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For Olaf-- Jan 26, 2005 12:53:34 GMT -5

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Post by champ103 on Jan 26, 2005 12:53:34 GMT -5

For Olaf
Written by Esme Squalor, for as long as poetry is in.

You don’t have to say you love me
You don’t have to take my hand
You don’t have to kiss me goodnight
You don’t have to understand

You don’t have to remember much
You don’t have to dance with me
You don’t have to hold me tight
And take me from my misery

You don’t have to stay right by me
You don’t have to stay right there
You don’t have to give a single damn
You don’t have to care

You know that I’ll be there for you
For you I shall always look out
I’ll kiss you well, and hold you tight
At least until you’re out.

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liamsgirl Reptile Researcher Posts: 20	For Olaf-- Jan 26, 2005 16:11:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by liamsgirl on Jan 26, 2005 16:11:18 GMT -5 At least until you’re out. That was the funniest line ever. The poem rocks, you're good at poetry!
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no-one Reptile Researcher Posts: 28 Likes: 1	For Olaf-- Jan 27, 2005 5:13:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by no-one on Jan 27, 2005 5:13:24 GMT -5 very nice dupes ;D

A. the Returned Xenial Xylophone Teh Love ????#??? ???泳?? ???? ? Posts: 2,967	For Olaf-- Jan 27, 2005 5:16:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by A. the Returned on Jan 27, 2005 5:16:26 GMT -5 I like it. ;D

champ103 Definitely Doomed Mad Hatter ????#??? ?$ ???氰?? ? Posts: 15,531 Likes: 4	For Olaf-- Jan 27, 2005 13:32:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by champ103 on Jan 27, 2005 13:32:21 GMT -5 Gee, thanks everyone. Perhaps I should try this poetry thing more often. I find it easier to write poetry from the veiw of another character.
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Angel Formidable Foreman Posts: 143	For Olaf-- Jan 27, 2005 19:06:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Angel on Jan 27, 2005 19:06:41 GMT -5 Usually I don't enjoy poems that aren't either rude, violent, or graphic, but I liked this one.
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chexfan2000 Formidable Foreman Posts: 129	For Olaf-- Jan 28, 2005 20:38:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by chexfan2000 on Jan 28, 2005 20:38:56 GMT -5 LOL! That was great!
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Ruby125 Formidable Foreman EISLEY ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Posts: 121	For Olaf-- Jan 31, 2005 19:34:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ruby125 on Jan 31, 2005 19:34:35 GMT -5 very nice, loved the last line.
	I cried out with no reply And I can't feel you by my side So I'll hold tight to what I know You're here, and I'm never alone.

thayet Guest	For Olaf-- Feb 8, 2005 13:14:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by thayet on Feb 8, 2005 13:14:27 GMT -5 Very nice , the last line rocks

WereVeryConcerned Reptile Researcher "How Could Someone So Wonderful Do Something So Terrible?" Posts: 47	For Olaf-- Feb 8, 2005 21:50:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by WereVeryConcerned on Feb 8, 2005 21:50:29 GMT -5 Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. applauds
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s Definitely Doomed Posts: 6,359 Likes: 80	For Olaf-- Feb 12, 2005 19:01:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by s on Feb 12, 2005 19:01:33 GMT -5 Haha. Great last line. Perhaps change "you don't have to remember much" that line is somewhat awkward, doesn't flow very well. Couple of word choice issues in places, but overall very nice. Fits Esme to a T.

Libitina Corrupt Concierge One-armed man applauds the kindness of others Posts: 4,731 Likes: 3	For Olaf-- Feb 12, 2005 20:57:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Libitina on Feb 12, 2005 20:57:41 GMT -5 That was great, Dash; very amusing. Keep up the good work.

hookhandedgirl Pessimistic Professor COMPYS!!!!!!!!!! Posts: 230	For Olaf-- Jun 24, 2005 9:22:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by hookhandedgirl on Jun 24, 2005 9:22:43 GMT -5 the last line is so esme!
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Hooky Splenetic Surgeon Linda, you will be missed... Posts: 638 Likes: 8	For Olaf-- Jun 24, 2005 17:59:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hooky on Jun 24, 2005 17:59:28 GMT -5 That poem was good and the last line was pretty funny!
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