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Post by Addieor on Jun 12, 2004 16:24:03 GMT -5
DUN DUN DUN!!! It's Tragamba! This takes place at the Christmas sleepover at Tragedy's house. I'll be using 667 usernames. Enjoy......
Lauren combed her hair , then fastened it with a clip. " So, Mamba, what game are we going to play?" Clem asked. " Something girly, of course." Mamba answered. "
"We already did makeovers. Thanks to me, you all now look gorgeous." Swans said.
" As if we weren't before?" Annabelle asked. (Violet B)
" Gahhh........lets watch a movie. That's what the boys are doind in the other room. " Clem said.
" I'll go heat popcorn. I always do. " Mamba headed for the kitchen.
" That's 'cause were too lazy to get up" Annabelle giggled.
Mamba closed the door, then realized that she didn't know where the Bob the kitchen was. She didn't dare try to find out herself. She could very well get lost in the large house of Tragedy ( Now reffered to as Tragedy).
She knocked on the Boys' room. Skalu answered. "Yeah?"
" Where is the smurf is the Kitchen. I was going to go and heat some popcorn."Mamba asked, rollin her eyes.
" I'll show her." Tragedy got up and headed toward the door. He and Mamba went down one corridor.
" WHY are you wearing just boxers? " Mamba asked, just realizing. " Do you sleep in those?"
" Naw. I sleep naked." Tragedy smiled.
' So didn't need to hear that." Mamba changed the subject. " You could very welll get lost in this castle of yours, ya know."
" Ya. I remember being little and running around in my pajamas, lost. "Tragedy chuckled.
Mamba smiled. Tragedy in his pajamas
" What are you smileing about?" Tragedy asked.
" Nothing. Just imagining you running around in your pajamas. Bet they had Bambi on them. "
" No. But I did have a pair with Winnie the Pooh..But you don't have to worry about my pajamas anymore, 'cause I sleep na-"
" Here we are. The kitchen!" Mamba interrupted. She noticed that when with Trag, everything led back to nakedness.
"Here's popcorn."Tragedy handed her a packetof popcorn. " Here's the microwave" He pointed. She put them packet in the micro wave. " Hre's a kiss" Tragedy said and gave her kiss.
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Post by Hermedy on Jun 13, 2004 10:41:05 GMT -5
Thank you. It's nice to see a story I can read without flinching after every sentence.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Jun 13, 2004 11:47:13 GMT -5
I thought it was a good story, but you need to describe things a bit better. Instead of just 'Clem said'
Or describing between speech how they were moving, or what they were thinking. That's important, and you missed it at some oppurtune placed.
But well done-I enjoyed what I read.
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Post by Addieor on Jun 13, 2004 23:31:35 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments! I'll try, Dupin.
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It was a lively kiss, not a quick peck. Open mouthed , too. Mamba was speachless. Of course, even if she had speech, she could speak, as of Tragedy's mouth on her's. She broke away Tragedy and grabbed the popcorn bag, which, by then, was done and ran out of the kitchen, grbbing a bowl as she did. "Lauren, wait!" But Mamba had already gone up the stairs.
She managed to find her way back that time. But for the rest of the evening, she was a bit more quiet and kept to herself.
Later, when they were brushing their hair, Swans asked Mamba, undertone," Anything wrong? You seemed a bit quiet when you got back from the kitchen. "
"Nothing's wrong. I'm fine. Just a bit tired. "Mamba lied. Then she hurried out, with Swans staring skeptically after her.
As she crawled into her bed that night, she thought about the even in the kitchen. Did it mean anything? Did Tragedy like her? Like-like her? She smiled, remebering when they would talk about Like-liking. Her mind drifted to other things, but little did she know that in a little while someone would be sneaking in the girls' room........
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"Gah. NOW what do we do?" BSam groaned. "
We've watched already like, 5 movies AND play 20 video games. What else can we do?" James rolled his eyes.
" And the point of a sleepover is to NOT sleep." Sergio pointed out.
" Well......we COULD play a game. I've heard my sister playing it with her friends at her sleepovers." Tragedy said slyly.
" You want us to play a sissy game? That's wack. " James said.
" It's called........Truth or Dare." Tragedy revealed.
" Well, lets try it. Tragedy, Truth or Dare?" Sergio asked.
Tragedy went over his few , few option then decided on Truth.
"Boo!" The guys jeered.
"Alright, alright. I do both."
" Sure? Okay. Here's the Truth question: Of all the girls in the room next door, who do you like the best?" Sergi said with a mischevious smile. '
" Well, I've gotta say Mamba. She's pretty hot. " Tragedy confessed.
" Okay. Now here's the Dare part. I dare you to get in bede with Mamba. " Sergio said.
" WHAAATT?! My parents wouldn't be very cool with that. They want me to wait till I'm married and settled......" Tragedy exploded.
" Naw, man. Not like that. You just sneak in the room and get in her bed, then sneak out. A plant a kiss or something on you way out. " Sergio explained.
" Do iT! Do it!" The other guys chanted.
" Alright. But, if ANY trouble, it is so your fault. Deal?" Tragedy agreed.
" Sure, man. Just chill and do the dare. "
" Alright, then. Here I go. " Tragedy took a deep breath and left the room.
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Post by Addieor on Jun 13, 2004 23:38:27 GMT -5
And if I am on your banned list, Trag, would you please put Anya in Italics?
Vat did evverrryvon think zee storrry so farrrr? I hope you all enjoy eet!
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Post by aqueousmartini on Jun 13, 2004 23:40:35 GMT -5
Whoa... *raises eyebrows* Just kidding. It's good, your writing style is very easy to read. BUMP!
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Post by Addieor on Jun 13, 2004 23:42:33 GMT -5
Zank you! Ozzer people must review or else I shall roasssssst zem eeen a pot and feed zem to my Gators....
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Post by negativenine on Jun 13, 2004 23:44:28 GMT -5
Cute. ^____________^ I like it!
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Post by Hermedy on Jun 14, 2004 9:57:50 GMT -5
That second part was whack. But good. Good job. I've read stuff much worse (not style-wise, but content-wise).
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Post by MambaduMal on Jun 14, 2004 11:10:06 GMT -5
He's going to WHAT?! Hehe, kidding. I really am enjoying this... write more!
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Post by Addieor on Jun 14, 2004 13:18:44 GMT -5
He's not going to do aneetheeng Pheeseecall. And, you suggested see Trusth orrr Darrre , Trag.
............. Tragedy closed the door. WHAT was he thinking? Suggesting Truth or Dare? He should have never listened in on his sister's sleepovers. They always got him in trouble. He COULD just walk a bit then go back and say he had done it........Naw, the guys are expecting to hear something on the other side of the wall. He'd tell Mamba about it later. She'd understand. But, after that kiss in kitchen, what would she think?
He opened the girls' room door with great caution and closed it again. It would be hard to know whose bed was whose. He approached a bed and laid his hand on the side, trying to see who it was.
"*snore* Queen of 667.......*snore* Queen..........world... .....rule ...........*snore* ........ Kill Tragedy........* Swans voice mumbled.
" Kill Tragedy?! What the...........I'll have to watch my back." Tragedy noted.
He spotted a bit of blonde hair on another bed. " BSam........BSam........" She mumbled.
Guess Lauren still has feeling for BSam......, Tragedy thought with a pang. He tugged at one cover and put his left leg . Then, he slowly lifted his right leg, when,
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed. It wasn't Mamba's voice. It was
SMACK!!!
Trish's fist collided with Tragedy's mouth and lower nose. Ouch!Tragedy thought. Trish sure has a hard punch. He hurried out of the room before the
"LIGHTS ON!" Pandora's voice shuted. Bright light filtered the room. Tragedy kept running and he grabbed the boys' room handle and collided with Sergio.
" *gasp* Swans ........queen*gasp* Trish . ....blonde*gasp* Mamba blonde*gasp* "He sputtered out.
"Man....chill. What happened? " Sergio said. Zach gave him a glass of water. ]
"Thanks..........Mamba is blonde. Trish is a bit BLONDE. I confused them and Trish gave me a HARD PUNCH. She sure has protection" Tragedy, now okay, explained.
"Oh, yeah. BSam.....Trish was talking about you in her sleep. " Tragedy said.
" Well.........." BSam said with a smile.
" So, technically, you haven't ompleted the Dare, huh?" Dark said.
" You'e kidding man! I'm not going back in there!"
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Post by Addieor on Jun 14, 2004 13:21:02 GMT -5
Be nice Tragedy. Or next, I'll have zee girls give you a makeoverrrr And, I'm sure Swans will have some ideas for you."
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Post by SlightlyMad on Jun 14, 2004 13:21:10 GMT -5
So is Clem. I am blonde.XD
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Post by Addieor on Jun 14, 2004 13:25:13 GMT -5
You are? I always thought you were a brunette.
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Post by SlightlyMad on Jun 14, 2004 13:34:39 GMT -5
*Buzz* Wrong anwer! I look like Mamba actually.
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