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Post by Snicket on Jul 27, 2004 0:25:43 GMT -5
Thanks. That was the first joke I thought of. I didn't even know iyt would be that effective.
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Post by Snicket on Jul 29, 2004 15:41:37 GMT -5
You may have noticed that I haven't been updating this and I am not planning on updating it for a while.
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Post by Snicket on Aug 5, 2004 12:34:45 GMT -5
The girl in about 7 seconds transformed into something else. Slowly, her neck started to get longer. Wings started to grow. She had slowly transformed into a swan. "Hey noobs." she said. "Swans you read the message too?" asked Snicket. "Shutup really cool member. So where is this supposed meeting at?" asked Swans. "It will be in the Starbucks down the street." said Snicket. "Which one?" asked Swans. "The one next to the other one that is smack dab in the middle. It is between 2 starbucks and behind it is that dumb cookie factory." "Oh yeah, whatever you do....keep me away from that fish, he is so annoying. I keep on hearing plans that he is going to kill me." Snicket and Andrew who had short attention spans walked away. Over near the rock cd's they spotted a bald guy. He had one hair growing out of the top of his head and wore a shirt that said "I SUPPORT 667 THE ULTIMATE MESSAGE BOARD ON EARTH AND I SAY SO BECAUSE I KEEP ON BANNING PEOPLE!"
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Post by Snicket on Aug 8, 2004 17:20:14 GMT -5
I have it planned that later on in the story it tells of the Swan dive. I didn't know how to write your part but I did it anyway.
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Post by Snicket on Sept 2, 2004 6:35:30 GMT -5
I will do some more work on this fic in a few more days. It will take awhile to finish it though.
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Post by Luigi on Sept 2, 2004 14:46:57 GMT -5
I will do some more work on this fic in a few more days. It will take awhile to finish it though. We believe in you. *cough*
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Post by Antenora on Sept 2, 2004 18:03:51 GMT -5
I eagerly await the next installment--tbis will surely be quite entertaining. By the way, Snicket, did you read the PM I sent you? You didn't reply.
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Post by Snicket on Sept 2, 2004 19:29:12 GMT -5
Yeah I forgot to reply. I was going to use the image but for right now, anytime I host the image and try to use it as and avatar, it won't let me. I am currently writing the next part.
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Post by Snicket on Sept 2, 2004 19:34:08 GMT -5
Here is where I update it. ____________________________
Snicket and Andrew walked over to the bald man knowing he was a member of the mesage board. But wich one? J? "Yo! You Snicket? The freaken' really cool member who spells my name wrong?" asked the short skinny bald man with one hair. Snicket hated to say it but, "Yes. And you must be...." "Yes I am Tradg. So cut me some slack home boy! I may be old but me hip! Vote for Al Sharpton as president! Let me introduce you to our latest happenin' member, Haten00bs12!" Tradg pointed to a guy next to him which was picking out an American Idol Cd. It was Simon Cowell. "Admin, I hate to admit it, but your website is so totally bad! You better go to some other show. Paula, Dod how I love her!, may have saidd that you were great, and Randy may have called you a DaWg! But you are not!" Tradg pulled a gun out of his pocket that was labeled: Use on anybody that should be banned. "You're banned." said Tradge and he fired the gun. Apparently a little kid about six years old was nearby and saw what was happening. He took a fake ray gun out of his pocket and shot at Simon numberous times. Simon did not die from the gun, but he died of a fake raygun. What a baby.
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Post by Luigi on Sept 2, 2004 21:02:01 GMT -5
J: People who make fun of Simon Cowell are usually whiny little pre-teens and kids who cannot formulate an opinion by themselves and go by what the main-stream media tells them in supposedly "comoc" clip shows of Simon saying "dreadful." This fic has a plot has deep as a puddle. Basically, some 667ers encounter another 667er, who has quirks that do not belong to the 667er in question at all, and you're attempts at humor can be likened to a dancer falling flat on his face onstage. Your so-called jokes are mainly poorly placed pop culture references that fit the story as well as a cylinder going into a star-shaped hole.
C: ...stop the metaphors, J. Your metaphors are worse than the story.
J: What was I saying? Oh, right. The story is going nowhere at a painfully slow pace, and I'm eagerly awaiting a plot and not a "comical", innaccurate look at the members of 667. Boy, I honestly can't wait until you do me. I really can't.
C: Assuming he does.
J: Keep it up, because I like reading it. I really do. Even though it's bad, I like reading it. Bad things are the only things I want to read, actually.
C: The negative review has been brought to you by J, because her mother won't stop talking to her. And she's really irritating. The mother, that is. And J, too. Well, happy writing.
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Post by Snicket on Sept 3, 2004 6:20:09 GMT -5
I meant for it to menton humorless pop culture. That sort of matches with the tone of it.
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Post by Antenora on Sept 3, 2004 8:32:02 GMT -5
I don't quite understand you, Snicket. Are you saying that you intended the story to be full of humorless stuff--so bad it's almost good? But anyway, this thread is entertaining me greatly.
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Post by Snicket on Sept 3, 2004 17:01:27 GMT -5
If you put humorless pop culture in a story, a lot of people will laugh at it.
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Post by Luigi on Sept 3, 2004 19:06:36 GMT -5
If you put humorless pop culture in a story, a lot of people will laugh at it. J: Nice save... C: Not.
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Post by Addieor on Sept 4, 2004 13:11:32 GMT -5
Just a suggestion but could you perhaps have more paragraphs? It would make the story easier to read.
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