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Post by Nate2632 on Nov 27, 2003 16:07:53 GMT -5
This is a thread were you post your own original lyrics to songs or poems youv'e writen.
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Post by Nate2632 on Nov 27, 2003 16:20:46 GMT -5
This Place
Times are so hard these days Can't figure out what to say People expect you to be someone thats not you Take a Chance and revolt maybe you can start a cult They expect so much from you sometimes its so hard to
Do what you want don't listen If they try to get you Just go with them
[glow=green,2,300]Its so hard to Be something that your not supposed to don't expect me to come back to you maybe we'll get along if you say i do and we can go and leave this place[/glow]
Don't listen to what they say let the rumors just float away act the way that makes you feel like the way you want to feel make sure that everyone see's how they add to your misery take back the days they left you out on the side lines with nothing left to
Do us a favor and don't come back If thats what they told you then don't go back
[glow=green,2,300]Course[/glow]
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Post by lemonysinlaw on Nov 27, 2003 19:12:56 GMT -5
Lies vs. Truth
Verse I Everyone sees it I do as well Everyone knows it I do as well Everyone likes it I don't And I won't [Prechorus] (UNTIL)* YOU TELL ME... Fill me in I wanna know...ev-er-y-thin I don't wanna hear Ever single rumor that drifts my ear [Chorus] I want answers I want truth Not just some lie Made up by some teenage Ruth How come you're here to-day? Unlike yesterday? Unlike yesterday? Or the day before... I want more...... [Verse II] Than just missing I don't picture you kissing Some girl you meet on the street That's where the rumors and the truth meet [Repeat Prechorus & Chorus] [Bridge] If you love me Tell me straight away I don't wanna wait Every single day
[Verse III] To hear your voice Outside my door Greeting me with a smile And maybe a wave I don't want to have to wait!
[Repeat chorus]
Verse IV This is the end I'm sure you're glad to hear Wherever you are Listening along with your beer [repeat prechorus] I don't want lies I don't want lies I want the truth Just from you [Repeat chorus]
I want more! More. [repeat till fade]
* Only used in verse 1
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Dec 13, 2003 8:03:27 GMT -5
The Lost Soul Verse One: The path is unclear, The time is not near, I feel myself drifting away, The veiw is all blurred, haven't you heard, that I need someone to save me! Bridge: Haven't I told you, how much I love you, but you shoved it right back, Couldn't you see I thought you loved me, but now I've gone off track
Chorus: I try to hold on, for you, I'll try to keep in, for you, but I feel myself slipping away, I'll try to fight back, for you, I'll try to move on, for you, but for now I'll always be a lost soul.
Verse Two: I'm starting to waste, I had bad taste, you ever go with you, I 'm gonna leave, I dont believe, I thought of you as my boo
Bridge: Haven't I told you, how much I love you, but you shoved it right back, Couldn't you see I thought you loved me, but now I've gone off track
Chorus: I try to hold on, for you, I'll try to keep in, for you, but I feel myself slipping away, I'll try to fight back, for you, I'll try to move on, for you, but for now I'll always be a lost soul.
Third Verse (The strange bit):
Watch me fall, watch me crawl, as I lose everything I've got, I'ma ll shaking, It's all your making, how dare you tell me not, how dare you tell me to stop what your doing, because, I DON'T CARE!
Chorusx3
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Post by lemonysinlaw on Dec 13, 2003 8:21:01 GMT -5
Wow, that's really good.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Dec 13, 2003 9:16:07 GMT -5
Thanks. More up soon.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Dec 13, 2003 11:19:24 GMT -5
The One by Dupin
Sitting here, I just can't believe it, How did I get here, Why couldn't I just leave you Lying here, Why must
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Dec 13, 2003 11:33:14 GMT -5
I did by Dupin
[Verse I] Sitting here, I just can't believe it, How did I get here, Why couldn't I just leave it Lying here, Why must I love you so, I want to disappear I just want to go.
[Bridge] Through the rain, I came for you, what could be done, what could I do? I followed you, through all the gloom, now I'm sitting here, in the dark room, wondering: where are you?
[Chorus] You left me You went away, whilst I was in the dark, you didn't see, you didn't say, I couldn't come for you, I couldn't find you i did.
[Verse Two] Thinking here, why did I bother, coming to find you through all the bad, Shouting here! I must really love her, Or I must just be, really sad! Crying here, I lost you, and I'm wondering how, I'm hoping here, is it true? that you're just, a selfish cow!
[Bridge] Through the rain, I came for you, what could be done, what could I do? I followed you, through all the gloom, now I'm sitting here, in the dark room, wondering: where are you?
[Chorus] You left me You went away, whilst I was in the dark, you didn't see, you didn't say, I couldn't come for you, I couldn't find you i did.
[Verse 3] Now I'm lost, in my mind, I can't get out, I can't find myself I hope your here, to ease the pain, But you're not, I'm here in the rain. Alone, you left me.
[Bridge] Through the rain, I came for you, what could be done, what could I do? I followed you, through all the gloom, now I'm sitting here, in the dark room, wondering: where are you?
[Chorus] You left me You went away, whilst I was in the dark, you didn't see, you didn't say, I couldn't come for you, I couldn't find you i did.
*fades off*
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Post by lemonysinlaw on Dec 20, 2003 21:10:07 GMT -5
My Wounds
This is gone Done Nothing more to say At least not today
[glow=red,2,300]I don't want to Get in a fight with you I do want to get angry But that's not all I feel And you'd best not beg me Until my wounds do heal [/glow]
That won't be any time That you count Or anymore That you'll amount
It's way ahead You might be dead I want to take my time However long that may take Don't try to make Anything more than it is
[glow=red,2,300]I don't want to Get in a fight with you I do want to get angry But that's not all I feel And you'd best not beg me Until my wounds do heal [/glow]
If you think I'll take you back Think again before you try to hack Into my heart and into the way I think You prove yourself to be more of a fink
It's not the way that you think you're cool It's not the way you act like a fool If you want me to go on I'm quite ready Been for a while Been ready to insult you for miles.
[glow=red,2,300]I don't want to Get in a fight with you I do want to get angry But that's not all I feel And you'd best not beg me Until my wounds do heal [/glow]
And if you think I'll forgive Think again before you live To serve me Haha! No I won't show Affection In your Direction If you make your Election For yourself to win my Affection
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Post by CharismaticCarly on Dec 21, 2003 20:39:23 GMT -5
Ah....I see we have some aspiring poets in here?
-Clarianna
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Dec 26, 2003 17:04:19 GMT -5
Wow. This is really fun writing songs.
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Post by The Flossing Ferret of Nigeria on Jan 3, 2004 21:05:34 GMT -5
Oh yes! My first song worth posting!!!
BUT DOESN'T EVERYONE (NEED SOMEONE)?
Verse one: I'm here Right now Alive So how...
Can I Not feel like I Exist
bridge: I want to fly! Away from these people! I want to go Where I'm loved!
Chorus: I'm drowned in a sea of faces unfamiliar I don't feel like me That artistic daydreamer I can be fine on my own, oh yeah But doesn't everyone need someone....?
Verse two: Am I Living? Don't know, (my) Ears ring How do I start After This part?
Why can't I...
>skip "I want to" in bridge<
bridge chorus
Need to belong Hear out my song That's not so wrong! Have waited so long...
Doesn't everyone need someone...?
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Post by Sheepdogg Plankton on Jan 16, 2004 8:22:20 GMT -5
Okay, this track i wrote and arranged samples the chorus of Mrs. Jackson by OutKast.
Verse One: Jeez, i musta pissed you off real bad, to get you all this mad it's really hard to watch you flame and blow your top when will it finally stop this is getting out of hand no, i'm serious this is getting out of hand someone's gotta grab this b**** and give her a reprimand I'm being serious man but you know my words, i mean 'em, they aren't wack 'cause you know s*** you like, I'm paying for that but discrimination it's what happens when men and women start hatin' just like the blacks and slaves it wasn't my idea but yo' mama wants to hear from me now, great.
I'm sorry ms. Jackson, oooooo i am fo real never meant to make your daugher cry i apologize a million times
Verse Two: okay, mrs. jackson you're a dunce you think you're going to make a big deal because she cried once? i was statin' a fact you think she cries because of Chow-Yun Fat I ain't havin' that you can take that s*** and shove it up your a** shut up, now, let me rap, your daughter needs control for some lip gloss i spent my allowence in the foll so, yeah, we fought but that be the nauture of humans you're holding your daughter back, in the game of life she's losin so let's have a truce, let your daughter lose to a certains extent no, their ain't gonna be no celebration except that we still might be together by graduation
I'm sorry Ms. Jackson, ooooo i am fo real never meant to make your daughter cry i apologize a trillion times
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Post by Carly is Spiffy on Jan 17, 2004 9:40:51 GMT -5
OH MY GOD. You guys are SO good! Poetry is one of my favorite things other than art.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Jan 17, 2004 9:49:26 GMT -5
Thank you!
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