Post by DetectiveDupin on Apr 11, 2004 10:04:43 GMT -5
This is my Finding Nemo fanfiction. Hope you enjoy. R, R & E.
Saving Marlin
Summery: When Marlin is kidnapped, for a village fair, it’s up to an unlikely couple of a small child fish, and a fish with memory problems-Nemo and Dory to save him.
Chapter One
Rock
Nemo swam out from the anemone, excited to death, and swam around in a hyper way-in and out of all the plants, doing flips and circles, high and low, until Dory rushed out behind him.
“Woah, calm down there little buddy,” she said, holding out a fin,” What are you so excited about anyway?” Nemo, and stared at her. He shrugged, and continued swimming at top speed.
“We’re going on holiday!” he cried,” I’ve been waiting for it for weeks…we’re going on holiday, we’re going on holiday!”
Dory’s eyes widened. She frowned, and scratched her head.
“We are?” she said, and though,” OH! We are! Yay!” She began to join in with Nemo, dancing and swimming,” We’re going on holiday! We’re going on holiday Romeo!”
“It’s Nemo.”
“Yes, Fabio.”
Nemo was about to correct Dory again, when Marlin pulled his way of the anemone, and towards the two excited fish.
“Yay!” Nemo cried,” Come on dad, come on dad! I’m ready!”
“Ooh…ooh!” Dory cried,” Me too!” She raised a fin.
“I know you’re excited, you two,” he said,” But we need to wait for the ray as it is.”
“Ray?” Dory asked.
“Transport,” Marlin explained,” To get us from A to B.”
“Why don’t we just swim?” Nemo asked.
“Well,” Marlin said,” Because it’s a holiday, I thought I’d give us a break by renting a ray.”
“Ray?” Dory asked.
“Dory!” Marlin asked,” You’re memory hasn’t been this bad in a while.”
“Ha ha…I was just messing with you!” Dory cried, and then turned as she heard a loud swashing sound. Nemo turned too, but Marlin was already facing it during the whole conversation.
“Ooh!” Nemo cried,” A ray!”
But then they were disturbed by an even louder noise coming from up high.
“Wow!” Dory cried,” Two rays!”
“That’s not a ray, Dory,” Merlin said, scared,” It’s a...a…boat!”
“Boat?” Dory said,” Hey, I’ve seen a boat…” she looked up,” Ooh! A boat!”
“Look Dory,” Merlin said,” And you Nemo. Get on the Ray, then we’re safe from the-“
“-Diver!” Dory cried, realizing the man or woman coming towards them. She grabbed Nemo, and swam onto the ray.
“Come on dad!” Nemo cried, and Merlin swam on.
“To Rock Rock Pools!” he cried to the ray, which started swimming. The diver came towards them.
“Faster!” Marlin screamed.
“Dad, they’re going to catch us! Not again, not again…”
Merlin screamed. “Nemo!” “No!”
The diver was catching up to Nemo…his Nemo, and swooped a net up. Nemo struggled, but was caught in the grip. The diver turned around and started kicking, and made his way up the boat.
“Nemo! Oh no…he’s gone.”
“Don’t worry Nemo,” Marlin reassured,” We’re safe.”
The diver grabbed the end of the ray. All three fish went flying back.
“Yeeha!” Dory cried, then gasped, noticing the diver again. She grabbed Nemo, and swam down to grab Marlin. But he was going back to fast, and went flying off the ray.
“Dad!”
“Marlin!”
“Neeemmmooo…” Marlins voice echoed out, until he was swooped into a net. The diver turned, kicked his legs, and made his way towards the boat.
Action replay.
His son was safe, like he had promised, but Marlin himself was not.
End Of Chapter
Short, I know, but the next chapter will be longer.
Saving Marlin
Summery: When Marlin is kidnapped, for a village fair, it’s up to an unlikely couple of a small child fish, and a fish with memory problems-Nemo and Dory to save him.
Chapter One
Rock
Nemo swam out from the anemone, excited to death, and swam around in a hyper way-in and out of all the plants, doing flips and circles, high and low, until Dory rushed out behind him.
“Woah, calm down there little buddy,” she said, holding out a fin,” What are you so excited about anyway?” Nemo, and stared at her. He shrugged, and continued swimming at top speed.
“We’re going on holiday!” he cried,” I’ve been waiting for it for weeks…we’re going on holiday, we’re going on holiday!”
Dory’s eyes widened. She frowned, and scratched her head.
“We are?” she said, and though,” OH! We are! Yay!” She began to join in with Nemo, dancing and swimming,” We’re going on holiday! We’re going on holiday Romeo!”
“It’s Nemo.”
“Yes, Fabio.”
Nemo was about to correct Dory again, when Marlin pulled his way of the anemone, and towards the two excited fish.
“Yay!” Nemo cried,” Come on dad, come on dad! I’m ready!”
“Ooh…ooh!” Dory cried,” Me too!” She raised a fin.
“I know you’re excited, you two,” he said,” But we need to wait for the ray as it is.”
“Ray?” Dory asked.
“Transport,” Marlin explained,” To get us from A to B.”
“Why don’t we just swim?” Nemo asked.
“Well,” Marlin said,” Because it’s a holiday, I thought I’d give us a break by renting a ray.”
“Ray?” Dory asked.
“Dory!” Marlin asked,” You’re memory hasn’t been this bad in a while.”
“Ha ha…I was just messing with you!” Dory cried, and then turned as she heard a loud swashing sound. Nemo turned too, but Marlin was already facing it during the whole conversation.
“Ooh!” Nemo cried,” A ray!”
But then they were disturbed by an even louder noise coming from up high.
“Wow!” Dory cried,” Two rays!”
“That’s not a ray, Dory,” Merlin said, scared,” It’s a...a…boat!”
“Boat?” Dory said,” Hey, I’ve seen a boat…” she looked up,” Ooh! A boat!”
“Look Dory,” Merlin said,” And you Nemo. Get on the Ray, then we’re safe from the-“
“-Diver!” Dory cried, realizing the man or woman coming towards them. She grabbed Nemo, and swam onto the ray.
“Come on dad!” Nemo cried, and Merlin swam on.
“To Rock Rock Pools!” he cried to the ray, which started swimming. The diver came towards them.
“Faster!” Marlin screamed.
“Dad, they’re going to catch us! Not again, not again…”
Merlin screamed. “Nemo!” “No!”
The diver was catching up to Nemo…his Nemo, and swooped a net up. Nemo struggled, but was caught in the grip. The diver turned around and started kicking, and made his way up the boat.
“Nemo! Oh no…he’s gone.”
“Don’t worry Nemo,” Marlin reassured,” We’re safe.”
The diver grabbed the end of the ray. All three fish went flying back.
“Yeeha!” Dory cried, then gasped, noticing the diver again. She grabbed Nemo, and swam down to grab Marlin. But he was going back to fast, and went flying off the ray.
“Dad!”
“Marlin!”
“Neeemmmooo…” Marlins voice echoed out, until he was swooped into a net. The diver turned, kicked his legs, and made his way towards the boat.
Action replay.
His son was safe, like he had promised, but Marlin himself was not.
End Of Chapter
Short, I know, but the next chapter will be longer.