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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 7, 2003 14:43:34 GMT -5
"This play will just be so great!" Tiffany shriecked as she did up Beatrice's bow. "Yeah," Beatrice said," I haven't done a play like this, dressed up so mcuh." "I know," Tiffany said," Turn around love." Beatrice did as her sister said and turned to face her. "The script is quite boring, to be hoest," Beatrice sighed," All I say is, "I do" . Theres a long script for the Judge, lime a real wedding." "This can't be worse then that play about the murderer," Tiffany said," That was a lot of waiting around." "I suppose not," Beatrice said," I think I'm to go on now." "You have fiive minutes," Tiffany said," So where's Lemony." "Couldn't care less," Beatrice snarled," He's done a lot of bad to V.F.D. according to the Daily Punctilio." "You can't always believe that," Tiffany laughed," But you don't know where he is?" "No?" Beatrice said," I don't." "Maybe you shoudl give him another chance," Tiffany said," He might have not done wrong." "I'll fine him," Beatrice said," And give hima chance to explain himself." "Good, good," Tiffany said. "Beatrice," a croacky voice said," Time for you to come on!!!"
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Post by Zombie-chan on Oct 7, 2003 14:47:14 GMT -5
oooooh.....that was good!
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Post by Tay Sachs on Oct 7, 2003 19:42:32 GMT -5
Ahhhhh! I LOVE it! ;D Ahh!
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Post by curious on Oct 7, 2003 23:54:33 GMT -5
where did you get this information? pleas...I need to know more
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 8, 2003 2:06:59 GMT -5
It isn't infomation, its a fanfic Anyways....... Beatrcie walked out of her dressing room, with a young girl with a bow as the bridesmaid next to her, holding her long trailing dress. Tiffany rushed past several people, a man with pimples and one that kept coughing, to get to the front of the audiance. The lights went down as Beatrice and Olaf walked onto the stage. Olaf was in a ridiculous disguise-a top hat, covering the eyebrow and a long suit that covered his eye tattoo. "Lets get right to it, shall we?" said the judge, who was a friend of Beatrice's "Let's," Olaf snarled, and smiled at Beatrice. She didn't smile back. ****** The wedding dragged on and eventually, the were nearing the end of the play, where Beatrice said her one line. "Do you, Raymond-as Olaf was calling himself-take Beatrice to be your lawful wedded wife. "I do," he said slyly. "And do you, Beatrice take Raymond to be your lawful wedded husband. Beatrice looked at Olaf. She didn't know it was him and was excited to be a part of a play. "I do," she whispered. More after 5 more replies...........
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Post by Tay Sachs on Oct 8, 2003 11:26:47 GMT -5
Now you are just being manipulative. But of course, I love it. ;D
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Post by Zombie-chan on Oct 8, 2003 12:11:04 GMT -5
this keeps getting better! more! more!
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 8, 2003 12:14:12 GMT -5
When threee different people reply, you'll get the next part.
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Post by Vince Noir on Oct 8, 2003 12:58:00 GMT -5
omg!!!! plz say more dupin!!! I need 2 no wat happens!!!!!! plz dont
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Post by cwm3 on Oct 8, 2003 13:17:54 GMT -5
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 8, 2003 14:47:09 GMT -5
The next part when one more person replies.
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Post by BeyondTheSeaAtherCousins on Oct 8, 2003 19:16:53 GMT -5
This is interesting, I like it alot. How about using mire description. The idea is fun, can't wiat to see what's next.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 9, 2003 9:45:19 GMT -5
Olaf laughed. "We are now leagely married, my sweet. What do you have to say" "Nothing," Beatrice murmured," "I do" is all I'm meant to say in this play." Olaf laughed, but it sounded as if a fly had got caught in his throat. "This," he said, and gestured the whole room around him," Is no play. We are married now, and as your husband, I get all your money and ban you from seeing Lemony Snicket again." Beatrice turned red. "You pig!" she screamed and chucked the bouquet at Olaf as he laughed again. "Don't call your husband names," he laughed. "I demand a divorce!" Beatrice yelled at him. "You may demand all you want," Olaf sneered," But you won't get anything you demand. Now, I'm going to collect your money, and then go and Kill Lemony Snicket and all his siblings!" He ran off the stage, whilst the audicance members cired and chucked things at him. Tiffany clambered up onto the stage. "You won't get away!" she cried and pulled off his top hat, and pulled down his trousers so he was standing in his underwear. "Your on the evil side of the schism!" Beatrice cried and Tiffany held onto Olaf," You started it!" "He's Olaf!" someone cried. "I'll do a performance!" he cried and Tiffany struggled to keep him," Now you see me." He shoved Tiffany out the way. She was knocked to the floor and seemed lifeless. Beatrice lunged forward but he began running away, and in her wedding dress tripped over. "Now you don't!" Olaf cried, as he ran out the door.
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Post by Zombie-chan on Oct 9, 2003 9:50:39 GMT -5
oooh!!!! *stands, applauds, and chucks roses at DetectiveDupin* this is awesome!!!
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 9, 2003 10:15:11 GMT -5
Thank you, thank you
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