The Survivor of the Fire
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Post by The Survivor of the Fire on Dec 7, 2003 18:31:44 GMT -5
"Hello Ed." It was the sound Violet Baudelaire wanted to hear most in the world. She whirred around nearly dropping her baby sister, sunny. The man she saw caused tears to well up in her large, purple eyes. Through the dark brown curls he shared with the man, Klaus Baudelaire saw the brown, reassuring eyes of his beloved father. In a trice the 3 orphans, who were orphans no longer, were in the arms of Charles Baudelaire. Tears spilled, unchecked, from the 4 pairs of eyes. After all the pain, after all the suffering, the Baudelaires were finally were they belonged. A malicious snarel caused the joyus moment to come to an abrupt halt. If any one wants to hear more please tell me! I don't know if anyone likes my writing
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Post by lemonysinlaw on Dec 12, 2003 16:34:03 GMT -5
That's great writing! Please continue, and it would be nice if you got an account.
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 12, 2003 17:57:16 GMT -5
Finaallly! ;D Someone replyed! Okay. I'm Survivor of the fire. Soo, here's some more! Klaus looked at the evil man infront of him with a glare of pure hatred. There stood Count Olaf and his wicked girlfriend Esme Squalor. "No!" Esme shrieked,"It's true! Charles survived the fire!" "Don't worry, honey,"Olaf snarled, "We can end that here and now." Olaf drew a long, rusty knife from the inside of his filthy coat. OK, respond again and I'll right mmore! Atleast somebody likes my writing!
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Post by ss26 on Dec 12, 2003 22:44:10 GMT -5
i didnt enjoy it. short choppy sentances.
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 14, 2003 8:58:08 GMT -5
(raises mummies from the dead and they all swarm around the survivor of the fire saying:more,more,more in a weird chant that is freaking me out.) me:more.write more!
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Post by lemonysinlaw on Dec 14, 2003 9:17:57 GMT -5
CountOlaf, very sneaky.
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 15, 2003 5:50:46 GMT -5
WRITE MORE!
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Post by jack2004 on Dec 15, 2003 6:02:59 GMT -5
write more
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 15, 2003 6:04:39 GMT -5
if you won't complete it i will.
count olaf threw the knife.time seemed to go slow for klaus.he realised that he had to save his sister from even more pain.doing something that would cause him pain but it was worth it to see the survivor of the fire definietly alive and well.as for him,well,he had taken the knife to his stomach and he could do first aid on himself.as for count olaf,he was caught by the police as he was trying to escape. but esme busted olaf out of jail and soon were in hot pursuit of the baudelaires as they headed back to the v.f.d to become new members
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 15, 2003 22:08:22 GMT -5
You confuse me. Did Klaus just die?! Maybe I'll do one of those alternate ending things. I hate it when main characters die. "And while we're at it, we can killt the 2 Baudebrats!" Esme cackled, pulling a cutlass from her belt. "Cutlasses are in!" she added. Mr. Baudelaire stepped infront of his remaining family, ready to protect his beloved children even if it cost him his life. Esme and Olaf had the Baudelaires backed into a corner. Charles protectively stood over his family, willing to defend them with his every last ounce of strenghth. Olaf raised his rusty knife and Esme swung her cutlass. Over Sunny's crying Count Olaf called to the Baudelaires iinhis weezy voice,"So long, Baude-" BOOM! A gunshot wizzed through the air over Violet's head.
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 15, 2003 22:10:11 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Please reply![/glow]
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 16, 2003 11:49:24 GMT -5
no klaus didn't die
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 17, 2003 17:27:03 GMT -5
ok. That's nice to know, but i kinda already finished the story I was just to lazy to type it up all at once if nobody would read it. ;D
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Post by otterkitscus on Dec 17, 2003 21:18:01 GMT -5
;DIread it,nice job
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 18, 2003 5:07:47 GMT -5
it was great.although i did like mine better...
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