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Post by mysteriouscreep on Sept 6, 2005 4:30:26 GMT -5
*glomps*
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Post by idiotj on Sept 6, 2005 5:24:00 GMT -5
Hmmm...fun and well-written, J, but I'm not sure I like swerving from ASOUE's code of realism. You know what I mean, babies can climp up elevator shafts, but people can't be reborn from the ashes of their houses, unless metaphorically. It is metaphorical.
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Post by Ennui on Sept 6, 2005 5:38:36 GMT -5
Cool. Sorry for my density.
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Post by PJ on Sept 6, 2005 6:26:33 GMT -5
Excellence.
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Post by Dante on Sept 6, 2005 6:56:51 GMT -5
Yeah, this is great, J. I really like the stuff in the first bit.
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Post by Antenora on Sept 6, 2005 7:03:44 GMT -5
Excellent, J. The metaphorical rebirth was really cool. Please write more.
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Post by Celinra on Sept 6, 2005 7:57:21 GMT -5
*applauds*
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Sept 6, 2005 9:57:47 GMT -5
Fantastic J. I love the first paragraph of the first bit.
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Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Sept 7, 2005 15:19:20 GMT -5
Love it. Nothing more to say.
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Post by SF on Sept 12, 2005 16:21:06 GMT -5
The Yin and Yang paragraph was probably my favorite so far. The reincarnation-type-thing is quite creepy. The click that Dante heard at the book-store I'm guessing to be a photo being taken. *shifty eyes*
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Post by idiotj on Sept 12, 2005 16:37:50 GMT -5
Thanks. Overload of schoolwork. Grr, can't focus on writing, people. Sorry.
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