Luigi
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Post by Luigi on Jan 6, 2004 19:54:35 GMT -5
he other orphans are taken.
(3 yrs after Slipper Slope)
Dear Diary, I am lerning to read and rite. My siblings and duncan and isadora and quigley and hector--mainly Hecter, klaus and duncun (in thatord er). Im not realy good at it yet but klaus and Violet says im doing good for my age. they didnt lern til they were in kindergaten and theyu were traned in school with professinals and they didnt got there leseons on a scedual, unlike me. i hav to run away frum olaf all the time si i barly hav time.today, me and my siblings and hector are at hotel denn--o--ment. i think thats what its called. we hav to leve soon, in case olaf finds out where we ar. at lest i get a lot of time to praktice writing, sept klaus and violet and isadora and duncan and quigley hav two be trained for VFD--volunteers fighting dee-let--air--ee--us-ness i think. thats how they say it. hecter sed as soon as im flew--ant in english and i get a little older i could be traned, to, mayve evan sooner. im realy glad that me and my siblings and the kuagmyrs ar to gethar and that we hav a gardien. ill nevvre hav my parents, tho.
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Post by Mrs. (Alphonse) Elric on Jan 6, 2004 22:43:24 GMT -5
Nice! But...Pelees uoos porupor spelng and gramur or als it maks it hard to reed. ;D Thanks
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Post by SnicketFires on Jan 6, 2004 23:47:00 GMT -5
I like it but Volunteers Fighting Deleteriousness, obsessed, much. Its ok
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 7, 2004 15:52:03 GMT -5
continue
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Luigi
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Post by Luigi on Jan 7, 2004 16:26:30 GMT -5
I normally use good grammar--well, try to--but I'm writing from the POV of a FOUR YEAR OLD.
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Post by Luigi on Jan 10, 2004 16:12:09 GMT -5
Entry 2 We had to leve the hotel today. Olaff came in a disgusi--i forgot what he was, though--but hector knew it was a vfd disguise so we escpaed out the window. ive goten used to doing that in the past 6 yers--sometimes we joke that we exit more winndows than we do doors. (ah hell, I'll type normally) We tied together all of Violet's ribbons--she got a bunch--and used it as a rope. But it broke before Hector and Duncan were able to get down, and we heard Olaf shout and Duncan and Hector scream. Then we heard people run. "Violet, can you invent something to er--to--" Klaus asked. "Klaus, have you read--er--" Violet asked. But we didn't know how to solve our problem--Hector and Duncan were trapped. Olaf is especially mad, since the last of his original henchmen were killed, and the Snow scouts (except Carmelita) were able to escape. Esme is still with him, though, but she's getting tired of him. "The only way to save them is to go back in." Quigley said. "Climb!" I exclaimed. "I'll climb!" "Sunny, it's too dangerous--" Violet said. "I climbed down, and I climbed higher heights things when I was one year old." I said. Of course, I was still nervous. Somehow, I remembered it being a lot easier back then. Myabe it was because it was in the past. "And what will you do when you get up there?" Klaus asked. I shrugged.
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 11, 2004 16:00:39 GMT -5
it's great
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 20, 2004 18:02:04 GMT -5
i love it
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