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Post by 5Peppermint5 on Dec 28, 2003 1:19:13 GMT -5
In this dreadful story you will encounter the phrase "bird's eye view", wich doesn't mean that you are using a bird's eye to see things, but that you are seeing something from above. So I suggest you get a bird's eye view of this book as you drop it down a bottomless well, then run away, screaming in horror.
(Please reply if you want me to comtinue!)
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Post by JM on Dec 28, 2003 20:41:12 GMT -5
that was so lemony now right what else do you encounter
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Post by 5Peppermint5 on Dec 29, 2003 2:33:32 GMT -5
(Thanks ;D)
Violet Baudelaire loked up at teh darkening sky as she, carrying her little sister, Sunny, and her brother Klaus hurried to find shelter from the rain that was sure to come. They came upon a damp cave that seemed to continue back forever, but, as they found when they crawled inside, it was terribly cramped. Sharp craggy rocks protruded from the sides, reaching at them like the dagger-like fingernails of Esme Squalor, the evil Count Olaf's girlfriend.
(More posts please!)
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Post by 5Peppermint5 on Dec 29, 2003 15:41:20 GMT -5
Hellooooo? Is anyone out there? I need more post if you want me to continue! Maybe I should give you more time... ;D
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Post by 5Peppermint5 on Dec 29, 2003 22:25:53 GMT -5
There seem to be a few views, but still no replies Hmmmmm, maybe I should write more... Nah, I'll wait for replies.
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Post by JM on Dec 30, 2003 16:18:25 GMT -5
that's all you enconter is bird eyes veiw your already start the story
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Post by 5Peppermint5 on Dec 30, 2003 16:22:44 GMT -5
Um, the PHRASE bird's eye view is something you encounter, like in TCC it was 'in the belly of the beast'. That was the beginning of the story, there is more of my fanfic on the 3rd post and I'm waiting for replies on that/
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Post by JM on Dec 30, 2003 16:24:43 GMT -5
so ................................................ ........................................................................................................................................... ummmm................................................................................................................................................... ok
yeah 123 post
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Post by 5Peppermint5 on Dec 30, 2003 16:36:36 GMT -5
Would you like me to explain it again? 73 post (only 3rd day as a member)
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Post by Sheepdogg Plankton on Jan 2, 2004 14:20:52 GMT -5
wow. cool. whaddever, get back to writing!
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Post by 5Peppermint5 not logged in on Jan 15, 2004 18:33:43 GMT -5
Since no one seems to care, I am discontinuing this fanfic. Thank you and g'bye.
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Post by CountOlaf on Jan 16, 2004 16:41:40 GMT -5
Since no one seems to care, I am discontinuing this fanfic. Thank you and g'bye. bye bye!
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5Peppermint5 now gone forever
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Post by 5Peppermint5 now gone forever on Jan 16, 2004 20:12:58 GMT -5
You had to say that didn't you!
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Post by CountOlaf on Jan 16, 2004 21:13:02 GMT -5
yes! Goodbye for Eternity! Altho this fanfic was good, begone!
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Post by JM on Jan 17, 2004 17:53:48 GMT -5
ok
EDIT:
JM, please do not stretch the page.
-Swans.
this is surly to crash your computer have a nice day
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