Post by champ103 on Apr 10, 2005 5:48:59 GMT -5
The other thread won't let me reply, so I've made this one. The results should be in later today, where Kimia will reveal the three contestants with the least votes. From there, the judges will vote to save ONE of them, and the contestants must decide between the bottom two.
Here are the teams:
TEAM BSAM
Le Grey Intellectual
VFD Australian Member A
Amber
TEAM HIKORI
Jack-Jack
OrangeyTwixet
Ennui
TEAM MAMBA
Soidanae
PJ
Pheonix
Send in your votes by PMing Kimia with the name of the contestant you want to keep in:
The contestants for you to vote from are:
PJ
really cool member Speak
In our modern society, we have almost reached our peak,
But a few problems still exist, for instance, leet-speak.
So please follow these rules, lest you be flamed.
These god awful n00bs must be properly tamed!
“Like this” is written “like this”, you fools, not lyk dis,
Do it right and we’ll (jokes!) give you a kiss!
Exclamation marks are exclamation marks, stupid, not ones,
Do it properly, or you’ll be flamed! (as hot as 1000 burning suns)
I (the pronoun) is written large. BIG, idiot, not small,
Whilst words after full stops are written in capitals! (TALL)
It’s really not that hard to say “the” instead of “teh”,
And to those who disagree, I simply say: Bluh!*
Know you write as know, not N and an O,
I swear, you n00bs really are all slow.
Why, as in, “Why do you really, really care?”
Is written “Why” (not y), also, don’t swear.
Don’t write “probly”, write probably, you imbecile,
Or I shall hurl at your head a heavy red tile!
And now, something really important for you:
This word might sound odd, for you it is new,
“Punctuation”! It’s really quite fun!
And that is the way for it to be done!
Now leave me alone, you’ll get an extra plus,
So goodbye, ciao, All your Base are Belong to us!
VFD AUSTRLIAN MEMBER A
The Storm
By A
Clouds gathering,
Dark Storm Clouds of despair
Darkening skies and numbing minds
Sweeping through the land
Drops splashing in puddles on the ground
Sliding down dampened skin
Forming droplets as they fall
Small, insignificant water droplets
Falling.
Spiralling out of control
Suspended for Eternity
Stuck in between
40 days and 40 nights.
Thunder, lightning
Bellowing and striking,
Flashing in angry eyes.
Slowly fading away
Replaced by deafening silence.
And Calm.
Rainbow in the sky
Red and Orange and Pink and Green,
A covenant, a promise
The silver lining of the clouds
The sun comes out,
The clouds disappear,
A promise and a smile.
“I’ll never make you cry.”
“Never again shall I hurt you.”
AMBER
What did you expect?
Just another teen angst poem?
To read details of knifes.
Slashing through flesh
And then about blood.
And how it runs down my wrists.
I think not.
This is appreciation for what I’ve got
Gratitude.
It’s what makes the World go round.
Not literally.
But people who talk of mental anguish.
You may be upset.
But…
The whole world isn’t against you.
People aren’t gossiping about you.
They probably do understand.
What?
Do you want to feel alone?
Paranoid?
Misunderstood?
No.
You say you don’t.
You do really.
You want the attention.
Just think, there is someone who is worse off than you.
What did you expect?
Just another teen angst poem?
I think not.
SOIDANAE
Dreams.
She dreams
red, yellow orange
lick her feet the
cobblestones melt in
liquid ecstasy she trods as
around her come the flames and higher
higher higher higher rises the conflagration
a smile is born upon her lips
flames licking, stroking, caressing wooden buildings that
collapse into the warm embrace
passion invades the city at last
spurring all too life and
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
sitting against the wall on the floor
above the floor upon the grime the dirt the muck
waste never to be removed it strokes her
and against her back the wall is false
a facade
with holes seen
revealing the truth and a sunless day bright
with the light of the moon
she dreams
she dreams
the flight the running
with safety all around she sprints
running running
not caring where or to or from but just to run
for the unrestrained freedom she leaps and rises and rises
never falling
never failing
ever flying, ever flying soaring into the sunset to freedom to life
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
against the window the hole in the wall
ratty ragged meaninglessly open to the world
the hole unholy corrupting the light
with the dirt with the muck with the grime
the wafting smell of waste of perfume of haughtiness in slime
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
the sun upon her back a child on the ground
with the tool
upon her palm in her hand against the soil
freeing saving making growing
lives in her control and there
she stays the sweat upon her back
glistens the heat is much but not too great
for work to cease
as she farms the freedom the life the worth
and she dreams
always dreams
the sun steals in
through the hole the hole revealing
her body curled in on itself
and no breath to move it
yet smiles in the air and one upon her face amongst the thriving boiling
living floor hiding worse much worse
she smiles
she smiles
she smiles
she smiles free.
LE GREY INTELLECTUAL
Rush
Hurry, hurry ! Time to rush
Stop your arguments , shut up, hush!
Rushing hurrying - 'tis life indeed
Stop?Think? Why? No need
Hurry ,hurry time flies fast
Soon you'll be dead, a silent piece of the past
It's all about the future, our brilliant tomorrow
No time to dwell on neeedless sorrow
Iraq?Bush?Afghanistan?Oil?
No time for that now, hurry, leave your mark in the soil
Hurry lest we get a reqard for living so fast
Quickly becoming a piece of that boring old past
ORANGEY TWIXET
Breathe
Don't breathe
You killed the innocent child
So merciless,
Uncaring
You murdered the innocent child,
A child so helpless,
Defenseless
How could you have no sympathy?
How could you be so selfish?
Where will we be now,
Without our loving child?
Our child that is
Hope, love, and liberty?
Breathe
How does it feel to breathe an innocent child's breath?
JACK-JACK
Red Flame
Hear the evil in the air
Smell the smoke from everywhere.
See the anger in its eye
Watch it burn, watch it fry.
I dare not go too near
Because my life will be full of fear.
In the darkness it does creep
Never stops, never sleeps.
Eats on cole and eats on wood
See that horrid red-hot hood.
Burns and burns for evermore
Like a battle, like a war!
See a fire in the sky
That red flame...never dies.
ENNUI IS AWAY
PHEONIX failed to post a poem.
You can still vote for the last two.
Good luck to all!
Here are the teams:
TEAM BSAM
Amber
TEAM HIKORI
Ennui
TEAM MAMBA
PJ
Pheonix
Send in your votes by PMing Kimia with the name of the contestant you want to keep in:
The contestants for you to vote from are:
PJ
really cool member Speak
In our modern society, we have almost reached our peak,
But a few problems still exist, for instance, leet-speak.
So please follow these rules, lest you be flamed.
These god awful n00bs must be properly tamed!
“Like this” is written “like this”, you fools, not lyk dis,
Do it right and we’ll (jokes!) give you a kiss!
Exclamation marks are exclamation marks, stupid, not ones,
Do it properly, or you’ll be flamed! (as hot as 1000 burning suns)
I (the pronoun) is written large. BIG, idiot, not small,
Whilst words after full stops are written in capitals! (TALL)
It’s really not that hard to say “the” instead of “teh”,
And to those who disagree, I simply say: Bluh!*
Know you write as know, not N and an O,
I swear, you n00bs really are all slow.
Why, as in, “Why do you really, really care?”
Is written “Why” (not y), also, don’t swear.
Don’t write “probly”, write probably, you imbecile,
Or I shall hurl at your head a heavy red tile!
And now, something really important for you:
This word might sound odd, for you it is new,
“Punctuation”! It’s really quite fun!
And that is the way for it to be done!
Now leave me alone, you’ll get an extra plus,
So goodbye, ciao, All your Base are Belong to us!
VFD AUSTRLIAN MEMBER A
The Storm
By A
Clouds gathering,
Dark Storm Clouds of despair
Darkening skies and numbing minds
Sweeping through the land
Drops splashing in puddles on the ground
Sliding down dampened skin
Forming droplets as they fall
Small, insignificant water droplets
Falling.
Spiralling out of control
Suspended for Eternity
Stuck in between
40 days and 40 nights.
Thunder, lightning
Bellowing and striking,
Flashing in angry eyes.
Slowly fading away
Replaced by deafening silence.
And Calm.
Rainbow in the sky
Red and Orange and Pink and Green,
A covenant, a promise
The silver lining of the clouds
The sun comes out,
The clouds disappear,
A promise and a smile.
“I’ll never make you cry.”
“Never again shall I hurt you.”
AMBER
What did you expect?
Just another teen angst poem?
To read details of knifes.
Slashing through flesh
And then about blood.
And how it runs down my wrists.
I think not.
This is appreciation for what I’ve got
Gratitude.
It’s what makes the World go round.
Not literally.
But people who talk of mental anguish.
You may be upset.
But…
The whole world isn’t against you.
People aren’t gossiping about you.
They probably do understand.
What?
Do you want to feel alone?
Paranoid?
Misunderstood?
No.
You say you don’t.
You do really.
You want the attention.
Just think, there is someone who is worse off than you.
What did you expect?
Just another teen angst poem?
I think not.
SOIDANAE
Dreams.
She dreams
red, yellow orange
lick her feet the
cobblestones melt in
liquid ecstasy she trods as
around her come the flames and higher
higher higher higher rises the conflagration
a smile is born upon her lips
flames licking, stroking, caressing wooden buildings that
collapse into the warm embrace
passion invades the city at last
spurring all too life and
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
sitting against the wall on the floor
above the floor upon the grime the dirt the muck
waste never to be removed it strokes her
and against her back the wall is false
a facade
with holes seen
revealing the truth and a sunless day bright
with the light of the moon
she dreams
she dreams
the flight the running
with safety all around she sprints
running running
not caring where or to or from but just to run
for the unrestrained freedom she leaps and rises and rises
never falling
never failing
ever flying, ever flying soaring into the sunset to freedom to life
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
against the window the hole in the wall
ratty ragged meaninglessly open to the world
the hole unholy corrupting the light
with the dirt with the muck with the grime
the wafting smell of waste of perfume of haughtiness in slime
she dreams
she dreams
she dreams
the sun upon her back a child on the ground
with the tool
upon her palm in her hand against the soil
freeing saving making growing
lives in her control and there
she stays the sweat upon her back
glistens the heat is much but not too great
for work to cease
as she farms the freedom the life the worth
and she dreams
always dreams
the sun steals in
through the hole the hole revealing
her body curled in on itself
and no breath to move it
yet smiles in the air and one upon her face amongst the thriving boiling
living floor hiding worse much worse
she smiles
she smiles
she smiles
she smiles free.
LE GREY INTELLECTUAL
Rush
Hurry, hurry ! Time to rush
Stop your arguments , shut up, hush!
Rushing hurrying - 'tis life indeed
Stop?Think? Why? No need
Hurry ,hurry time flies fast
Soon you'll be dead, a silent piece of the past
It's all about the future, our brilliant tomorrow
No time to dwell on neeedless sorrow
Iraq?Bush?Afghanistan?Oil?
No time for that now, hurry, leave your mark in the soil
Hurry lest we get a reqard for living so fast
Quickly becoming a piece of that boring old past
ORANGEY TWIXET
Breathe
Don't breathe
You killed the innocent child
So merciless,
Uncaring
You murdered the innocent child,
A child so helpless,
Defenseless
How could you have no sympathy?
How could you be so selfish?
Where will we be now,
Without our loving child?
Our child that is
Hope, love, and liberty?
Breathe
How does it feel to breathe an innocent child's breath?
JACK-JACK
Red Flame
Hear the evil in the air
Smell the smoke from everywhere.
See the anger in its eye
Watch it burn, watch it fry.
I dare not go too near
Because my life will be full of fear.
In the darkness it does creep
Never stops, never sleeps.
Eats on cole and eats on wood
See that horrid red-hot hood.
Burns and burns for evermore
Like a battle, like a war!
See a fire in the sky
That red flame...never dies.
ENNUI IS AWAY
PHEONIX failed to post a poem.
You can still vote for the last two.
Good luck to all!
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