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Post by PJ on May 7, 2005 19:09:07 GMT -5
As it turned out, It wasn't God. Oooh mystery! Cool. Write more.
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Post by Sora on May 7, 2005 19:57:07 GMT -5
I'm really bored so I might as well.
Part 4- Antenora
Antenora sighed as she stomped through the islands rough grass and dirt. This just was not her day. First the CIA then this? She spat on the ground and drudged on. The team, consiting of Dante, PJ, and herself were heading off to explore the jungle, and find anymore survivors. Only the economy section of the plane had ended up on the beach, and they needed to find out what happened to the other half. Dante had positioned himself at the front of the pack, taking the leader position, which annoyed her greatly. Antenora was a feminist and always promoted female rights as leaders. The Da Vinci Code was her bible, and she usually always got her way. But the rules had changed, she was no longer in the world she was used too, and here she accepted that she might as well deal with the injustices. PJ was a bit slow and had to constantly catch up to the brisk them. "So Antenora, what do you do?" he asked with a slight puff "Or should I say what did you do?" Antenora sighed. She didn't like people delving into her buisness. "I work at Homeland Security." she said simply. "Really?" PJ said, with a laugh. "I never pictured females taking the old Sherlock jobs." Antenora pursed her lips. This was exactly what she had been talking about. "And what may I ask you do Mr.PJ? A round the world surfing documentary?" PJ was slow to catch the sarcasm, "I wish. I needed to visit Hawaii for some personal reasons." Antenora was surprised Dante was keeping quiet amogst all of this. "Dante, are you alright." "I'm fine." he said with a sigh. "I think we should head back. We've been walking for hours and haven't seen a thing." Antenora nodded. It was the sensible thing to do. They were better off helping the group back at the beach. PJ looked livid. "I was just getting started!" he said indignitaly. "Shut up will you?" Antenora said with rolled eyes and brushed past him. The group walked aways back, but as they went along Antenora had a funny feeling. It may have been her woman's intuition, but something wasn't right about this jungle. She shook her self. 'I'm just being paranoid.' She thought, and walked on through to the sand. * * *
"It's coming together quite nicely isn't my dear?" a man said with a cold smile. "Most certainly darling." she replied. They both laughed and drank from their glasses.
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Post by PJ on May 7, 2005 20:46:02 GMT -5
Why am I always the slow, idiotic, fool? It's not cool. But nicely done.
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Post by Sora on May 7, 2005 20:56:01 GMT -5
Your not, its just that you make jokes without thinking whether it was nice or not(in the story.). Your still an intelligent person, but slow to catch on to sarcasm as your optimistic.
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Post by PJ on May 7, 2005 22:18:06 GMT -5
Hardly, but it's your story. So do go on.
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Post by Sora on May 7, 2005 22:27:57 GMT -5
What your not optimistic? Hmmmm, plot change here? Naaaaa
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Post by PJ on May 7, 2005 22:31:21 GMT -5
What your not optimistic? Hmmmm, plot change here? Naaaaa No, I'm usually pessimistic. Try making someone else the optimist, if you can.
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Post by Sora on May 7, 2005 22:41:42 GMT -5
Lol, your charactor actually isn't optimistic just a jokester. You'll find ou more about him soon. The next chapter's about Dauntless. You'll also see more of the mysterious duo soon...
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Post by PJ on May 7, 2005 22:42:41 GMT -5
Lol, your charactor actually isn't optimistic just a jokester. You'll find ou more about him soon. The next chapter's about Dauntless. You'll also see more of the mysterious duo soon... Yeah, joksters me.
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Post by Dante on May 8, 2005 1:01:52 GMT -5
You've got a good mystery going, I'm bad at commenting, write more.
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Post by odh on May 8, 2005 3:29:46 GMT -5
Dauntless is a girl, FYI. Also, YAYFORME!
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on May 8, 2005 4:52:43 GMT -5
I like my character and her feminist-ness, and you've got a good mystery going.
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Post by BMatt on May 8, 2005 6:40:20 GMT -5
I better be in the "Sawyer" role..and that's all I have to say about it.
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Post by odh on May 8, 2005 6:54:14 GMT -5
I better be in the "Sawyer" role..and that's all I have to say about it. If you ain't, I better be. Sadly, I think me and Kimia are Boone and Shannon...
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Post by Charles Vane on May 8, 2005 7:57:49 GMT -5
Then who am I? I don't fit any of the main charcaters. Maybe I'm Rose. Or Celinra.
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