Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on May 17, 2005 17:09:42 GMT -5
PJ and Ennui seem very much like themselves, indeed.
I look forward to the spies and wars; that ought to be cool.
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Post by BSam on May 17, 2005 17:57:39 GMT -5
I'm going to flatter this in order to find my way into it. do you reckon that would work for me too?
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Post by PJ on May 17, 2005 20:33:31 GMT -5
Ennui seems VERY eager to see my plans. I smell a spy! Get 'IM! *swings club*
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Post by j42 on May 21, 2005 21:04:47 GMT -5
Apparently, PJ's actions did not delay the opening of 667. It was, in fact, opened the next day. Dante was in a paranoid, suspicious mood and he stared at the neighboring building from the window. Antenora came up behind him. "Dante, what's wrong?" She asked. "You've been so stressed lately." "There will be a war. And I think there is a spy among us." He said, still troubled. "A spy! Have you any proof?" Antenora asked. "None but my own suspicions." Dante was pacing around the room, staring determinedly at the floor. "This is going to be a tough war, Antenora. If there is a spy, I shall find out who it is and he will be punished. No one betrays me. Prepare the guillotine!"
Essay questions: 1. If Ennui were the spy, would I make it so obvious? I mean, really, I happen to bring up the spy after his appearance and some suspicious behavior. 2. Or am I just drawing suspicion away from the fact that he is a spy by asking that? 3. After the previous questions, do you think Ennui is the spy? Why or why not? 4. If not Ennui, then who? 5. If you were the author, what would you want one to think?
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Post by PJ on May 21, 2005 21:06:34 GMT -5
Essay questions: 1. If Ennui were the spy, would I make it so obvious? I mean, really, I happen to bring up the spy after his appearance and some suspicious behavior. 2. Or am I just drawing suspicion away from the fact that he is a spy by asking that? 3. After the previous questions, do you think Ennui is the spy? Why or why not? 4. If not Ennui, then who? 5. If you were the author, what would you want one to think? Hmmm, interesting. I suspect myself now.
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Post by j42 on May 21, 2005 21:07:34 GMT -5
6. Let's say the spy is someone you least expect. Who is the person you least expect? Do you think he or she is the spy? If you suspect him to be the spy does that still make he or she the person you least suspect?
7. Do you suspect Ennui less now?
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Post by PJ on May 21, 2005 21:14:17 GMT -5
I suspect Ennui less, but Dante and myself more.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
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Post by Antenora on May 22, 2005 5:38:52 GMT -5
Essay question answers: 1. I doubt it. 2. You could be. 3. Yes. Because I think you're drawing suspicion away from that fact. 4. Could be anyone... 5. I'd want my readers completely befuddled. 6. I least suspect myself. 7. Perhaps.
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Post by Dante on May 22, 2005 6:00:57 GMT -5
1. You might. 2. Exactly. 3. No clue, although if he is, you should really just have said "No Comment." 4. See 3. 5. I'd want them to be confused. 6. Anyone who's in disguise. 7. I try not to be speculate, as I don't know what might happen...
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Post by j42 on May 22, 2005 6:10:00 GMT -5
Gah. Now here comes the hard part...that is, actually crafting a plot and filling it up so I can get to the revelation...thing.
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Post by Ennui on May 26, 2005 23:42:48 GMT -5
I haven't kept up with this for a bit...keep going, J...
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Antenora
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Fiendish Philologist
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Post by Antenora on May 27, 2005 5:21:09 GMT -5
Certainly, J, keep writing.
Plots are hard to come up with, indeed. When I try to come up with them, I fail miserably.
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