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Post by Lady Michelina on Sept 28, 2003 10:02:02 GMT -5
Ok this is MY version of Book the 13th which is a little different then the other books. We have old characters coming back, new ones moving in...I think you will find it interesting: So after I get one reply , I will post Chapter 1 ... you know just to make sure someone is actually reading it
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Post by MambaduMal on Sept 28, 2003 10:03:47 GMT -5
*starts singing at the top of her lungs just to let everyone know she's listening*
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Post by Tyler on Sept 28, 2003 10:19:16 GMT -5
*Bursts in laughter*
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Post by Lady Michelina on Sept 28, 2003 10:22:06 GMT -5
lol ; wonderful voice you have...
ok here is chapter 1:
One stormy night, a young 13 year old girl Jessica Goldstein lay on her bed, her copies of the Unfortunate Event books spread out on her unmade bed.
She listened to the sound of rain hitting the glass of her window as she flipped through The Unauthorized Autobiography looking desparately for clues.
The young girl pushed her long wavy golden brown hair ot of her eyes and sighed.
"I wish I could help them" she whispererd to herself quietly staring @ a drawing of the Baudelaire orphans she had printed off her computer and was now hanging on her wall.
Jessica sighed once more as she got out of bed and turned off her bedroom lights. She flopped onto the bed, not bothering to remove her books and fell asleep.
And a very uneasy sleep it was. Jessica could here something moving outside her window, but she didnt dare to open it to see what it was exactly.
So she closed her eyes again but almost insantly opened them. She could here something moving on her left ; Someone or something was in the room with her. Then she saw a man with a shiny silver hook acting as his left hand reaching out towards her. Jessica opened her mouth to scream but the man it her over the head with one of her books and Jessica knew no more.
Okie dokie that was the first chapter. I know it was short but I had to end it like that ...
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Post by Tyler on Sept 28, 2003 10:25:09 GMT -5
Ow... That must have hurt... Very good. I want to know what happens. *sits in suspense*
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Post by Lady Michelina on Sept 28, 2003 10:54:30 GMT -5
You make me wait in suspense..I make you wait in suspense here you go: Jessica awoke to a cold but large damp room. She found herself on the floor and as she loked around she realized she was in a hotel room. She stretched as she sat up on the floor. Just then teh door creaked open and the hook handed man walked in carrying a breakfeast tray with difficulty. Jessica gasped. "Lucafont!" she said aloud unintentionally and the hook handed man chuckled evily and stared at Jessica for a few moments. then without warning he screamed at teh top of his lungs "OLAF!" "No!" Jessica yelled , panicking. "No-not Olaf, what did I ever do to you?" The man just merrily chuckled again as the door burst open and a tall, thin and scrawny man advanced on the two. "You idiot" he snarled at the hook handed man. "I told you not to call me Olaf, there are still some volunteers here and if they find out that -" The villainous man stopped in his tracks and looked at Jessica as though he just realized she was there. "You've managed to catch us another pretty one" said the hook handed man gesturing one of his hooks in Jessica's direction. Olaf grinned. "So I have" he said , his yellow teeth breaking out into a cruel smile. "What do you want from me?" said Jessica looking from one villain to the other. "Name and age." said Count Olaf, ignoring Jessica's words. "J-Jessica Goldstein - 13" she sstammered. Olaf stared at her for a few minutes then smiled. "Come!" he barked at the hook handed man like he was a dog. "But-arent we going to tie her up - put her in a cage or something?" the hook handed man said looking at Olaf quizzically. "No," said Olaf. "Not yet." And the two men left leaving Jessica all alone in the world with no one there to care for her or help her. Ok Im posting the rest after someone replies to this one and then yeah...
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Post by Tyler on Sept 28, 2003 10:56:34 GMT -5
... Ergh! Very good!
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Post by Lady Michelina on Sept 28, 2003 11:06:07 GMT -5
lol thank you ;D Im not going to be writing more for a while so I'll guess Ill give you a little preview of chapter 3 :
That night , Jessica sat on the hotel rooms' balcony and staring out at the Stricken Stream. She could see the Valley of Four Drafts in the distance and wondered if she could somehow go there to try and find the Baudelaires but she knew she couldnt.
Something very odd was happening in the stream, though. Jessica saw three young people sitting on a long but slightly cracked piece of wood and Jessica knew at once who these three young people were.
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Post by Tyler on Sept 28, 2003 11:07:40 GMT -5
... Very good Snare!
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Post by Lady Michelina on Sept 28, 2003 11:08:51 GMT -5
LoL thank-you:) are you writing more of Duncans Diary anytime soon? Or have you already?
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Post by Tyler on Sept 28, 2003 11:43:28 GMT -5
It takes a long time to post an evtry... I don't know.
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Post by Lady Michelina on Sept 28, 2003 11:54:40 GMT -5
thats ok, Ill wait with patience *whistles while waiting for the next entry of Duncans Diary*
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Post by cwm3 on Oct 4, 2003 14:21:56 GMT -5
This is gooooooooooooooood.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 5, 2003 5:27:30 GMT -5
BUMP!!!!!!!!
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Post by Lady Michelina on Oct 7, 2003 17:50:13 GMT -5
thank-you times a billion I'll write more later
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