It all begun with a little juish boy named Tumen. He had just been born and was in the hospital. His parents were rocking him back and forth like any other parent would, but there was something strange about this little boy. What his parents did know was that he'd grow up to be a very smart gentlemen but what they didn't know was he'd never grow up. He'd always be a little boy. They didn't know in till he was about five. They got a letter. (Which they never get letters.) It didn't say who it was from just who it was to. Very curious, they opened the letter, And tumens sister, Elvia started to read; "Your child tumen will not be growing up any time soon. Or should I say, never." Elvia paused. She looked at Tumen. "Do you know who this is from?" said Elvia. "No I don't." Tumen said. Elvia sighed. Then kept on reading. When she was finished no one spoke. And that is how his parent's found out.
CHAPTER TWO NEVER DIE
Tumen was, as you know, not a normal boy. For example, you might see him wandering around the neighberhood and he'd look like he was about five, but really he was about ninty-eight, And you might be very befuddled by this, so what do you do? Heres what you do. Nothing. Why nothing? Because there isn't anything you can do. You might be thinking why dousn't Tumen do anything about it? Because Tumen can't do anything about it that's why. Soooooooo........... Were was I? Oh yes. So that was how the parents found out and blah blah blah. So you might be wondering what happened to Tumen. Well, he wnt to school for half his life and it was hard for him because he had to change a school every year so they didn't know he never changed. On his four-hundred and seventyth day of school he lived with his sister in a cottage in Chicago.
CHAPTER THREE EAGLE CLAW ELEMENTRY
He went to school at a place called Eagle Claw Elementry. He had a friend named Jack, but he didn't get to see him that long because he had to move. On his last day of eagle claw elementry, he had a plan. Not just any old plan. A big plan. After school was over and he got his reward, he shot out of the school and started to grab all the pieces of wood scrap's, and started working. It took two weeks to make his boat. When he was finished he set sail on the sea, And lucky him he lived right next to the sea, And he knew he was going to set sail on lots of adventures.
BOOK TWO: THE SEA BEAST
CHAPTER ONE THE AIR RIDER
As Tumens boat, the air rider, sailed gently up, and down Tumen sat there. Waiting. Not waiting for a specific thing, just waiting. Then, something happened. A large fin came out of the water. Then a back. Then a body. Then a head. Then a person. Not a normal person, a fish person. He had a large fin on his back and instead of having skin he had scales. He had on a ragged suit that looked like it had never been washed. He had dark black eyes. Who are you!? Tumen asked.
CHAPTER TWO SEAN
The strange creature slithered onto the Deck. "Hello, little one. May I join your ship?" said the creature. "Who are you?" Tumen said again. "I am Sean. Once again I ask, may I join your ship?" Tumen sighed. "Yes you can. But you have to obey my orders." "Yes, sir." said Sean. Later that night, Tumen woke up to a loud grumbling noise. But Sean suprised Tumen, for he did not wake up. Tumen grabbed his dagger trying to protect himself. Standing there shaking, a large sea beast came shooting out of the water. Tumen jumped on to the side of the boat. Whenever the beast came chargeing at him he jumped on to the beast's back. He stabbed his dagger into it and slid down its back with the dagger coming with him. The beast roared tearing in half and fell back into the water.
CHAPTER THREE WAKEING UP
The next morning Sean said he had a dream... "I had a dream where a great sea beast came out of the water and you cut it in half with a dagger!" said Sean. "Why am I not suprised." Tumen muttered.
ABOUT THE AUTHER Julian is an eight year old boy who mainly spends his time reading and writing. He got the idea of his first book (a boy named Tumen) when he was urged to write a series of books.
BOOK THREE: BOB THE SEA BAT
CHAPTER ONE THE FLAG
It was morning and Tumen was sitting there watching the sea water rising gently up and down. Then suddenly a big piece of rag came floated out of the water. Tumen jumped up very suprised and grabbed his dagger. Then he swiped his head in relief and sat back down. But then he thought "maybe I can use that piece of rag for a flag. In fact, without one my boat is going rather slow." So he got up and fished it out of the water. But before putting it up he put it down on the deck to tak a closer look. he gasped. What he saw was not a piece of rag, it was a old tattered pirate flag, but instead of having a skull and crossbones, it had a skull of a bat and cross bones.
CHAPTER TWO BACK FROM LUNCH?
A few hours later Sean got back from lunch. "Back from lunch?" Tumen said. "Yep. Two cat fish, five gold fish, and one eel." said Sean. Suddenly a large bat wing came out of the water. And then another bat wing and a bat body. "Hey humen dude, want a ride?" said the strange bat. Tumen, shocked, said, trembling, "You can talk!?" "Well of course I can dude. I'm Bob the sea bat, who are you and your little friend there?" "O-o-oh, I'm Tumen and this is my crew mate, Sean." "Well all right! said Bob. "Get on!" Tumen jumped onto Bobs back and slapped him. "Lets go!"
CHAPTER THREE RIDING ON THE SEA
Bob and Tumen splashed onto the deck so hard Tumen almost fell off. They started out at about ten, then twenty, the nthirty, then forty, then fifty fifty miles an hour! Tumen was going so fast he forgot all about if something was going to happen next.
BOOK FOUR: THE SAD ENDING
About two hours had past since Bob and Tumen had left the ship. It was almost dawn. Then, suddenly, Bob shot straight into the air making Tumen fly off his back and land in the water. Tumen, who had never learned to swim, went out cold and sank. Then Bob turned around in mid air and shot down like a torpedo. Bob looked at Tumen. A large grin spread across his face. He had killed Tumen. "All acordding to plan." And reader, I am sorry to say this. I forgot to say it three books ago, but water is the only thing that can kill Tumen.
Post by Violent Bun Fortuna on Feb 19, 2019 20:07:39 GMT -5
I’m so glad to have stumbled upon this thread because good grief do I have a lot of weird stuff from my childhood.
For my first contribution, though, I shall share a story I wrote when I was probably about 6 or 7. I didn’t go to school until year 3 (I was home educated before that) so before I joined my first school they wanted to get an idea of how good I was in various subjects so I had to write a story and ... this is what I wrote.
I’ve typed this out exactly as I first wrote it, including spelling and grammatical errors. Be prepared for a dramatic twist in the tale.
The Magic Violin Case and Violin
One summer day Delia and her brother Peter were playing in the garden. Now, Delia had a Violin, and a case for this Violin, and this violin and case were magic yet neither the girl or the boy knew this. One day Delia was playing in the garden when she heard her Mummy’s voice calling her name. “Delia, Delia, Delia, come here.’ “Yes Mummy, coming.” “Delia it’s time you did your violin.” “OK, Mummy.” “And remember to tighten your bow.” “I will Mummy.” at least she thought she would. Wen she entered the mustc room the violin with its case shot across and landed neatly on the table. Her mummy, who was in the other room didn’t hear this, but only because she was in the other room listening to the radio and she had got it on quite loudly. Delia was amazed. She picked up the Violin and was about to begin to play it when it shot away and came back to her and started to play. When it had finished it went back into its case and the case zipped up. Her mummy called her, “Delia, that was very god violin playing.” “Was it really?” said Delia. “Were they all good Mummy?” “Yes they were all good.” “What do I do now Mummy?” “You can go and tell your brother that I want him.” “Okay Mummy, I will.”
Chapter Two The Worst Day
She rushed out and a terrible sight met her eyes. A skeleton of her brother lay on the ground and the violin case was finishing him off. But the violin case rose up into the air and began to play and he came back to life and Delia fed the violin case every day after that.
Fun fact: the story originally ended with Delia’s discovery of Peter’s skeleton being consumed by the violin case, but my mum thought that the school might be concerned that I was an especially bloodthirsty child so she got me to throw together a quick, happy (if still somewhat threatening) ending, and that’s why Peter lived.
asoue fan fiction -- probably the same time i made that recording of the mr poe conversation. i tried to write the full script for zombies in the snow.
SCENE 1 Show a calm street. nothing interesting is happening. A car goes by every one and a while. Zooms in on a blue house.
SCENE 2 (Rölf is looking out the window glumly.) RÖLF: Boy, it gets real boring if you're waiting for snow all day and it doesn't come. (Dorothy comes in and sits down next to Rölf.) DOROTHY: Maybe we could make some hot chocolate. RÖLF: (still glum) Do we have an cocoa beans? DOLORIS: Yeah, I think we still have a can left from— (Rölf sprints of camera as fast as he can and goes into the kitchen in the background. Doloris sighs and goes after Rölf.)
SCENE 3 (Rölf and Doloris are in the kitchen making hot chocolate.) DOLORIS: (licking her fingers) Where did we ever learn to make this stuff? RÖLF: (licking his fingers) I don't know. I think Grandma taught us last year on vacation. (Suddenly there is a loud crunching sound and Doloris and Rölf look up, startled.)
SCENE 4 (Doloris and Rölf walk outside looking confused and searching for the place where the noise came from.) RÖLF: What was that? DOLORIS: I have no idea. let's keep looking.
SCENE 5 (Doloris and Rölf are still searching when a zombie with white, bushy hair and a blue rain coat jumps out from the bushes. He has a big scar on his cheek. ZOMBIE: AAAARRRGGHH!!! (Doloris and Rölf scream and run away. The zombie runs after them.)
SCENE 6 (Doloris and Rölf run into the park. It's empty. Rölf grabs a sled.) RÖLF: Get on!
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