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Post by BSam on Jul 2, 2007 15:54:53 GMT -5
The tale of Harry Potter rapidly draws to a close, he has left Hogwarts, found a steady wizarding job, and is engaged to be married in the spring, however he is nervous about the wedding day, or more specifically the wedding night, he just hopes his bride to be won't laugh too much when she sees his other scar.
Reason for Editing: To place entry in category A
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Post by Libitina on Jul 2, 2007 16:20:44 GMT -5
Category A.
With Voldemort dead and a questionable future lying in front of him, Harry Potter grimaced as he looked down at his wrist and realized his problems would never end, despite his efforts--for the result of all his wand-flicking was there staring at him; a carpal tunnel surgery scar.
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Post by Spymaster E on Jul 3, 2007 13:46:35 GMT -5
Catigory A.
This was quite a perdicament. He had a new scar to cause him pain from now on. God, how HArry hated his life.
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Post by BSam on Jul 3, 2007 14:37:03 GMT -5
Catigory A. This was quite a perdicament. He had a new scar to cause him pain from now on. God, how HArry hated his life. failed
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Post by Dear Dairy on Jul 3, 2007 18:12:55 GMT -5
'Fraid so. Please read the rules, James, and try again.
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ellipsed...
Reptile Researcher
welcome to the sick pony nation
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Post by ellipsed... on Jul 5, 2007 12:39:29 GMT -5
Woah, haven't been here in ages. Ever since the book came out, I've just sort of stopped.
Anyways, this is for category B.
(okay, this isn't part of it, but in the last chapter my sentence is in, Harry returns to the Burrow to celebrate with the survivors, with Hermione and Ron with the Weasleys, the Order, Grangers, Petunia, etc.)
"As Harry opened the door, a warming sensation entered his stomach. He was home, and the war was over- for good. Lord Voldemort was gone for real this time, not even his horcruxes could save him from his fate, which was worse than death. When Mrs. Weasley saw Harry, she opened her arms for a hug, yet she stopped. "Mrs. Weasley, what's wrong?" said Harry, but he already knew the answer, for Mrs. Weasley did the famous look at face, to his forehead. "Harry", said Mrs. Weasley, "Where's your scar!"
Reason for Editing: Bolding the official sentence, since I wrote a paragraph basically.
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Post by BSam on Jul 5, 2007 15:27:19 GMT -5
Harry Potter looked at his wife and smiled, then looked at their newborn child, "He looks just like you, Harry," she told him, "right down to the matching scar."
Reason for Editing: To place entry in category B
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nikolas
Bewildered Beginner
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Post by nikolas on Jul 5, 2007 23:42:33 GMT -5
Topic B:
Harry fell back, tears in his eyes, his heart pounding and his head throbbing as he looked at what Voldemort had done, then, he picked up Gryffindor's sword, as Voldemorts menacing laughs rang through his ears, and thrust it through his own heart, the final Horcrux, gasping in pain, and rushed over to Ginny's dead body, kissing her forehead, as her smooth red hair fell over his burning scar.
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nikolas
Bewildered Beginner
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Post by nikolas on Jul 5, 2007 23:53:26 GMT -5
Topic A:
Voldemort screamed in rage, raised his wand, killing the remaining group of Death Eaters, his only hope of defeating Harry and his friends, as he realized that no one had saved him a peice of the chocolate cake that was shaped like a scar.
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Post by jemima on Jul 6, 2007 18:08:11 GMT -5
Category A:
Scar scar scar, scar scar scar, scar scar, as car, scar.
Category B:
Snape and Harry both knew that in the end, both half-blood princes, shared the same scar.
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Post by Hanna Squalor on Jul 6, 2007 21:04:22 GMT -5
A:
And Harry hoped with all his heart that removing the tattoo wouldn't scar.
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Post by Alice Wilde on Jul 6, 2007 23:45:50 GMT -5
A:
"Too bad that the books didn't end with the word scar."
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Post by Dear Dairy on Jul 7, 2007 9:55:24 GMT -5
I have revised the rules somewhat, in view of recent events. Please go back to the first post and note that (A) Entries no longer have to end with the word scar, but still must be one (and only one) complete sentence; (B) You may now enter as many times as you wish, but may only win one prize.
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Post by Sora on Jul 8, 2007 3:25:38 GMT -5
I was about to post something on that. Kind of loses the anti-climaxism, but if it makes it better, all the more props to Jo.
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Post by idiotj on Jul 8, 2007 12:59:01 GMT -5
Category A:
"Sell it on ebay," Hermione instructed as Ron carved off the piece of Harry's forehead that contained the scar.
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