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Post by Dante on Apr 22, 2005 11:24:05 GMT -5
The Black Widow can turn people into evil zombie henchmen?
That's a lot of zombie/possible-zombie stories we've got at the moment.
Also: Loved this chapter. Write more soon.
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Post by champ103 on Apr 22, 2005 11:28:17 GMT -5
She is planning to make your fellow members, your beloved associates join her side, completely hypnotise them in a way. They won’t know what they’re doing, but they’ll do it anyway. And you are the only ones who can save them.’
From chapter one.
Thanks for the reveiws!
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Post by Dante on Apr 22, 2005 11:32:52 GMT -5
She is planning to make your fellow members, your beloved associates join her side, completely hypnotise them in a way. They won’t know what they’re doing, but they’ll do it anyway. And you are the only ones who can save them.’From chapter one. Yeah, I'm pretty forgetful. Although I could easily have passed off my comment as being a clarification of your earlier ambiguity. Summary: I am honest.
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Post by Charles Vane on Apr 22, 2005 12:09:28 GMT -5
Yay. Pandora likes this story. Good writing, continue.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Apr 22, 2005 12:33:51 GMT -5
Zombies and similar things are always fun.
I like this story. Do continue.
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Post by Dante on Apr 24, 2005 6:05:26 GMT -5
I just looked at the first page again, and realised that I'd missed the first part of Chapter 3.
That chapter makes a lot more sense now that I've read all of it.
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