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Post by Vacuum Pot on Apr 10, 2008 17:45:36 GMT -5
at this point the best thing to write would be using the available characters (outlined in the above post) and have something spooky happen to them, or possibly a violent death of some sort mrwho; i dunno, the house is creepy, maybe it's hidden you away breifly How rude! I'd much rather hide myself away on my own.
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Post by BSam on Apr 10, 2008 17:46:31 GMT -5
you are atthe houses mercy
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Post by Vacuum Pot on Apr 10, 2008 17:49:44 GMT -5
you are atthe houses mercy How rude! I'd much rather be at my own mercy.
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Post by BSam on Apr 10, 2008 17:58:33 GMT -5
how do you think the house feels about your consant bickering?
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Post by Dear Dairy on Apr 10, 2008 18:18:39 GMT -5
Wow. It's so exciting to see my name in lights part of the story in print.
Well done, everyone! Can't wait to read what happens next.
And I'd love a banner. Thank you. Can I use the one you're using?
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Post by BSam on Apr 10, 2008 18:23:39 GMT -5
but that's mine i'll make a few today or tomorow probably also you may have noticed i changed yours slightly dairy, to fit the story a bit better, hope you don't mind, just the room and the kids name,the room atthe start of the story doesn't crop up for alittle whilet
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Post by Dear Dairy on Apr 10, 2008 18:27:28 GMT -5
also you may have noticed i changed yours slightly dairy, to fit the story a bit better, hope you don't mind, just the room and the kids name,the room atthe start of the story doesn't crop up for alittle whilet Hey, no, that's great. Keep up the good work!
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Post by PJ on Apr 11, 2008 0:31:04 GMT -5
Why couldn't Peej and Jay see me at the end of the hallway after I had fallen backwards in it? I thought the room was wider than the hallway - you were in the room, checking out the cupboard while we were coming down the hallway. Like, the hallway widens out at the end, so you'd still be hidden if you were standing off to the side of the room. Which you were. For those who wrote - well done.
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Post by BSam on Apr 12, 2008 18:34:45 GMT -5
Part 8 by violet.
P-A-T-H-E-T-I-C Violet thought- dumb debate plan she had. Putting the picket sign down, she looked into the distance-a house was barely a speck in the fog. Zipping up her Aiden jacket, she walked back, and halfway home she passed a phone booth- those were practically exitinct. Swiftly picking it up and dialing the cab station, she saw a few scarlet spots on the side of the phone booth- not paint. It looked different, like blood maybe...she didn't mind blood, but if it was on a phone booth...there could've been a crime scene or fight here. Whatever- she just shrugged it away when someone answered. They were hissing something that she couldn't here...Is this turning into some corny horror move? she wondered- the way the hissing sounded. Hanging up, she tried to open the booth-tried to, that is. Finally she tried kicking- it workied, but formed a cut on her ankle. Stepping out and wiping off some blood, she tried to think of what the person on the phone was saying...an address. The only house was the house (now closer in the distance). The house number was the same number she heard on the ohine..ignoring it, she walked away...right on the celler door of the house, creating a noise that one inside the house might hear.
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Post by BSam on Apr 12, 2008 18:37:45 GMT -5
the current usable cast is PJ - Maverick Reporter MrWho - Confused kid who doesn't know how he got there Willis - Survivor of what is left of the Teem Squad, a scooby gang type group. Pandora - Other survivor of what is left of the Teem Squad, a scooby gang type group. Sixteen - Suicidal teenager violet - just fell in the cellar no more new people entering the house. we have over 8 now. any more and it just gets convoluted feel free to write again guys, this is awesome so far.
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Post by Charles Vane on Apr 12, 2008 22:42:21 GMT -5
This is awesome so far.
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Post by Sora on Apr 14, 2008 4:38:50 GMT -5
Is there a waiting list because I'd love to contribute. This is George Washington beautiful so far.
GW = d-amn? Uh?
Reason for Editing: Who the hell organized the censorship on this site?
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Post by BSam on Apr 14, 2008 6:00:11 GMT -5
write whatever and PM it to me.
on the off chance i have a few at once i can sort them to make the most sense (or edit slightly if nessesary)
just try not to add any new people anymore. we have a decent cast. i'm sorry if (anyone) isn't in it
i'd love for you or anyone else to write, sora.
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Post by BSam on Apr 16, 2008 8:26:50 GMT -5
Part 9. by Songbird
The basement smelled of decay, urine, and excrement. Gigi was not at all pleased, but was very creeped out. The lights were not working, so she had to feel the wall in order to successfully navigate her way down the stairs. Each step down meant another inch or so away from the dim light surrounding the door frame. She could feel that the wallpaper was peeling and rotting. As she stepped down again, she braced herself against the wall, only to find that her hand did not grasp a firm supportive surface. The substance was mushy, and wriggling. Gigi fished a lighter out of her pocket, and was horrified when it was lit. "MAGGOTS!!!!!' She exclaimed, as she lost her footing and tumbled into the darkness of the basement.
When she woke up, there was a girl staring at her. "Um, are you okay? And ...where are we?" Gigi was grateful for her help as she made it onto her feet. "I have no idea, but how did you get here?" "I fell, into the cellar." "You don't have a flashlight do you?" asked Gigi. "No." "Great, the lighter won't last us much longer." Violet explained she would help Gigi find her friend Dairy, but wanted to find a way out. Suddenly, a gravely voice errupted from what seemed to be a speaker protruding from the wall. "You will never be able to escape... I'm watching you. "
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Post by Songbird on Apr 18, 2008 13:27:10 GMT -5
Somebody should write something
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