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Post by i. on Apr 19, 2005 13:42:25 GMT -5
Amber, you simply must update this instead of letting it fall into the dust of older pages. Besides, now there's a slim chance that I may come back, so you simply must resurrect your work on it.
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Post by Dante on Apr 19, 2005 13:44:26 GMT -5
Amber, you simply must update this instead of letting it fall into the dust of older pages. Besides, now there's a slim chance that I may come back, so you simply must resurrect your work on it. Plus the Dantenora ending. It has a right to exist. |
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Post by Ennui on Apr 19, 2005 13:57:22 GMT -5
I was searching for this! I'm up to date now.
I'm rather with Derik, actually. Char's outnumbered, with apparently no way of escape. Now would be a perfect moment for the evil lesbian clan to fly to her assistance. Except for the fact I've never yet met an evil lesbian, and am doubtful that they exist at all...
Very good going, anyway. Liked the mysterious return of the drowned maiden...
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Post by PJ on Apr 20, 2005 1:20:49 GMT -5
Yes, do continue. Now.
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Post by Antenora on Apr 20, 2005 5:24:47 GMT -5
Plus the Dantenora ending. It has a right to exist. I second that remark. [lessthanpoundsign] Do continue, Amber. I want to see if Derik is alive, and if the evil lesbians are really out there. |
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Post by PJ on Apr 20, 2005 5:28:19 GMT -5
Do continue, Amber. I want to see if Derik is alive, and if the evil lesbians are really out there. Oh, and me? Don't I deserve a mention? I think I'll go sulk now.... Meh, I don't care, as long as I come back. |
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Post by Amber on Apr 20, 2005 7:35:54 GMT -5
I'll carry on when I get time, I've got a shedload of stuff to do for school tests (which there are no point in) I'll carry on later today probably.
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Post by Amber on Apr 21, 2005 11:23:51 GMT -5
The five 667ers left in the main section of the plane were totally silent. Char said abruptly;
“I suppose you want to know why.” She said, sadly.
“Well, yes actually we do” Ennui said.
They all edged in closer to listen to what Char had to say.
“I did it because I was jealous. Are you happy? You are all members who people like to read their posts, you are all generally intelligent. Some more than. You all look down at me. You think you are better, just because your posts have more content. But you aren’t. They all aren’t. You think I wanted to be the forum joke? No. I hate being who I am on 667. I’m not Char who jokes about everything. I never wanted to be. You wonder why I sometimes lose it with the ‘intellectuals’ it’s because I’m jealous. I want to be one of you. I’m probably able to be as well. But you won’t let me. If I even begin to make a clever post people laugh at me and presume I’m joking, I showed them who’s joking, Yes, Beatrix, Derik, Kimia, Aimee, Clem, PJ and BSam. All the members people liked. I was on my way to get more, so 667 would be mine. I’d be the clever one; I’d be the popular one. I’ll show you. You and your fancy words. They don’t make you clever. They make people think you are. When you aren’t, so just get over yourselves. I don’t look up to you; I don’t see why I should. You see, I’m evil, but I have a reason. I need to be the one that everyone looks up to. Don’t you understand? I need to be that, I can’t share my power with any of you, so you all have to go. I hate sharing and I hated all the attention everyone else was getting.”
There was a stunned silence as they all digested what Char had to say.
“You mean you killed all those people because you were jealous?” Amber said frowning.
“Well if you want to condense what I said into one sentence, then yes I suppose.” Char said frowning that Amber had shortened her long speech.
“You are cruel and evil” Dante said and leant on an emergency button.
A cupboard opened.
A boy with dark hair and who had knives sticking out of him at random points was sat in this cupboard
Sorry it's quite short, but I've been busy, I'll start writing the next chapter when I'm done with this stupid science revision.
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Post by Dante on Apr 21, 2005 11:28:37 GMT -5
A boy with dark hair and who had knives sticking out of him at random points was sat in this cupboard Derik? Char's scheme, it seems, has failed completely. |
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Post by Ennui on Apr 21, 2005 11:30:54 GMT -5
I'm actually starting to feel quite sorry for her. Utter defeat, and she didn't even manage to finish her victims...
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Post by Amber on Apr 21, 2005 11:31:52 GMT -5
Indeed. Yes, it does seem that way. For nowI'm actually starting to feel quite sorry for her. Utter defeat, and she didn't even manage to finish her victims... Shh, it's not like I'm going to make you feel sorry for Char and then reveal something shocking, which I haven't thought of yet |
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Post by Antenora on Apr 21, 2005 12:42:44 GMT -5
Ah, Char's tragic history and motivations have been revealed! Or have they? Do keep up writing this.
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Post by Amber on Apr 21, 2005 13:21:28 GMT -5
Due to my choice not to revise for stupid unecessary mock tests I've written more.
“Yes, Dante is right, you are cruel and evil, you ought to be killed yourself” Ennui remarked.
“Then someone should dance on your grave” Dante said, getting carried away.
The others looked at each other, a look that meant, “Maybe he’s gone a little too far”
“Oh.” Char said “So doing this isn’t going to make me popular?” she sighed “I thought that if you all, you know, died then I’d be all popular and make all the trends that sweep 667 so annoyingly”
“No,” Amber said “It’s not really put you in too many people’s good books.”
The other three displayed signs of agreement,
“Then my plan has failed.” Char said.
“Looks like it, I’m afraid” Ennui said, faking an upset voice.
Char looked up, just to check he wasn’t being serious, and on discovering he wasn’t she looked back down again and stamped her feet on the ground in annoyance. This did something other than just shake the plane; it opened the overhead baggage holders at the other end of the plane and two people got out and dusted themselves off, trying to get unsightly tyre marks off them, which they had received after falling from a great height on to a busy road. No one noticed them get down and sit down in the chairs next to a trembling Ashley, who had a girls hand over her mouth, the girl who the hand belonged to and a boy who had multiple knife wounds.
“I just don’t understand, I had it planned out so perfectly, I even had an evil clan of lesbians that I had ordered, but they never turned up.” She stopped and frowned. “So, even without my clan I went and continued my plans, finding a few helpers along the way, even though I could do with a few more, and ones that won’t leave me” She stopped and looked around at the four talented 667ers who stood in front of her, and her face lit up.
“Three guesses what she’s thinking” Amber whispered to Ennui, who smiled, while Antenora said something along the same lines to Dante.
“Why don’t you join me?” She said, almost all in one breath.
“Bingo” Ennui whispered back.
Antenora had obviously said something similar to Dante and he laughed.
“Why are you all laughing, or looking so happy?” Char asked.
“Well you are terribly predictable” Antenora said and the other three smirked.
“What do you mean, predictable?” Char shrieked, her voice turning slightly hysterical.
“Well, we could guess that you were going to ask us to join you.” Amber said, matter-of-factly.
“Yes, it wasn’t that hard” Dante said and they all laughed again.
“No, no, no, do you go laughing at me! I gave a perfectly decent offer. What do you say?” Char said
“Can’t you tell, by the mockery we are making out of it? Ennui said, glancing round, just to check the others agreed, and they all nodded.
“That’s a no then” Char sighed and slammed her fist against the window, it smashed, something which none of them were expecting. Something they were expecting even less was three faces at the window. They all recognized the faces,
“Clem?” Char said uncertainly.
“Char” The pale face of Clem said in a gravely voice.
“Do you want to come in?” Amber said, walking over and opening the door, then running back to hide behind Ennui.
“Char” Clem repeated in a gravely voice.
“PJ, is that you?” Dante asked, unsure of what he was talking to.
“Char” PJ said, also in an unusual gravely voice.
“I’ll take that as a yes.” Dante said.
“Char.”
“Sam, are you going to come in?” Ennui asked the remaining face at the window.
“Beer Char” It replied, also in a gravely voice.
Once all three faces had walked round and into the plane they all turned around, there were more than just the three faces. Two were holding Ashley in a seat at the back of the plane, while the rest were walking towards the group, mumbling “Char” at random intervals.
“I just can’t win can I?” Said Char, and burst into tears.
A bit longer this time.
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Post by Dante on Apr 21, 2005 13:37:18 GMT -5
So are the people who Char murdered zombies now?
An intriguing twist.
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Post by PJ on Apr 21, 2005 16:41:01 GMT -5
So are the people who Char murdered zombies now? An intriguing twist. That's what I was thinking. And we seem to want Char. You had better not make US want to join her. Zombie? Hmmmmm. Can I eat someone's brains? |
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