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Post by Ashley on Feb 15, 2005 15:41:49 GMT -5
Anyway, I wish my death could have involved forks, Me too. Aww, thanks Ambie! ;D
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Post by Amber on Feb 15, 2005 15:49:46 GMT -5
Shortest bit so far but it is a tiny weeny chapter-
Dante had opened the front door to his house and walked down the corridor to his bedroom; he saw feet poking out from under the bed and said dully. “You really aren’t doing a good job of hiding.” “Oh…uh…yeah I think that didn’t go too well, can you go out of the room and come back in pretending you hadn’t seen me.” The voice said from under the bed. “Ok” Dante closed the door, but didn’t leave the room, just sat on a chair and waited for the person to get out. And the person did get up. It was Ashley who was vaguely surprised to see Dante still in the room. “I thought you left” “Yes, well I hadn’t, and would you care to explain why you were hiding under my bed?” “Well…about that, I was just meant to keep you here until ‘mumblemumble’ showed up” “Who?” “Phsnawitzphitz” “And you didn’t need to come, I never go out anyway, so if you would like to leave” Dante pointed at the door. “You aren’t really one for entertaining are you?” Ashley said sarcastically “No, no I’m not. Now get out.” “What if I don’t want to?” Ashley jeered. “Then I will find something very heavy to hit you with.” Dante said, calm as ever. “Will you really?” Ashley teased once again. Dante sighed, got up and walked out of the room. He came back with a large frying pan. “Ohh. But I can’t leave; if I do ‘flornawofkse’ won’t be able to find your house. Just don’t hit me hard, ok? Ashley sat down on Dante’s carpet “Fine. Your choice “ Dante swung the frying pan at her and then threw her out of the window, aiming perfectly so she landed in a heap on next doors garden.
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Post by Dante on Feb 15, 2005 15:52:50 GMT -5
It's funny because that's pretty much how I would actually behave in such a situation.
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Post by Amber on Feb 15, 2005 15:55:01 GMT -5
It's funny because that's pretty much how I would actually behave in such a situation. I thought so. I was torn between something sharp or something heavy.
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Post by Dante on Feb 15, 2005 16:02:23 GMT -5
Heavy is probably best, for somebody I know. If it was a complete stranger, sharp would be more appropriate.
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Post by Ashley on Feb 15, 2005 21:17:11 GMT -5
It's funny because that's pretty much what I am doing at the moment. You know, hiding under FFWF's bed how I would actually behave in such a situation.
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Post by Dante on Feb 16, 2005 3:46:26 GMT -5
It's funny because that's pretty much what I am doing at the moment. You know, hiding under FFWF's bed After you wrote that, I actually went and checked.
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Post by Ashley on Feb 16, 2005 9:53:52 GMT -5
Good thing I bought that under-bed camouflage.
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no-one
Reptile Researcher
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Post by no-one on Feb 20, 2005 17:25:49 GMT -5
what happensd next
i wanna know
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Post by Amber on Feb 20, 2005 17:29:09 GMT -5
I've been doing all my work and stuff and haven't had a chance to write anymore.
Plus I have writers block. ):
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jlo
Bewildered Beginner
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Post by jlo on Feb 20, 2005 17:46:40 GMT -5
I love my character. This is fabulous. ;D
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Post by ersatzbeatrice on Feb 20, 2005 17:56:06 GMT -5
I've been doing all my work and stuff and haven't had a chance to write anymore. Plus I have writers block. ): Maybe you could be in the story too. Why not?
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Post by Dante on Feb 21, 2005 12:53:28 GMT -5
Maybe you could be in the story too. Why not? Maybe she's building up to a point where she'll come in, defeat Char, and solve everybody's romantic problems. Although I see no problems for myself and E. Apart from being half the world apart.
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Post by i. on Feb 21, 2005 13:00:09 GMT -5
Just a bit of constructive criticism: Choose one name for me, and stay with it. People who don't know who I am will be confused. Late constructive criticism from Derik: Amber shouldn't do it in dialogue though, because some people call you Antenora, and some call you Tocuna. I always call you Antenora because that’s the name you were going by when I joined. Actually then name you were going by was "Amea the Brave" I believe, but then you went to Antenora.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Feb 21, 2005 13:01:54 GMT -5
I think when you joined I was either "Little Miss Nobody" or "Evil Counselor". Amea was Ila/Aqueous Martini/A-measles. Although I see no problems for myself and E. Apart from being half the world apart. I'm closer than you might think.
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