrived, and walked down the hallway. There was the big room, with everything a young boy would want. A lady named Martha, who worked there, came up to her. "Hello, Violet," she welcomed. She raised an eyebrow," What are you doing here?" Violet snorted. "We're here to pick Eddie up, duh," she replied. Martha frowned. "What?" she asked. Violet giggled. "What's so strange about that?" she asked. "Quigley already picked him up about half an hour ago," Martha said. "What? No I didn't!" Quigley cried. "Yes you did!" Martha insisted," Though you were wearing different clothes." "No I didn't!" he cried. "You did!" Martha insisted loudly. Quigley gasped. "What honey?" Violet asked. He sighed. "Duncan!" he cried," Duncan has our kid!"
I had to have tea after, so I didn't have time to finish it.
Violet and Quigley rushed out of the preschool. "Where is he!" Violet cried, tears poring from her brown eyes. "I don't know!" Quigley shouted," Now come on, let's go call the police." Violet was shivering. "I'm going to go look for him!" she screamed, and ran off. She looked all around the local villiage. Duncan and Eddie were nowhere. She was crying heavily. "Eddie!" she screamed, but there was no reply. She checked Isadora's house, but Isadora had seen nothing. Violet remarked, that she didn't want Isadora's help. Violet sat on a sidewalk, crying her eyes out. Where was her darling Eddie. Suddenly she heard a scream. It sounded like her little boy. She cautiously got up, and walked further down until she was by the old tower. The old tower looked almost like a church, although it was not used for anything. She looked around. "Eddie?" she asked. She continued to here his scream. Suddenly, she heard it louder, she looked up, and gasped in shock. Duncan was up high, on top of the tower, with little Eddie in his arms. Eddie was tied up, he was gagged as well. "Eddie!" Violet screamed," Don't drop her!" "I won't," Duncan sneered," Yet. Come up an join us Violet, and I may consider letting him go." He laughed. What was his plan? Violet didn't think, and rushed towards the step, to save her little Eddie.
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Post by badlee on Mar 6, 2004 12:44:31 GMT -5
That's good. Must. Resist. Temptation. To. Compete...Rrrr....
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Post by shiningkira on Mar 6, 2004 13:54:34 GMT -5
Ive made up something!!! ;D It was a few days after the break-in, and everything was going back to normal. Violet and Quigley had to go to work, and asked Isadora to pick Eddie up from preschool. Isadora picked up Eddie, and drove to Violet and Quigley’s house. When they got there, Isadora took a shower after she put Eddie in his room to take a nap. While she was showering, a mysterious person broke in quietly into the house. The person took Eddie, and left a note. After the person left, Isadora came out of the shower to check on Eddie. She went into Eddie’s room and screamed at what she saw. She saw nothing. Nothing but an empty bed and a note. She immediately phoned Violet and Quigley to tell them what happened. When Violet is contacted, she immediately comes home to confront Isadora.
“You didn’t hear the person breaking in and kidnapping our son!” Violet slaps Isadora for being so stupid. “How could you be so stupid? How would you not know when someone breaks into your house? Eddie means everything to me, and now he’s gone.” Violet slumps down the wall shaking with tears. “How could you blame me for what happens! I’m not the person they want to pay! You are! Duncan left the note and you know it! Was I the person who married him and then left him to be with his triplet! No it wasn’t! It was you! So don’t even blame me for something you did!” Isadora screams in rage. “Oh yeah? Maybe you’ve forgotten: Was it I who was taking a shower when she should have been watching over her friend’s baby? Was it I who had no sense to take a shower before she left? Was it I who should have just taken a bath instead of a shower at her friend’s house so she could hear what’s happening? No. It was you. So before you come in here blaming me for what I did, maybe you should be thinking of what you did. You’re just as responsible as I am.” Both Violet and Isadora are pissed off at each other. Quigley now arrives at home since he just heard the terrible news. “I just heard what happened. Why does this sort of thing keep happening?” Quigley is so worried about Eddie; he doesn’t notice that Violet and Isadora are shooting evil glares at each other. Now Quigley is rambling on and on about what happened.
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Post by shiningkira on Mar 6, 2004 13:55:37 GMT -5
Here's the rest: “What did the note say?” Quigley asks. Isadora promptly replies. “The note says: ‘If you ever want to see your little boy Eddie again, Violet must come alone to 667 Dark Avenue’s penthouse apartment. You must also bring 50,000 dollars by Friday. Signed by You Know Who. P. S. - If you bring Quigley or Isadora, you all shall be killed. And that’s a promise.’ ” When Isadora is through, Quigley just stands there, stunned at what the note says.
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Post by ŘỠßëřŦ on Mar 6, 2004 14:57:21 GMT -5
OMG, JS came sooo close. I think i'll go with Dupin. And Dupin, I got the idea from you because I had writer's block. And I'll give you recognishin on the fanfic. ;D
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Mar 6, 2004 14:59:37 GMT -5
Yay! I win! Thanks!
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Post by shiningkira on Mar 6, 2004 16:22:10 GMT -5
At least I was close
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Mar 6, 2004 17:00:03 GMT -5
There there, your entry rocked!
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Post by shiningkira on Mar 6, 2004 17:11:17 GMT -5
You are a very nice person. Thanks!! At least my article didn't suck!! ;D ;D
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