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Post by jayK on Nov 23, 2003 2:25:57 GMT -5
How come I don't believe that you're not advertising? I am just saying that the story will finish first there!
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Post by jayK on Nov 23, 2003 2:29:33 GMT -5
chapter 6:
If I were to say it was July, you'd go hang on a minute, youv'e just described Violets chapter as Winter time, I never said it was winter though. And the Baudelaires thought It was winter as it was raining and snowing. Klaus and Sunny had just had a big shock. Jerome had just left with Esme' and he was probably going to die. Klaus hadn't had time to ask Jerome about Verbal Fridge Dialouge, but he hoped Justice Would be in. Incase you didn't know Justice Strauss was a very kind lady but she lived next to a very evil man, and was going to let him marry Violet Baudelaire, to get the fortune. I forgot to mention the Baudelaire fortune? silly me. Well the Baudelaire parents had a fortune, and Violet will only get It when she turns 18. Olaf wants it though. Klaus and Sunny were making progress, going much faster than Violet Baudelaire. Obviously chapter 5 and 6 were taking part at the same time, but without me using the horrible word meanwhile. It wasn't dark when Klaus and Sunny reached the door to Justice Strauss' nice on the inside horrible on the outside house. Klaus knocked. waited. knocked again. Waited. Knocked one more time. OPEN. Justice looked shocked, "The Baudelaires, well I never, come inside." Klaus and Sunny took a seet. "Where is Violet?" asked Justice. After not getting any evidence last time, klaus ignored that question and got straight to the point. "How did you lose your job? Justice" Justice stopped. and had more than a moments hesitation. Took a deep breath and carried on " I repayed a favour." Justice said, It was hard to believe Justice was kind, she was in a right state. Klaus persisted to find out more "Do you know anything about the V.F.D? Justice paused, she really didn't want to answer. At this point the chapter has ran long, alot longer than chapter 5, It was around midnight. Violet was already into chapter 7. The baudelaires however didn't know they were in a story, until it was to late. Justice never answered that question. But the letters must have meant Justice Strauss, because of what happened next. It happened so quickly.
A familiar voice could be heard, the 2 Baudelaires didn't know who's though. "Justice, I got it, he's in jail" Justice looked relieved. "And were all set to go, come on, the hotel awaits us." klaus and Sunny were both relieved to hear that. The event happened. In walked a man named Hector. Duncan Quagmire and Isadora Quagmire.
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Post by Sheepdogg Plankton on Nov 23, 2003 16:06:59 GMT -5
uh, this is okay, but not that good...
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Post by jayK on Nov 26, 2003 12:30:54 GMT -5
excuse me, but that's cruel, If you have nothing nice to say zip it! infact that's so cruel anytime i see you posting in this section I'll not read your works and just revenge write!
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Post by jayK on Dec 5, 2003 14:30:38 GMT -5
CHAPTER 7:
Violet had never done anything so cruel in her life. She was regretting it. The Powder Faced Women had helped Sunny. But Violet was in a rush, she was trying to find a certain man. A man with No name! Violet didn’t know how to find him but she ran past the cells. She saw an open cell. Empty. Another open cell. Empty. Prufrock Prison only had 3 cells with people in them, all women! Violet was looking for a man. She saw it! An open cell with a smashed window, that wasn’t the clue, at the bottom of the cell was a pie dish. This is the first time in this book I will tell you of something treacherous, I might have mentioned it when I was talking about JS, but not in detail. For a few weeks now something has been haunting the Baudelaires, the Snicket file, which says their parents could have survived a fire, they hadn’t. Quigley Quagmire had. The trouble that came with this file were 3 initials, I’ll use letter Forms. Vee Eff Dee VFD The V stood for volunteer, the rest was a mystery. But the VFD insignia was on the pie dish, Violet walked into the cell and picked the pie dish up, she turned it over. I will not say what the dish said until the end of the chapter, but Violet knew what it meant, well, some of it. She rushed out of Prufrock Prison and ran as fast as she could towards Jerome Squalor’s house, she had to see Jerome, it was important. He had to be the ‘JS’ Violet remembered this, ‘Beatrice if you read this I am at the hotel, get there, don’t let Jerome Squalor arrive, he will ruin everything!’
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Post by jayK on Dec 6, 2003 15:44:29 GMT -5
chapter 8:
Violet rushed back to the penthouse at 667 dark avenue, she ran all the way, and never lost her energy. Though I will not describe Violet's journey down random Road for you, because it took half an hour and all it was was Violet running, running like she'd never ran before.
She got back to the penthouse, no one was there, but there was a note. Jerome has gone "yes!" Violet said out load, But me and Sunny have headed for Justice's house, Don't go there, we'll have left, get to the hotel in anyway possible. Love Klaus XXX
Violet thought it was hopeless, she'd never get there if she walked, she didn't know where it was. She took out the map Quigley Quagmire had gave her. It was there, there were directions from Briney Beach. but the fastest way to get there was through the Elavator Shaft. She couldn't break in.
A car parked. It was just like Olaf's accept the licence place said M3M3nt0 M0r1 not I H8 Orp4an5. Vilet ran to the garden. It was the man with a beard. He was breaking into Jerome's home!
He was inside, Violet tiptoed to his car and opened his boot, he was heading for Hotel D, Violet could hitch a ride, she pulled the boot door shut. She was once again in the belly of the beast. He came back Swearing Loudly.
He got in the car and drove. He was obviously breaking the speed limit! But it didn't bother him. There was a loud noise. Violet recognised it.
What happened next was the second strange thing in this story. "The self sustaining Air-Mobile home" A familiar voice whispered "My siblings are near!" the voice whispered again. Then Quigley took his hand and rested it in Violet's.
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Post by CountOlaf on Dec 6, 2003 17:19:29 GMT -5
awesome. would u read my 2 fics?
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Post by jayK on Dec 7, 2003 1:49:58 GMT -5
I'll read one of them, to be fair, and If I have time I'll read another one ;D
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