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Post by BSam on Jan 11, 2007 5:04:14 GMT -5
SHOUT!
in one of my trivia games on yahoo that means 'i bagsy goes next' so i'm gonna write the next bit, it should be up in 24 hours, depending on when i sleep...
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Post by A. the Returned on Jan 11, 2007 5:34:06 GMT -5
Very nice Peej. Ooh Sammy's writing next, *waits*
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Post by Edwin on Jan 11, 2007 13:06:09 GMT -5
I think I'll print this all out a then horrify everyone at school. This really should be a book with an introduction to the cruel world of ADR.
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Post by BSam on Jan 11, 2007 16:35:26 GMT -5
Whilst browsing through the Archives of 667 she came across the tale of a young man who had been banned many months ago, he was a gothic chap, lived in a strange eastern european country, he seemed a likely ally for what she had planned. After a few PM exchanges, she made arrangements for an instrumental travel montage.
::Scenes of Bella packing her bags, piloting aircraft, overhead fast travel shots of citys, oceans, forests, mountains, lava pits, the garden of eden, you get the idea...::
Stepping out of the aircraft as the electropop subsided, she approached a nearby village. She made her way to the Inn, which seemed like the best place to ask for directions, dispite the large number of poor people within.
"Ooh arr, You look like you be not from these parts" The snaggletoothed Innkeeper said. "That is correct, I am here looking for someone, do you know this boy?" Reaching into her pockets and removing a photograph of a young boy in a cape. "Arrr, you'd be after the dark forboding castle overlooking the village then. But i warn you, he don't look so much like that no more, their kind aren't like us. They just aren't like us." Bella turned to start tramping up the small mountain to the castle to find most of the patrons of the Inns in a crowd around her and the Innkeeper. Wide eyes, and moans, begs, pleads. "Please Miss, you don't want to be going up there, strange happenings are afoot" "We lost our youngest when he strayed too close to that castle. He was only five!" Bella punched the lady closest to her, the one who had lost her five year old child, and made her way out of the Inn, the crowd starting to disperse at this sign of violence.
Upon leaving the Inn she glanced up at the ominous looking mountain, "I'm not walking that" she thought to herself, however there was a young girl nearby with a bicycle. "Get off the bike" she said. The girl just stared at her. "Get off the bike!" suddenly Bella drew a gun. "STEP AWAY FROM THE BIKE!" The girl finally did as asked, "and take your stupid mask" she added, giving the girl her mask and proceeding to ride up the large mountain.
*** This boy is sure to help me This help will be fantastic The forums will no longer Treat me like a spastic
It's ultimate revenge time Soon there will be silence I'll find the ones who hurt me and offer them some violence
When i ride to the top to the top to the top When i reach the top of the mountain.
***
Meanwhile, Edwin, 667 forum member, vampire hunter, and all round good looking guy, was also on his way to the castle. He had an entirely diferent purpose to that of Bella however. He also had more up to date information on the small boy in the castle. He knew, for example, that the small boy had grown unnaturally older and was now a young man, say late twentys, and had a propensity towards the killing of children and the sucking of their blood. Unaware of the simultaneous advancement towards the front door of the castle by Bella, Edwin was climbing towards the back door, he would rather not have his approach known by the vampirre within.
*** There are things within this world Things of fairyland Some of them are good and kind Some have evil planned
My job is to rid the world Of those who would conspire With evil in their hearts Tonight, I kill vampire
When i climb to the top to the top to the top When i reach the top of the mountain.
***
Bella had reached the front door halfway through Edwins chorus and rang the ominous sounding bell. A tall dashing looking man answered, and when shows the picture by Bella, he ushered her inside. "Yes, that is me, but I am a lot older now, I know why you are here, would you care you care to discuss it over food, or drink?" Everyone knows haw charming vampires can be when they want to, and Bella was completely taken in.
*** This pretty little girl really has no clue I'll help you with your plan, young girl and then i feast on you.
I hear a young man climbing up Looking for a fight another village child? I will eat well tonight
When he get's to the top to the top to the top When he reaches the top of the mountain.
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They were plotting their first assault upon the forum members of 667, when Edwin finally made his way into the castle, into the dining room, into the room where someone would die tonight.
"Dracula" he began, "I have come to- Bella? What on earth are you doing here?" "This child is here because some people have wronged her, I will help to put things right." Dracula (for it was he all along) replyed. Bella hugged up against Dracula, "Please, what is going on?" "Bella, I am Edwin, 667 forum member, vampire hunter, and all round good looking guy. The man you are currently snuggling is a vamp-" "You're a 667 forum member?" Bella interjected. "Yes," said Edwin, "but i must kill this vampire, he doesn't belong in this world" and he leapt forward, plunging his homemade stake into the heart of the vampire. "You are safe now Bella, go home, you could probably use some rest right now." He turned to go. "Safe? what do you know of safe. You are one of the ones who ruined my life at 667, now you have killed the man i love. I don't feel safe at all, in fact, i feel very dangerous..." Reaching for a fork and knife, she jumped Edwin, grabbed his head and inserted the eating implements into his eyes. The twisting his neck until she was sure he was dead, she returned to crying over the dust of the vampire she loved. "I'll get you 667," she muttered to herself, tears streaming down her face. "You've gone too far, just too, too far..."
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Post by BSam on Jan 11, 2007 16:38:46 GMT -5
authors notes on this Part 3 of 667 Hell: ADR's Revenge it's early morning, so hopefully it makes sense it started with musical number in the first part when it get's to the final chorus you can imagine all three protagonists singing together, however as bella is already in the castle at that point it won't make too much sense edwin wanted it like this so i hope he's happy
i do actually like adr, but i like a good story too, so shush
edit: also, who's up next, shout out!
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Post by cold on Jan 11, 2007 16:45:13 GMT -5
You're good; oh yes you are.
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Post by BSam on Jan 11, 2007 16:49:17 GMT -5
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Post by thistledown on Jan 11, 2007 17:59:29 GMT -5
lol. I just read this all--very hilarious! And so nicely written! *grins devillishly* Edwin is such a dashing character. And Bella--well Bella is nutsy coo coo...
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Post by idiotj on Jan 11, 2007 20:00:35 GMT -5
DIBS ON THE NEXT
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Post by s on Jan 11, 2007 20:22:14 GMT -5
OMGWTF Alice's song was wonderful.
And this line: "he had tripped, and fallen onto some bullets" made me laugh from PJ's part.
AHAHAHAHA you wrote Edwin in.
I love all three of you.
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Post by Dear Dairy on Jan 11, 2007 21:20:56 GMT -5
After a few PM exchanges, she made arrangements for an instrumental travel montage.Stepping out of the aircraft as the electropop subsided . . . I nearly wet my pants laughing!!! The song lyrics and style reminded me of the Les Miz Act I finale. I could imagine them singing each verse solo, then all together in counterpoint. Pure genius! PJ, your contribution was wonderful, too; especially the plans for Gigi's demise and, of course, the "falling on bullets" line. Encore! Encore!
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Post by katekor on Jan 11, 2007 22:47:00 GMT -5
Sam! I loved it!!! Especially the "STEP AWAY FROM THE BIKE" part. I always love your stories Sam More, MORE! How'd it get burned?! How'd it get burrnnnned?! HOW'D IT GET BURRRRNED?!??!!
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Post by A. the Returned on Jan 12, 2007 6:02:38 GMT -5
Very nice, sammy. I'll be busy for the next few days but I promise I'll contribute soon.
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Post by Gigi on Jan 12, 2007 9:11:21 GMT -5
I'm beginning to feel that my impending doom is near.
I love what you guys have written so far!
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Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Jan 12, 2007 10:47:22 GMT -5
Sam and Alice and PJ win. This is amazing!
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