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Post by negativenine on May 27, 2004 16:07:02 GMT -5
Heh. Thanks... I was wondering how many people would remember who I am... at least one. That's good. ^_> ... *thumb-up* You _WIN_. How could we forget you?
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Post by DetectiveDupin on May 28, 2004 11:21:37 GMT -5
*pout* At least I'm cool. If I'm so cool why am I not in that whole last episode? *pout* But actually...you are included in a large up-coming storyline.
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Post by esmesqualor3 on May 28, 2004 14:48:42 GMT -5
Hey, George. This is great stuff.
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Post by trish on May 29, 2004 1:23:41 GMT -5
But actually...you are included in a large up-coming storyline. Ooooh. Now I'm happy. ;D
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Post by DetectiveDupin on May 29, 2004 4:09:27 GMT -5
Yes...but by LARGE I mean, TAKES A LONG TIME BEFORE YOU GET INCLUDED
But you're included in Part2/Episode 3...
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Post by Indistinguishable Blob on May 29, 2004 15:28:10 GMT -5
This = hilarious.
Kate+Zach=weird romantic tryst=comedy galore.
And why would anyone forget about you, Alli?
That'd be like forgetting one of the major food groups, like Mint Icecream, or Chocolate.
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Post by awpoue on May 30, 2004 2:54:38 GMT -5
Yay...I discovered this, now that 667 will actually load the whole page, which it wasn't doing earlier. Very amusing stuff. Everyone likes soaps, what makes them even funner is when you know the characters...yay! Keep it up!
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Post by DetectiveDupin on May 30, 2004 4:16:28 GMT -5
REALLY SHORT BIT REASON: I'm off to my cousinss for a few days, so I can't continue with this, as I won't have it with me. HOWEVER-if I post this, then when I get there, I can carry on on THEIR 'Word' Hard to explain, but this means you'll get the next part finished A/N: Um...part 3 has NOT finished yet.
667 Street-The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread by George
PART TWO OF EPISODE THREE
Tiffany nervously entered the hospital room, where Whitney still sat, her hand in James’, giving faint sobbing noises. “Whitney?” Her sister now turned to face her, and Tiffany could see tears dropping down her cheeks, and the redness around Whitney’s eyes. She’d been crying. This was no shock to Tiffany, but she now had a horrible feeling. She hated seeing Whitney upset, and it made her feel like bursting into tears herself. But she held them back for Whitney, as not to get her into hysterical crying once more. “Are you all right?” she asked. Whitney nodded. Tiffany sighed, and walked further into the room, taking a seat. “I know you’re not,” she said, giving a faint grin,” But everything will be all right, I promise.” Whitney sniffed. “And what if it’s not,” she asked,” What if…what if James…what if he dies?” “He won’t,” Tiffany said, letting Whitney lean on her,” Think positive. James will come round any time soon. I promise.” “How do you know?” Whitney asked quietly, resting her eyes from crying by closing them. “I…I don’t,” Tiffany confessed,” But he will…he will.”
Kate shoved open the door and stood into her house. She slammed it behind her, and continued her way in. But as she arrived at the bottom of the stairs she collapsed in a distressed heap, and tears started pouring out of her eyes. That tasteless magee Lauren-telling everyone like that. She would pay for what she did-she would pay for letting everyone know that Kate had kissed Zach. She stood up, and trod quietly along to the hallway mirror. She stared deeply into it, gazing at the marks on her body. Her nose was bleeding, and purple and yellow bruising was forming around her left eye from the punch Lauren had given her. Her hair was a complete mess from all the tugging Lauren had given her, and her lip was bleeding slightly. She was a state. Sick with staring at herself, Kate walked around into the living room, where she threw herself to one of the sofas and closed her eyes. She wanted to fall asleep, so this day could be gone forever, and a fresh new one could start. But what could she do the next day? She’d take the day off for sure -there was no way she’d go until the whole thing had died down. But with Kimia off as well they’d be short staffed. So? Screw them, Kate though, especially Lauren, the twisted magee.
Lauren, Ann, Aimee and Kimia sat around a pub table. After the whole event, they decided to meet up and get a drink, and catching Kimia on the way there, she joined them. Now they all had glasses of wine in front of them-some red, some white, the usual. Lauren had made her presence more acceptable-making her hair more smooth and tidy-tugging her clothes back on properly from where Kate had grabbed and clawed at her. She held up her glass. “Cheers!” she snorted out. Aimee gave her a look on confusion. “To what?” she asked. Lauren gave a small sniffing laughter noise. “To Kate and Zach’s demise!” she cried out,” That’s it. Cheers, to Kate and Zach’s demise!” The rest of the girls tapped their glasses against on another, and they all took a large swig of their drink-Kimia doing it more reluctantly. Trish came with up to the table, holding a small piece of paper in her hand-the tab. “Frankly, Lauren,” she snarled,” You should be ashamed of yourself. I’m sure you’ll get what’s coming soon.” “Oh, toss off,” Lauren whined,” Just give us the tab.” She snatched it from Trish’s hand, and the barmaid walked off growling at her. “That was a bit rude,” Kimia said quietly. Lauren turned to her-a small dose of disbelief on her face. “Oh, don’t you get started,” she said. “Oh-getting started on what?” Kimia asked, standing up,” Speaking my own opinion?” “Being a whiny magee!” Kimia clenched her teeth-Lauren was having a go at her because she was not some evil character like her-and the rest of them? Kimia didn’t believe that Lauren had a fair shout-she was being the whiny magee here. Tired with the constant yelling of that woman’s voice, Kimia lunged forward at her, then stopped. But as she did, all the wine shunted out from her wine glass, which was tight in her hand, and plastered Lauren, who gave a squeal and leaned back, before spitting round at Kimia. But at the spit reached the chair, Kimia was already away from the table, and heading for the door.
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Post by trish on May 30, 2004 10:15:53 GMT -5
Yay! Cameo appearance! Thanks so much! ;D
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Post by negativenine on May 30, 2004 14:57:58 GMT -5
Heh.. malign!Lauren is funny. : ) Great job, George. I likes this a lot.. The funny bit is that Lauren's practically a Saint! That's why this rocks... You should add Alli in as the mysterious stranger from someone' past... that would win. ^___^ It rocks, as always, though.
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Post by SlightlyMad on May 30, 2004 15:02:18 GMT -5
I put up some new art if anyone cared.
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Post by Zombie-chan on May 30, 2004 15:52:12 GMT -5
*gets tissues* Hospital room scenes are so...touching...
He'd better get well, else I'll have to...do something drastic. Yeah.
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Post by BSam on May 31, 2004 2:44:15 GMT -5
poor swans... having to be my partner in both this and e-eastenders...
top stuff...
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Post by Skalu on May 31, 2004 3:23:38 GMT -5
Both me and George coupled you and Jess together! HA!
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Post by Pucca on May 31, 2004 3:41:24 GMT -5
^_^ Is is great!!
I. Need. More!!!
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