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Post by DetectiveDupin on Sept 27, 2003 15:01:52 GMT -5
y not
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Post by Tyler on Sept 27, 2003 15:04:04 GMT -5
It would be better to post the story in the fiction area. Besides, wouldn't you have to type it all over again?
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Sept 27, 2003 15:13:33 GMT -5
Yeah but I could copy and Paste
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Post by Tyler on Sept 27, 2003 15:16:56 GMT -5
*Sighs* If you insist, but then I'd have to get rid of this thread.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Sept 27, 2003 15:20:40 GMT -5
Fine, u win. I just thought it sounded like a cool idea. Did u get rid of Whose C0ming back poll?
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Post by Tyler on Sept 27, 2003 15:22:04 GMT -5
Wha? I've never seen a poll here...
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Sept 28, 2003 14:33:41 GMT -5
Not here!!!!! But in The Crisis Concludes, you moved my poll. I suppose it was 4 the best, becsue every1 knows It was Carmelita.
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Post by Tyler on Sept 28, 2003 19:51:48 GMT -5
I didn't move it. *shrugs*
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Sept 29, 2003 10:07:56 GMT -5
Someone did. Anyway, I saw it in Awfully Ancient Archives. I guess it isn't nessecary anymore.......
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 24, 2003 3:06:58 GMT -5
Chapter 4
Collete twited her body immensly, a word which here means "a lot in order to stop herself from falling and to hang onto the rocks" She stopped and Klaus stretched out one arm, screaming. He clutched the contorcinist leg of Collete and he sighed in relief as his fall came to an end. "Get off me!" cried Klaus's former co-worker, shaking her leg, but Klaus stayed on. "Keep me alive!" he whimpered. "No!" Colleet said," I work for Olaf, and we have to kill you!" Klaus knew why Collete wanted to work for Olaf-she was please he treated her normal. "He's a nice guy," Klaus said sarcastically," Leaving you behind, trying and succeeding sometimes in murderering innocent people!" Collete sighed and started crying softly. "I guess working for Count Olaf isn't all its worked up to be," She said. She had stopped trying to get Klaus off anf pulled him up to another rock, where he could hold on himself," I haven't worn a costume-or been on stage. Just kidnapped an innocent baby on a mountian range. I guess I joined because he excused me from being a freak-he treated me normally." "I bet you must have felt horrible in the House Of Freaks," Klaus said," I know I did, and I was only there for two days." "And you weren't an actual freak," Collete pointed out," Now lets get down." "You can always join me," Klaus said with a smaile as he began to climb," To help Violet and Sunny, and once that happens you can join us anyway." "You-you'd let me?" Collete checked. "Of course!" Klaus said," I would and I know my sisters would." "I wasn't ever mean to Sunny on Mount Fraught," Collete said," If you want to know." "Don't worry," Klaus said. They arrived at the cold, snowy ground, where the calm Stricken Stream was the only moving thing in sight. They began walking along until Collete said: "How do we find your sisters in this huge mountain range?" "Two ways," Klaus said, and put his hand in his pocket. He pulled out a notebook, and read from it. That even the weariest river winds up somewhere safe to sea
he read. "So, thei're going to sea," Collete said. "Maybe," Klaus agreed," And the second thing," He pulled out a long green tube," A verdant Flammable Device." "I thought it was a ciggerete," Collete giggled," Let me guess, the smoke." "Thats right," Klaus confirmed and held it up to the rays of sun sparkling of the rocks. The Verdant Flammable Device heated up and Klaus puffed it. He began coughing and dropped the green tube on the ground. A huge puff of green smoke flew out into the sky, and so everyone, and not all Klaus expected could see where he was.
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Post by cwm3 on Oct 25, 2003 6:13:41 GMT -5
Oooh, this is very gooooooooood.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 25, 2003 7:57:10 GMT -5
A couple more replies and I'll do Chapter 5
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Post by sunsun on Oct 25, 2003 10:38:51 GMT -5
yeah that is pretty sweet
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 26, 2003 16:31:45 GMT -5
Chapter 5 Klaus looked at Collete who looked right back at him. "Do we just wait here?" Collete asked and Klaus shrugged. "I suppose," he replied," Until someone comes. Thsi smoke should gather everyones attention." "Its certianly very cold in the mountian's," Collete said, shivering," I'm not used to this sort of heat." "We'll be out of here soon," Klaus said, and Collete nodded. "Yeah," she agreed," We'll be out of here soon." Out of the wallowing green smoke there was a black shadow of a tall man. Klaus walked back, not recognzing the man. Collete didn't either and held her arms in front of her. But Klaus recognized him soon enough. "J-j-jaques," he said coldly. "Klaus," Jaques said," I found you." He walked closer bu Klaus wlaked back. "Y-y-oure d-dea-d!" he cried," How did you live?" "Your questions will be answered," Jaques said," I promise. But its not safe here, not at all. We need to get to hotel dunemennt." "Who is this, Klaus," Collete aksed and Klaus replied: "Jaques Snicket," he said quietly," I thought you were dead. I saw your dead body!" "Gross," Collete commented. "I know you did," Jaques said. "Where are Violet and Sunny?" Klaus asked. "You'll find out soon enough," Jaques said and walked over, putting a hand on Klaus' shoulder. "I dont believe your alive!" Klaus said," What is V.F.D? How are you alive. Who else is in V.F.D.?" "You'll fine out soon," Jaques confirmed," We need too get away from here. Now follow me." Jaques led the way into the green smoke, Klaus and Collete walked nervously behind. They didn't know what to expect at all. Klaus didn't know what was going on. Jaques was alive? It semed weird. He had seen the pale face of Jaques-the morning he was announced dead. He was told he would find out the answers soon thought and thats what he hoped. They arrived to a large automobile not far after they began their walk. As Klaus walked there, he gapsed, Collete with him. Violet was there-but she wasn't smiling at him. She wasn't frowning either. She was bound and gagged in the back seat-Sunny beside her. Klaus looked up and Jaques who was beggining to cry. "Jaques...." he began. "Sorry," Jaques replied. "Whats going on?" Klaus asked and he felt something against his shoulder. Something sharp. A hook. He turned to see the hook-handed man, smiling evily. "Huh?" Klaus asked and Olaf came next the him, his eyes shining brightly as if he were going to tell a joke. A joke is something with a funny punchline, something that is not true but althought Olaf looked like he was going to tell a joke, Klaus knew he wasn't. "Get in the car, orphan!" Olaf yelled, and Klaus shook his head," And you Collete! Helping him?" "Yes!" Collete shouted, but couldn't continue. Olaf quickly gagged her, tied her up and pushed her into the passenger seat. "Now you," he said to Klaus. Klaus felt the gag around his mouth-the rope around his legs and hands. He felt scared as he was pushed into teh back of Olafs car. He looked at his sisters next to him as the doors slammed. "Your lives are over, orphans," the hook-handed man sneered and started the car. He was sitting it the drivers seat. There was a thump as the boot shut, and as the children looked back they could see that it was Jacques who was in it. Kluaus began crying. He wanted to scream. All the hook-handed man had to do was drive them into a wall to kill them. The only nice thing he could see was his sister who was smiling hopefully. He looked at her in question. Violet-her hands tied up-reached into her pocket and pulled out a sharp bread knife that might be good enough for escaping........
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 27, 2003 5:14:29 GMT -5
I made that bit back there a bit longer by the way.
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