Snicketfaerie
Reptile Researcher
Don't Mess With The Snicketfaerie!
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Post by Snicketfaerie on Oct 21, 2006 10:55:54 GMT -5
That was a very good story you should writ it down and get if published. I know what you mean. I'm a writer and I use a book and choose characters whose relationship isn't out there. It is very creative. I did the same thing with Cedric Diggory and a girl named Jennifer ( but a different way just your point of it but differently). I've done 2 books already. It was my life to finish that book and I'm entering it in book contest.
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Post by Amy Lee ALOE Aunt Jo on Oct 21, 2006 17:33:18 GMT -5
*clears throat* evil!Klaus!
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Post by Semesther, the Dolphin Vampire on Oct 22, 2006 11:25:06 GMT -5
Not too evil.
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Post by Spymaster E on Oct 22, 2006 12:49:22 GMT -5
You could try evil!Duncan. Like Quigley saves Violet from a crazed Duncan.
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Post by Amy Lee ALOE Aunt Jo on Oct 22, 2006 20:29:44 GMT -5
For that see...
Never mind, haven't posted it yet.
EDIT: *clears throat* For that, see my story "Only Love." It's got evil!Duncan and Quiglet!!!!!
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Post by Shelly on Oct 23, 2006 1:50:51 GMT -5
I'm taking Quiglet songfic requests.
Bring it on!
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Post by orphansrgreat on Oct 23, 2006 11:52:41 GMT -5
How about A ummm. . . Ducan Brainwashes Sunny and she tries to kill Quigley and Violet UNHYPNOTIZES Sunny!
Amy Lee can you think of a song?
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Post by Amy Lee ALOE Aunt Jo on Oct 23, 2006 15:12:42 GMT -5
Oh, yeah, I know plenty of songs that could work with that idea! Well, I have an song idea, but it won't work with orphansrgreat's idea. It's "B.Y.O.B." by System Of A Down. It's almost heavy metal, by the way.
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Post by Shelly on Oct 23, 2006 17:18:29 GMT -5
Thanks, I'll get right on it! But it might not be up for a few days, I'm a little occupied . . .
Keep 'em coming!
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Post by Amy Lee ALOE Aunt Jo on Oct 23, 2006 17:27:17 GMT -5
Heck yeah!
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Post by Shelly on Oct 25, 2006 2:10:30 GMT -5
Okay, this is "B.Y.O.B." by System of a Down. The lyrics have swearing. It's Violet/Klaus prior, but this story - it's Quiglet. And evil Klaus.
WHY DO THEY ALWAYS SEND THE POOR! The music was blaring out of the CD player as Klaus sat back on the couch and had another beer.
Barbarisms by Barbaras With pointed heels. Victorious, victories kneel. For brand new spankin' deals. Marching forward hypocritic And hypnotic computers. You depend on our protection
The door slammed open and Klaus jumped. Violet and Quigley dashed in, talking and hadn't spotted him yet, but had noticed the CD player.
"Well, it's not our concern that he's escap-"
They froze in their tracks, having spotted him.
"Hiya sis. Bro-in-law." Klaus said coldly.
Yet you feed us lies from the table cloth. Everybody’s going to the party have a real good time. Dancing in the desert blowing up the sunshine.
They looked at each other for what seemed like a long, long time.
"Get out," Violet whispered in a frosty voice.
"Heeeyyy! If you wanted to chill, have a beer. Or even better," he added, his voice turning bitter. "Or even better, not have turned me over to the authorities."
Kneeling roses disappearing, Into Moses’ dry mouth, Breaking into Fort Knox, Stealing our intentions, Hangars sitting dripped in oil, Crying FREEDOM!
The CD player continued to blare, but no one paid attention to it.
Klaus got to his feet, and pulled out the axe from under the couch.
"Violet, stay back!" Quigley screeched as Klaus approached.
A shadow passed over Klaus' face as he got closer . . . and closer.
Handed to obsoletion, Still you feed us lies from the table cloth. Everybody’s going to the party have a real good time. Dancing in the desert blowing up the sunshine.
"You had to turn me over, didn't you!" Klaus shrieked. "Only because I did what I did!"
Violet flinched. She knew what Klaus was talking about - the time he had raped her.
Blast off, it's party time, And we don't live in a fascist nation, Blast off, it's party time, And where the potato are you?
"All I wanted was a little fun! And you," he snarled, turning to Quigley. "You, got in the way."
Violet passed out at this point and heard no more.
Why don’t presidents fight the war? Why do they always send the poor?
Handed to obsoletion, Still you feed us lies from the tablecloth. Everybody’s going to the party have a real good time. Dancing in the desert blowing up the sunshine.
Violet woke up in what looked like a hospital room. A nurse was standing over her.
"Your heart went out of wack, dear."
Violet asked panickly, "Where's Quigley?"
The nurse shot a dark look at the doctor who came in.
"He's dead. Cranioectomy." Klaus had chopped off Quigley's HEAD?
Where the potato are you!
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Post by Semesther, the Dolphin Vampire on Oct 25, 2006 21:08:11 GMT -5
whoooooooa! very well written. I still don't like the evil Kluas idea. He raped his sister?!
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Post by Amy Lee ALOE Aunt Jo on Oct 26, 2006 16:04:16 GMT -5
OH MY GOTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!That was better than I expected. Way beter! Oooooh, I'm getting chills.
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Post by Shelly on Oct 26, 2006 16:53:49 GMT -5
Thank you, thank you. *bows*
And I'm making a banner for this thread.
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Post by Amy Lee ALOE Aunt Jo on Oct 27, 2006 8:28:09 GMT -5
I'm not even gonna include a prelude to these any more. "Underneath Your Clothes" by Shakira EDIT: Never mind. That link doesn't work. I'll change it later.
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