Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Jul 21, 2004 16:04:42 GMT -5
This story is insane...I mean that in a very good way.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 21, 2004 21:29:13 GMT -5
"I can really help you, I brought my comnplace book along with me. By the way, what is happening?" said Tocuna. They were walking down a sidewalk heading toward the hospital. "I have found valubal information on the Grim Grotto. It is an anagram for Mirg Orottg. That is located in Atlanta. There is a lake located in the middle of Atlanta, that transports underwater to what is known to be Hazy Harbor. Benith the hazy harbor is what is known as Mirg Orottg.!" said Snicket. "Where do you get your information?" asked Tocuna. A man, who was walking the opisote direction of them, stopped in front of the small group. "Me! Jaques Coustou! There are 1.2.8 million fish in the water. I zuddy all of zem!"
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Post by Celinra on Jul 22, 2004 9:05:53 GMT -5
I like the random appearance of Jacques Costeau, it amused me. I like the story so far, keep up the good work!
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Post by Snicket on Jul 22, 2004 21:14:11 GMT -5
Coustou will make an appearance again later. ____________________________________________ "Get lost freak!" shouted Andrew. "Who ziz youz callzing a zeak! You a ze freak! I zave been to zour website!" asked Jacques. "My website? Feakshow6.deviantart.com?" "Zep!" answered Jacques. " Oh... Just get lost!" said Andrew. "Wait! What have you done gone out of your mind? I mean it is very weird that we ARE meeting the famous marine biologist who just happened to die in the 1970's but we NEED HIM! Snicket, if we are going to find the grotto, we need a marine biologist to give us diving instructions! Hasen't it ever gotton through your mind that we need somebody who knows alot about Archiantes Gigantis, Artitutis Duex, and Megalondon Marcardian!" screamed Tocuna in a mega outrage. "Tocuna, you need to stop reading information off the internet!" said Snicket. "LOL! Ditto, )-:" said Tocuna. "Hold the phone, that was so Cool! How did you do that smily thing?" asked Andrew. "I picked it up from my Uncle." said Tocuna. "Zoze ziz meanz I zan help?" asked Jacques. "Nope!" they said all together.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 22, 2004 21:33:50 GMT -5
New Poster! The Matrix
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Likes: 113
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Post by Antenora on Jul 22, 2004 21:40:07 GMT -5
Nice poster, and nice fic. I was wondering how one can speak a smiley. I guess the sad one -- :-( -- is pronounced "colon, hyphen, open parenthesis."
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Post by Snicket on Jul 22, 2004 22:18:38 GMT -5
First Star Wars reference. Who's Line fans, you need to read the next part of the story I post! _______________________________ Jaques walked away and then, all of a sudden, the world seemed to go black with darkness. A large green glowing flying saucer landed right in front of the hospital. A great white light flashed in front of them. The next thing they all knew, they were inside. There was a large bridge leading from one side of the spaceship, to the other side. Below them, was infinate space. Andrew started to run across the bridge, followed by Snicket and Tocuna. Them suddenly, the section of the bridge, Tocuna and Snicket was standing on collasped and they fell. Andrew, had not fallen, he didn't pay attention at all. He kept running and then, right in front of him (yes another random appearence) appeared Darth Vader. "Andrew, I am your father." said Darth Vader. "No! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You are not!" yelled Andrew. "Yes I am!" "No your not!" "Yes I am!" "No your not!" "Yes I am!" "No your not!" "Look Andrew! Yes I am! See, I brought my camera crew. I am a big budget filmaker now!" said Darth Vader. He pulled off the Darth Vader mask he was wearing. "Dad, your embarrasing me!" said Andrew. "Oh well, goodbye." Andrew's dad then pulled our a lightsaber and choped the section of bridge Andrew was standing in, in half. He then fell into infinate space.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 23, 2004 14:41:01 GMT -5
Here is what happens next on my list: When they get to Atlanta, they end up in a super market (Any guesses what the name of the supermarket is?). Swans, Tradgedy, and several others are introduced and then Snicket only has 5 days. On the fourth day, they all meet up and discuss what they are going to do. On day 3 hey dive down into the ocean and encounter a submarine, people, a mechanical octopus, and a house buried in a grotto. They stay in the house. On day two, someone discovers they are there. There is a big fight. The sugar bowl is finally found and they return. The sugarbowl hides the secret to VFD.
------------------------------------------------------------- Andrew was falling, falling, and falling. Then suddenly, he hit somthing. Everything went white and then a few seconds later, he woke up and saw where he was. He was sitting in some bleachers next to Tocuna and Snicket. In front of him was a TV studio and he realized where he was. He was at a filming for Whoose Line Is It Anyway?. "Oh, hi Andrew. You just missed the good part, Ryan was Carol Channing, who's head kept sticking to stuff. Well, let's just say that somehow, he broke the light on Drew's Desk." said Tocuna. "But what are we doing on a spaceship?" asked Andrew. "Oh, don't worry. See Who's Line has special space editions sometimes. Wayne Brady old us before the show that the ship was heading to Atlanta." said Snicket. "Oh yeah, we got Colin Mochires' autograph" said Tocuna.
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Luigi
Bewildered Beginner
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Post by Luigi on Jul 23, 2004 21:27:31 GMT -5
More, I say, more!
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Post by Snicket on Jul 23, 2004 22:10:07 GMT -5
I want to ask you all something, What is the best part of my story? So far? What makes you want to read this? Just critisim I would like. By the way, I will be gone for the weekend so I will not be posting for a while.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 23, 2004 22:40:23 GMT -5
The joke about NBC came to me just recently. It was after I watched an episod of Who's Line where Drew said to Wayne "You better be glad you're not on NBC!"
_______________________________________ "You what!" asked Andrew. "I always wanted to get Ryan Stile's autograph! Geez!" The rest of the story for now is boring. They spent the night on the spaceship. They arrived in Atlanta Georgia. Drew Carry, it turned out, was the pilot of the spaceship. He accidentally dropped Tocuna, Snicket, and Andrew out of the spaceship, along with Wayn, Ryan, Colin, and Greg Proops. They were falling, falling, falling, they were falling alot. Suddenly, a window on top of a building was seen by Tocuna. "Hey there is a window on top of that percuriously large estate of a building!" she called. Duh. Suddenly, they crashed through the window. Where were they? They were in Wal Mart. The percuriously large entertainment section of Wal Mart. Many people who are reading this may be quite proplexed about that. Someone, let's call this person X walked up to the groop of Who's Line Cast and said, "Do you want to trade over to NBC?" "Sure!" the cast said. "NO! Not all of you! Just the Brady guy!" said X. "Cool! I'm going to NBC!" said Wayne.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 25, 2004 16:04:34 GMT -5
Okay, I am back.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 26, 2004 22:55:46 GMT -5
Big Announcement! Everybody I was shocked the other day at an idea I had. Everybody misses a 667 story, which I can't remember the name of, that ws written as a tv sitcom. I am planning to bring back that idea and use all of you guys. I have currently put an estimate that the first episode will debute January of next year. Different formats of the show are currently in work. I am close to finishing this story too guys.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 27, 2004 0:04:51 GMT -5
Day 5 ____________ Snicket, Tocuna, and Andrew walked over toward the video game section of the entertainment section. They noticed something weird when they saw a fish playing a video game. The fish looked weird. Andrew, at once realized who it was. "Tiller that is you!" Andrew called. "Ahhh! Get away from me 667er! I am just a fish! I didn't kill Swans I swear! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" He obviosly ran, or swam, off. "Whoah. That was very awkward." said Tocuna, "Hey he dropped his gameboy. Hey! He was playing Yu-Gi-Oh the Video Game!". Tocuna ran over and started to play the game. Andrew and Snicket walked over to the computer section and saw a girl. There was one girl over in the computer section and she was busy typing away on a computer.
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Post by ~SPIN on Jul 27, 2004 0:13:44 GMT -5
The freakiest thing just happened! I just read the part when the phone rang and then I heared a very faint ringging of a phone! It was just my dads cell phone but I don't know! Hey Snicket, I like the "No! I'm giving yu 7 freak'n days to find what VFD stands for." It's so very, well, Snicket like.
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