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Post by PJ on May 8, 2005 18:12:32 GMT -5
Then who am I? I don't fit any of the main charcaters. Maybe I'm Rose. Or Celinra. I thought the characters where Sora's. So you are yourself. I think.
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Post by Sora on May 8, 2005 21:45:38 GMT -5
Yes the charactors are my idea, as well as the plot line, so no one fits in any particular role(although Dante is a bit like Jack and Antenora a bit like Kate). Pandora your charactor has a very unique past involving your husband and what happened to him before, and subsequentally after his death. New path, Dauntless is female(Think of her as a female Sayid.....) the man was actually going to be BSam, so I'll just fix it back to that.
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Post by Amber on May 9, 2005 9:47:54 GMT -5
I've never seen/heard of lost before, but this is really good.
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Post by Sora on May 11, 2005 21:46:52 GMT -5
Part 5- Dauntless
Dauntless lay on the sand looking up toward the sun with a glazed look on her face. Everyone around her were frantically running around trying to get food sorted, shelters built, and baggage organised that no one took notice of the 39 year old woman with her hands behind her head doing nothing. Dauntless liked the solitude though. She had learned from her time in the army that quiet and peace were the only ways to keep your spirit from cracking. She looked around her and smiled. It was amazing how stupid some of these people were. Two men were trying to get through to their luggage in the burning plane by putting a blanket over their heads. She yawned and stretched, then promptly stood up and shook herself off. With a whistle she strolled along the beach nodding to some people she passed. They responded with a look of puzzlement as if suprised she was taking time off from panicing. She decided to call these people 'n00bs' for the reason that they were so new to having to tough it out. They were on a beach for heavens sake, what better place to crash? After about 20 minutes of mindless wander she stumbled upon a man sitting under a tarp drinking what looked like a beer, with closed eyed relaxed look about him. Finally she had found someone not freaking out pointlessly. The man smiled with his eyes still shut. "The name's Bsam. Enjoying the beautiful Pacific sun too?" Dauntless laughed and sat down. BSam opened his eyes and laughed. "I had hoped to get away from the hustle and bustle for few days. Looks like I got my wish and a regular supply of free beer." The two laughed and Dauntless moved under the shade of the tarp. "Beer?" BSam said with a smile. "It's going fast." "Naa I don't drink much alcohal really." she said. "Well your welcome to stay as long as you like. You seem level headed, and a pretty ok girl if I do say so myself." BSam belched then lay down. "Might as well take a nap if there's nothing else to do." and with that promptly fell asleep. Dauntless rolled her eyes. 'Men.' she thought 'Even the army ones are all the same.' And with that she stood up and decided to go tell the n00bs that blankets aren't fire proof.
Sorry it's short, but its defining the charactors so that the real events can happen. Next chapter, is another Dante
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Post by A. the Returned on May 12, 2005 2:01:46 GMT -5
I like this. Lost is on tonight. Yes good story.
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Post by Amber on May 12, 2005 7:28:54 GMT -5
This is really fun. I like it a lot.
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Post by Sora on May 13, 2005 13:43:38 GMT -5
Thanks guys part 6 up soon.
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Post by PJ on May 13, 2005 18:24:13 GMT -5
Kewl-Uality
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