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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 18, 2003 5:08:26 GMT -5
That's great writing! Please continue, and it would be nice if you got an account. i agree with da carte
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Post by Mental on Dec 18, 2003 5:16:12 GMT -5
it was great.although i did like mine better... the other one was better
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 18, 2003 9:40:47 GMT -5
it's my work.i'm bound to say it's better.but i agree with you,mental667
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 18, 2003 18:34:56 GMT -5
ok...who's did you like better mental? I'm a bit confused. Aww... but I did like yours! I do kinda want to keep writing the story(if somebody liked it) and I wasn't sure what to do with yours. And what's Da Carte? Soo... I'll keep typing it up for the two people who will read it later...
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 18, 2003 18:46:27 GMT -5
Olaf and Esme spun around. In front of them was a middle aged man in a biege overcoat. His hat covered his eyes. He blew the smoke off a .45 custom. Before anyone could react, the man, in one swift movement, hit Olaf and Esme over the head with his gun, knocking them out cold. "Lemony-I thought you where dead. And Beatrice-I'm so sorr--" The man's silenced Mr. Baudelaire by pressing a finger to his lips. A small tear ran down Lemony Snicket's cheek. Please keep replying!
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 20, 2003 21:36:52 GMT -5
Anybody Home?!
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 23, 2003 13:31:23 GMT -5
I AM!BUT NOBODY LISTENS TO ME
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Dec 23, 2003 13:32:20 GMT -5
ok...who's did you like better mental? I'm a bit confused. Aww... but I did like yours! I do kinda want to keep writing the story(if somebody liked it) and I wasn't sure what to do with yours. And what's Da Carte? Soo... I'll keep typing it up for the two people who will read it later... the card
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Dec 31, 2003 20:07:01 GMT -5
Soo...I guess I'll write one up even if nobody's home 'cept scott almighty. At least he's posting! Grrr... Then Lemony tipped his hat back, showing the Baudelaires his eyes. They were velvety brown and had a look about them that was indrescribable. The second you got even a glimpse of them, you could tell that they had seen things they shouldn't have seen for many years, perhaps never. His eyes had a look of longing for things that used to be and are long gone. "So long, Baudelaires,"and with that, Lemony Snicket disapeared into the mist. :.The World is Quiet Here.: Ten years later, as Violet Baudelaire sits on the sofa with her fianse, Duncan Quagmire, in her rebuilt manshion she still isn't sure what happened that fateful day. Her father cooks breakfast in the kitchen, Klaus and Isadora read poetry in the library, and Quigley Quagmire teaches Sunny how to draw a decent map, none of them are really sure. But they do know that thier happy(finally!) lives are owed to the man named Lemony Snicket. :.The World is Quiet Here.: 'Oh, my aching head,' thought Olaf, 'Wait! Were am I?! Who am I?! And who is that very stylish woman lying next to me?!' 'Oh, no, now my suit is ruined from all this mud!' thought Esme,'Were I am I?! This place is very tasteless; who is that devilishly handsome man sitting next to me?' "Were are we?" Esme asked Olaf, "And who are you?" "I am-I am- umm...I don't know! I don't know my own name!" said Olaf,"And I certainly don't know were we are!" "We must have amniesa!" concluded Esme, "Because niether of who we are." And with that Olaf and Esme gave up thier life of crime,went into treatment for thier amneisa, and got married, never bothered the Baudelaires, Quagmires, or V.F.D. (which again became a thriving organization) ever again.
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 1, 2004 7:08:52 GMT -5
brilliant
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Jan 3, 2004 16:14:16 GMT -5
;D Thank You!
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 3, 2004 16:32:22 GMT -5
i know this is a fanfic and all but it was too much of a un-snicket-like ending.still great though
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Jan 3, 2004 17:03:38 GMT -5
That's what I was aiming for!
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 3, 2004 17:05:35 GMT -5
oh.
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Jan 10, 2004 19:36:32 GMT -5
Ok everybody! Please tell me what you thought of my fanfic! I know it isn't proffessional or anything, but give me some constructive critism!
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