Post by DetectiveDupin on Mar 23, 2004 13:50:23 GMT -5
Hello, everyone.
I was gonna reveiw fanfictions for The 667 Newspaper, but as that's not going to happen quite at the moment..
...I thought I'd just post my reveiws here.
Please do not feel offended-I thought all five I reveiwed were great-but obviously I have to write the truth.
Dupin- Fanfic Reviews.
I
Forlorn Love by Countess Mecilla.
I found this story exciting. Not edge-on-seat exciting though. It is a different storyline to what I’ve seen before-with a relationship between Violet and Olaf. I think maybe it was too out of character though. I don’t believe she would kiss him like that. And when he kissed her first-she should argue more before actually snogging him back.
6/10
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The Weird Side Of Olaf by Badlee
This is completely different to Forlorn love. It is written in a hilarious script, and the chapters get more random and random. Badlee also takes in the readers ideas. Of course, they are all out of character, but as this is a parody, that’s what we have to expect.
9/10
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Cutting Through-PG13 by MadamLuna
This explains how the hook handed man lost his hands. I thought MadamLuna came up with the idea very well. It really shows how horrible Olaf can be. And I was really enjoying it all the way through-not a moment when I felt like I was bored and wanted to stop.
9/10
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powderslash PG13 by The Peaches Of Wrath
I found this a nice romantic-almost peaceful story, reflecting on the lives of Tocuna and Flo. Midway, however, I was a bit confused about what they were saying. But I liked the whole thing about their scars in the fire.
7/10
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Listen To My Babe by Orangey Snicket
This is another Violet/Duncan fanfiction, taking place where they first met. It’s the scene where Duncan and Isadora take the Bauds to the Prufock Library, unread about in TAA. Although nothing between Violet and Duncan has happened yet, he has strong feelings that have been described in a great way.
8/10
asoue.proboards11.com/index.cgi?board=story&action=display&thread=1079551336
I was gonna reveiw fanfictions for The 667 Newspaper, but as that's not going to happen quite at the moment..
...I thought I'd just post my reveiws here.Please do not feel offended-I thought all five I reveiwed were great-but obviously I have to write the truth.
Dupin- Fanfic Reviews.
I
Forlorn Love by Countess Mecilla.
I found this story exciting. Not edge-on-seat exciting though. It is a different storyline to what I’ve seen before-with a relationship between Violet and Olaf. I think maybe it was too out of character though. I don’t believe she would kiss him like that. And when he kissed her first-she should argue more before actually snogging him back.
6/10
asoue.proboards11.com/index.cgi?board=story&action=display&thread=1079288840&start=15
The Weird Side Of Olaf by Badlee
This is completely different to Forlorn love. It is written in a hilarious script, and the chapters get more random and random. Badlee also takes in the readers ideas. Of course, they are all out of character, but as this is a parody, that’s what we have to expect.
9/10
asoue.proboards11.com/index.cgi?board=story&action=display&thread=1077100486
Cutting Through-PG13 by MadamLuna
This explains how the hook handed man lost his hands. I thought MadamLuna came up with the idea very well. It really shows how horrible Olaf can be. And I was really enjoying it all the way through-not a moment when I felt like I was bored and wanted to stop.
9/10
asoue.proboards11.com/index.cgi?board=story&action=display&thread=1079296288
powderslash PG13 by The Peaches Of Wrath
I found this a nice romantic-almost peaceful story, reflecting on the lives of Tocuna and Flo. Midway, however, I was a bit confused about what they were saying. But I liked the whole thing about their scars in the fire.
7/10
asoue.proboards11.com/index.cgi?board=story&action=display&thread=1077419465
Listen To My Babe by Orangey Snicket
This is another Violet/Duncan fanfiction, taking place where they first met. It’s the scene where Duncan and Isadora take the Bauds to the Prufock Library, unread about in TAA. Although nothing between Violet and Duncan has happened yet, he has strong feelings that have been described in a great way.
8/10
asoue.proboards11.com/index.cgi?board=story&action=display&thread=1079551336
