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Post by s on Sept 22, 2005 16:29:58 GMT -5
Yes, excellent. I liked this chapter a lot.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Sept 22, 2005 17:49:21 GMT -5
Very good chapter; I like the flashbacks.
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Post by Charles Vane on Sept 22, 2005 20:10:54 GMT -5
Great chapter.
Have you gotten the DVDs yet? I have things to tell you.
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Post by champ103 on Sept 23, 2005 11:33:29 GMT -5
No DVD's yet, I'm still getting the money by selling old Gamecube games.
Thanks for the good replies everyone! (: Volume Four is in two parts-both the parts are as long as a regular chapter, so they'll be posted as if they were volumes 4 + 5.
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Post by PJ on Sept 24, 2005 0:32:23 GMT -5
Nice bit, though Erin/Dante is kinda weird.
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Post by champ103 on Sept 29, 2005 11:01:31 GMT -5
Whilst 'Volume Four' is still being written, here's a little volume guide to pass the time:
volume one-Aftermath-A MICHAEL VOLUME
volume two-Crumble-AN ANNELISE VOLUME
volume three-Pyromania-A MARC VOLUME
volume four-Observence (Part One)-A PANDORA VOLUME
volume five-Observence (Part Two)-AN AKBAR VOLUME
volume six-TBA-A LUIS VOLUME
volume seven-Phonebook-A BELLA VOLUME
volume eight-Secrets-A ROBERT VOLUME
volume nine-Evaluations-A PHILIP VOLUME
volume ten-Diagnosis-A J VOLUME
volume eleven--A KIMIA VOLUME
volume twelve-Shade-AN ERIN VOLUME
volume thirteen-Rid-A CHAR VOLUME
volume fourteen-Sunset-A SAM VOLUME
volume fifteen-Investigations-A MICHAEL VOLUME
volume sixteen-Velocity-A JAMES VOLUME
volume seventeen-Luck-AN AMBER VOLUME
volume eighteen-Nevermore-AN ANNELISE VOLUME
volume nineteen-Recollections-A DANTE VOLUME
volume twenty-Floating-A DERIK VOLUME
volume twenty-one-Danger-AN EVERYONE EPISODE
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Post by Charles Vane on Sept 29, 2005 14:58:37 GMT -5
Yay the Pandora one is next! If you're still working on it does that mean it will be super long? That would be cool.
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Post by champ103 on Sept 30, 2005 11:19:11 GMT -5
It's going to be a normal length I think-but you're a big character in Part Two as well, just that it's from Akbar's point of veiw, and he'll be having his flashbacks and whatnot then.
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Post by Charles Vane on Sept 30, 2005 13:13:00 GMT -5
Akbar is evil.
..I think..
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Post by champ103 on Oct 1, 2005 3:10:52 GMT -5
Whilst Akbar's not evil, one of the survivors is.
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Post by Charles Vane on Oct 1, 2005 9:46:04 GMT -5
I think its Akbar.. if Akbar is who I think he is.
And ohhh, mystery. I'll have to see all of the characters more before I guess which one is evil but going off other 667 stories the odds are it's either me, James, or Dante.
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Post by champ103 on Oct 1, 2005 10:51:20 GMT -5
Several of the characters aren't a mirror in any way of 'Lost' characters. Akbar is one of them, and so's James (thought I guess he could be like Jin) and some more people.
I'm not sure if I mentioned this, but one of the survivors will be dead before the twenty-first chapter finishes.
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Post by Charles Vane on Oct 1, 2005 14:14:44 GMT -5
Fine then. Akbar seemed like the marshall.
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Post by champ103 on Oct 1, 2005 15:34:12 GMT -5
I thought that's what you're getting at.
But-
1-your character isn't or never has been arrested 2-he's almost fully recovered in the next chapter.
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Post by Charles Vane on Oct 1, 2005 17:04:47 GMT -5
You're explaining this like I knew it already. I thought I was the Kate character but I didn't know if you made her different. I still hate the marshall with a passion.
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