|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 11, 2024 15:13:00 GMT -5
Only if it's somewhere more conventional than "Sirin's stomach" I will only participate in stomach related rounds.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 11, 2024 15:06:26 GMT -5
I cannot overstate how tasty those burgers were.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 10, 2024 14:43:40 GMT -5
who?
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 8, 2024 14:54:18 GMT -5
Tea & Biscuits
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 8, 2024 2:57:16 GMT -5
wind
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 7, 2024 1:56:31 GMT -5
Beatrice and Rasmussen discuss the complexity of memory and how experiences can change our understanding of reality. Unreliable narrators, Jean. Now, don't go mad with this, but, those peoples who have undergone the experiments have altered perceptions of reality, and therefore see things in an altered state to those who have not. I'm not saying that this can explain away inconsistencies in joining the dots of the story, but that it explains some of the more abtract moments as being only one persons interpreation. For example - the ship was not, in reality, sailing on a sea of stars. It was the infecteds interpretation of, well, something different.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 7, 2024 1:51:03 GMT -5
In the submarine, Fernald already has hook hands. So therein lies the rub - I HAVE made an error. Fernald should not had had hooks in that earlier moment on the submarine, or he should not have lost his hands until the end of the latest chapter at any rate. I got confused somewhere along the way. Ah well, it's a minor thing in the grand scheme. Techinically i could retcon the story to say that he had hooks already, and hes just lost those when the beast attatcke,d but thats not as narratively cohesive as I would like. I imagine I will fix it in editing at any rate. So to clarify for your assistance - all the sub scenes with fiona and fernald take place before they are captured by doctor r.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 6, 2024 14:33:11 GMT -5
Ah, I see.
The basis of most of this theory is unfortuantely inaccurate, though entirely correct based on the information you currently have. In a few chapters you'll know what I mean.
However, just becasue the spine is incorrect, a lot of the details are not.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 5, 2024 13:05:20 GMT -5
Similarly, Fernald must have lost his hands around the same time as the events involving Beatrice. Why is that? I'm interested where you are getting that infromation from as, well, it's not what I am intending. I may well have slipped up somewhere. As usual, Jean, your theories are fascinating. You have got a lot of things correct, but even more wrong. But it is heartneing to see how much you are in the right place.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 4, 2024 14:39:44 GMT -5
At some point I do need to go through and give me rankings on the foods. at some point.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 4, 2024 2:25:25 GMT -5
vworp vworp
|
|
|
bitter
Apr 4, 2024 1:24:07 GMT -5
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 4, 2024 1:24:07 GMT -5
I don't feel like tea has a massively stimulating caffine affect. I can drink some before I go to sleep without a problem.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 4, 2024 1:09:55 GMT -5
Eat Daniel Handler
|
|
|
bitter
Apr 1, 2024 14:53:08 GMT -5
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 1, 2024 14:53:08 GMT -5
I like bitter things
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Apr 1, 2024 11:39:34 GMT -5
I am fully aware that what I am writing if of an extreme elngth, and that most people are not reading, so to clarify for the more general (i.e not Jean Lucios) among you.... this is, essentially, an orgiional novel. The links to ASOUE are tenuous at best, but it has a flavour of the word, and some of the details. But there is more that doesn't match that does, and that will change considerably when I am finished and this is put into it's published form. So, I will continue to write and post it here, but I am amore focussing on my intended audience (i.e, one who will have the full novel to hand and can read in one go) rather than the current (those who have to wait weeks between chapters and will therefore forget a lot of the small details).
But hey. It's good, i feel. Plus, i'm over 60,000 words now, which has got to be some kind of record for this site.
(and another 19 chapters to go...)
|
|