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Post by jayK on Dec 3, 2004 11:04:05 GMT -5
Because he has a crush on you... Because of that you fancy Kimia in the story and one day you dig up her grave and do something to her Dead body:P
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Post by SlightlyMad on Dec 3, 2004 11:20:51 GMT -5
For want of a better answer...no! Are you perhaps thinking of ennuyeux? That's French for boring. It's pronounced on-wee-a, just about. Ennui (pronounced on-wee) means boredom, loosely, but it's much stronger. It's untranslatable really...a sort of crushing, soul-destroying tedium. Rather like Geography lessons. And ennuye (with an acute accent on the last e) pronounced on-wee-ay, is in fact the French for Bored... Interesting fact: since we're name-swapping, my sister's called Clementine. Do you pronounce yourself Clementyne or Clementeen? My sister's Clementeen. PS If you know French, I sound extremely patronising. Oh well... Clementyne. But teachers call me Clementeen for a unfathomable reason. The only french I can do is.. Salut! Je' mapples Clementine. J'ai onze ans. Mon anniversaire c'est le dix-huit mars. Dans ma trousse il y a une regle rose et un stylo noir. Je suis habite en angleterre. Not much., eh? *Curses year 7 french*
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Post by odh on Dec 3, 2004 13:09:48 GMT -5
James looked similar and George looked similar to James, but that was because they all were distant relatives, as discovered by them almost 5 years ago now. Ew. Incestuous thoughts... Jay showed Aimee a CD that had been in his pocket. Aimee: Cool! that was fast. Jay smiled. Crush... EDIT: Because of that you fancy Kimia in the story and one day you dig up her grave and do something to her Dead body:P EW. Necro!James/Kimia is NOT good! James/Kimia at ALL is not good period.
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Post by jayK on Dec 3, 2004 13:34:00 GMT -5
neither is Aimee/Jay
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Post by Pucca on Dec 4, 2004 10:34:29 GMT -5
Because of that you fancy Kimia in the story and one day you dig up her grave and do something to her Dead body:P Wuthering Heights comes to mind.
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Post by jayK on Dec 4, 2004 10:37:28 GMT -5
Chapter 2 is coming tommorow.. I would do it now but I have no idea's
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Post by no-one on Dec 4, 2004 18:36:30 GMT -5
Necro!James/Kimia is NOT good! sounds interesting to me and why am I not in this?
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Post by jayK on Dec 5, 2004 6:36:22 GMT -5
2: The Day Of The Death (Flashback: December 1st 2004)
Aimme and Kimia had just got back from school that Wednesday and they were both wearing crow hats that they had purchased at Sainsbury's. They were at Kimia's house on the PC.
Aimee: Yay! Theme Day! Kimia: Crows! Aimee: Lets go buy a pet crow! Kimia: I wanna! Aimee: Now Now! We'll both Go. Kimia: Lets log into MSN first. Check emails. Aimee: Hurry Up!
Kimia logs in and James trys to start a conversation with her. James: Hi, gorgeous. Kimia: EWW!
Aimme grabs the mouse and blocks James. Hurry up and get these emails checked.
Kimia: Ooh! A coupon for a free crow. Aimme: Print It! Kimia: OK!
Kimia prints the coupon and pulls on her coat. Aimme puts her coat on and they leave the house and start walking to the pet shop.
Pet shop owner: Can I help you young ladies? Aimme flashed the coupon at him and he smiled. He went into a back room for a few seconds. He came back out with 7 large crows. Kimia: We only want one! Aimee: Shut up you moron! The man hands over the crows in exchange for the coupon.
On the way home Kimia takes 4 crows to her house and Aimme takes 3.
Kimia's Journey:
Kimia walked the lonely road. The only road she'd ever knows. Her shadow was the only one who walked besides her. She turned onto her street and walked into... James! Kimai: Get lost! James: You blocked me! Kimia: So what? James: Die!
James took out a crow of his own and sunk it's teeth into Kimia's neck. When Kimia was dead he shoved the crow over her head and walked off laughing.
Aimee's Journey:
Later that night Aimee got a call. She recognised the caller as Kimia's Mother. Aimee: Hello K Mother: Hi Aimme: Why Isn't Kimia Online? K Mother: She's dead Aimme began shaking. So violently that she accidently hung up.
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Post by champ103 on Dec 5, 2004 8:55:45 GMT -5
Clementyne. But teachers call me Clementeen for a unfathomable reason. The only french I can do is.. Salut! Je' mapples Clementine. J'ai onze ans. Mon anniversaire c'est le dix-huit mars. Dans ma trousse il y a une regle rose et un stylo noir. Je suis habite en angleterre. Not much., eh? *Curses year 7 french* Bonjour Clemintine! Je'mapples George et jai' onze ans. J'habit avec ma mere, Amanda, mon frere, Charlie et ma seour, Phoebe. Tu? Ca va? Mon grands-pere mort ): Mon grands-pere s'appelle Peter. Tu? (pulling a charlotte in french) Anyway, I like it, but it could do with improving, and writing half of it in script format is a bit wierd, and doesn't describe feelings/actions etc.
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Post by Ennui on Dec 5, 2004 9:04:58 GMT -5
To be frank, I don't really like it at all. I think it's rather immature that you made James the murderer purely because he teased you. And now you've revealed who did it, and for such a trivial reason, it's even more pointless.
Pointless. Rather like school exams. That reminds me, when I was revising Miliutin's Army Reforms, I came across a chap called Stolypin you hanged so many peasants the gallows were called Stolypin's neckties. Quite amusing.
I don't normally wear neckties myself...
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Post by jayK on Dec 5, 2004 9:05:10 GMT -5
Anyway, I like it, but it could do with improving, and writing half of it in script format is a bit wierd, and doesn't describe feelings/actions etc. The Germany one is Done is script form.......... edit: chapter 3 on Wednesday edit 2: I just noticed chapter one is called the Meeting in Manchester and chapter two is called the Day of the Death so they go "word" Alliteration "word(s)" Alliteration I din't do it purely because of that... And there wasn't a "murdered" because evryone suspects the crow... The story just goes on and a few people (who are cool which is why you don't know what will happen because you don't qualify to get one) have been given plot outlines and they know what will happen anyway
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Post by SlightlyMad on Dec 5, 2004 13:20:19 GMT -5
Bonjour Clemintine! Je'mapples George et jai' onze ans. J'habit avec ma mere, Amanda, mon frere, Charlie et ma seour, Phoebe. Tu? Ca va? Mon grands-pere mort ): Mon grands-pere s'appelle Peter. Tu? (pulling a charlotte in french) Anyway, I like it, but it could do with improving, and writing half of it in script format is a bit wierd, and doesn't describe feelings/actions etc. Connie et ma seour et Georgie. Mon grands-pere et grandes-mere mort. Ca-va?
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Post by champ103 on Dec 5, 2004 13:46:15 GMT -5
Ca va bein merci. Et tu?
Anyway, giving away the murderer was a bit of a silly idea, and the scripting is a little...simple:
Kimai: Get lost! James: You blocked me! Kimia: So what? James: Die!
The German one writes the script well.
No suspense, no reasoning other then she blocked him..
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Post by Pucca on Dec 6, 2004 14:49:24 GMT -5
My name isn't AIMME, it's Aimee.
Anyway, it actually made me laugh that James killed Kimia because she blocked him. How life-like.
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