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Post by Anne A Gram on Oct 9, 2003 17:07:40 GMT -5
Hurrah!!!
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Post by Tay Sachs on Oct 9, 2003 17:39:20 GMT -5
A magnificent performance, as usual.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 11, 2003 2:25:44 GMT -5
Come on people. If you want the next bit, then reply!!!
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Post by Freshie on Oct 11, 2003 3:18:46 GMT -5
Ah! i love it! please continue!
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 11, 2003 7:37:56 GMT -5
THIS HAS BEEN DELAYED BECAUSE OF A HOLIDAY, SO WHEN I GET BACK I WILL DO PARTS THREE AND FOUR. THANK YOU DUPIN
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Post by Spiderman on Oct 11, 2003 8:11:31 GMT -5
Hey, that is really awesome!! I can't wait to read more when you get back!!!!
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 11, 2003 8:28:31 GMT -5
Becuase I'm going, I'll give you part four for the next week.
Beatrice got up and held her middle finger up as Olaf swung the large door behind him. She walked over to Tiffany, who was colapsed on the floor, in her big wedding dress, and bent down beside her. "Tiffany?" she said quietly. Tiffany opened her eyes. "Who are you?" she said," Get away from me!" "Tiffany!" Beatrice said. "Whose Tiffany?" Tiffany asked. "You!" Beatrice said. Tiffany openeed her mouth and colapsed again. "Tiffany!" Beatrice cried," Someone call the ambulance, I have really important things to do." She ran to the door, taking a last look at Tiffany and walked onto thw windy streets. She could see the mortmain mountains in the distance, and decided to get home and try to contact Lemony. When she opened the door, she collected the post and looked through. There was one handewritten and who from the bank and Beatrice opened both of them. The bank one said: Dear Countess, We have decided to infrom you that you husband has taken all the money from your account. It went like that and Beatrice sighed before looking at the handwritten one and reading it. Dear Beatrice I miss you, I love you. The story about me and V.F.D. in the newspaper was incorrect. Meet me in the headquaters in the Mortmain Mountians, and we can explian things. Beatrice thought. She wnated to see Lemony and wnated him to explain himself, but how would she get to the Mortmian Mountians. She needed to find Lemony and stop Count Olaf, so without even getting changed from the wedding dress, she walked through the door, slammed and locked it behind her and began to look for a way to the mortmain mountains. She was walking along, when a long black car stopped at a petrol station. A man with hooks for hands got out and Beatrice looked at the car. It was Olaf's car, with Olaf in there. She thought about the danger and began walking along. "Boss," the hook handed man said," How much petrol will we need to get to the Mortmain Mountians?" Beatrice stopped, looked at the car and without thinking, stuffed herself in the boot.
More after a week!!!!
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Post by sheepdogg palnkton on Oct 11, 2003 8:32:05 GMT -5
Wahoo! Wahoo!
Encore! Wahoo!
Now, detective dupin, what'ts this about a movie deal? I could write it...
But alas, check out my other fic first.
Tee hee
I ccan't sppell, sorrry.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 19, 2003 5:24:36 GMT -5
Go ahead with da movie.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 19, 2003 5:44:38 GMT -5
What was I thinking? Thats what she thought to herself. There could be easiar ways to get up the MortMain Mountians than this. She decided to climb out, but as she was, the boot slammed shut and she was left in darkness. She wanted to scream for help. She opened her mouth, but no noise came out. She could only just about fit in the small boot and was very cramped. She looked around. Could she use any of the stuff in the boot to escape? Her eyes had only slightly ajusted to the darkness, so she couldn't see things very well.She grabbed a cloth, and survayed it. It was a robe-like the one in her diguise kit. The robe was useless. She felt around as her eyes got more ajusted to the darkness. There was a veil, and a doormans coat. There was a turban and a box for make up. Then she remembered the secret of the V.F.D make up kit-the Veiled Facial Disguise box. She opened it up, and felt through. She grabbed the dramatic eyebrow stick and blew on it-the V.F.D. escape stick. She felt the heat of it as the end of the stick burned up. She held it to the lock as it sizzled. Count Olaf's car jolted up, the stick flying out of Beatrice's hand. It landed on the robe and the robe began burning up, the small flames spread. Beatrice gasped. She rattled at the lock-the stick should have weakened it. The V.F.D. stick landed on her dress and it began burning away. The bot swung open, Beatrcie and a couple of disguises fell out onto the cold icey rocky ground. "What was that?" a powder faced woman asked. "Nothing," Count Olaf replied," Just thr winds." "Are we there yet?" Esme whined, and then Beatrice couldn't here more. She found an issue of THE DAILY PUNCTILIO and glared at the first page. COUNT OLAF HAS V.FDers SURROUNDED read the headline. Beatrcie was not safe. Count Olaf had people on her, and on Lemony and all the volunteers. She looked at the misty mountains and then looked at the disguises that had fallen out of the boot. "Perfect," she whsiperered to herself.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 23, 2003 12:22:20 GMT -5
Beatrice gathered all the disguises from the cold floor and put them all in a heap. What could she dress up as? What would she do in a disguise? Young voices filled the air and Beatrice grabbed the disguises and ran too hide. "Snow Scouts are accommodating, basic, calm, darling, emblematic, frisky, grinning, human, innocent, jumping, kept, limited, meek, nap-loving, official, pretty, quarantined, recent, scheduled, tidy, understandable, victorious, wholesome, xylophone, young, and zippered -- every morning, every afternoon, every night, and all day long!" said the voices and Beatrice looked to see a group of children with a man leading in front. She sighed in relief. "Who may you be?" the man at the front asked. Beatrice hesistated. Was that Bruce-on Olafs side? "No one," she quickly said, and with the disguises in her hands, she ran. "She doesn't sound calm," Beatrice heard a child say as she ran," Not Snow Scout material!" But Beatrice didn't listen to anymore. She ran into a cave and stayed silent as "The Snow Scouts" went passed. She then looked at the disguises. What could she do?Could the Scarlet cape be of any use? Could the medical coat solve her problems? Beatrice rummaged around until she found a braided wig. Putting it in place, she already looked slightly different. She had to put on a disguise that would explain why she was in the Mountians. She picked up a rain coat, and some charcol. She rubbed the charcol against her face and soon she looked very dirty. She thenn wiped the charcol on the raincoat, and put it on. She looked like a tramp, all dirty and camping out. She was satisfies with her disguised, and stuffing a few disguises in pockets, she walked outside of the cave. She ruffled up the wig a bit as she walked out and looked at the eery blue of the night. She shivered, and looked around. She couldn't see anything. She began walking along, the chilly breeze against her.How did she end up there? She walked along for ages, until she saw the Stricken Stream and something else in it. "Violet?" she asked," Klaus? Sunny?" They were battling the waves of The Stricken Stream and Beatrice needed to save them. They turned their heads to her. "Who are you?" Violet managed to ask. "I can't say now," Beatrice replied," But let me save you and you'll be answered." "How can we trust you?" Klaus asked. "Becuase I'm going to save you," Beatrice replied," You've seen me before, trust me Baudelaires." "Meeka!" Sunny cried which meant (Do you know what V.F.D means?) "I'll answer you later!" Beatrice cried," Let me help you!" A huge wave came and landed on the three c hildren. "No!" Beatrice cried. She couldn't believe it. They were dead.
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Post by Misery on Oct 28, 2003 16:13:38 GMT -5
Nice work!
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Oct 29, 2003 5:39:15 GMT -5
Beatrice couldn't stop to weep. She couldn't see the dead bodies, but was sure that Violet, Klaus and Sunny couldn't have survived. There was a bright light that shone in her direction but Beatrice couldn't see where it was coming from. She began running but the light got bigger and bigger and soon she was grabbed and knocked to the ground...... When she woke up, she didnt have a clue where she was-in some sort of shack or basement. The door creaked open and Olaf walked in. "Hello my wife," he sneered, and Beatrice could see that he had a gun in his hands. "Olaf!" she cried and pushed herself to the back of the basement. Esme walked in. "If your going to be so much trouble," she laughed," Then we'll have to kill you." Beatrice screamed. Olaf pointed the gun towards her head and aimed. Whack!!!!!! Olaf fell after a frying pan hit him. Beatrice looked up. Jacques Snicket. "Jaqcues!" she cried in releif. "Come on," Jacques said, pushing Esme away. But Olaf got up and grabbed the gun again. The Man with the beard and no hair and the woman with the hair and no beard walked in, holding identical torches. "Olaf," he cried," Lemony, Violet, Klaus, Sunny. They're all here." "Hooky's after them," the woman added, but Olaf could see as all five people burst in. "Lemony!" Beatrice screamed. "Beatrice!" Lemony yelled back. "I'll have to kill both of you!" Olaf cried," Lemony, Jacques, two of the Baudelaire's and especially you, Beatrice!" Everyone froze as Olaf held the gun. But as he pointed it to Beatrice, Lemony couldn't keep still. "Beatrice!" he shouted and ran infront of the gun. Esme pushed him out the way, where he lay and didn't get up. "Hopky," Esme ordered," Grab Jacques!" It was a big hustle-everyone in the small room. Olaf held the gun and pushed the trigger............
BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!size]
Someone died.........
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Post by acecow on Oct 31, 2003 16:44:18 GMT -5
Whoever Hopky is probably died or Esme lol
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Nov 1, 2003 11:12:23 GMT -5
Whoops!Hooky, the hook-handed man. I'll wiat for more replies until you find out whose going six feet under.........
But I can say its one of these five:
Lemony 3/1 Esme 7/1 Hooky 9/3 Jacques 2/1 The woman with the hair and no beard 7/2
Make your bets!!!!
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