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Post by negativenine on Jun 21, 2004 21:07:34 GMT -5
XD I love it Tragedy!
I also like the blatant self-insertion. MODEST, TOO! Will Tragedy's list on endearing qualities ever end?
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Post by gary on Jun 21, 2004 21:14:31 GMT -5
Yay!! I was writing instead of swimming!!
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Post by QuagmireSnicket on Jun 21, 2004 22:06:29 GMT -5
You would rather be writing than swimming? Writing's fun, but I'd pick swimming any day!
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Post by timartwonis on Jun 21, 2004 23:01:57 GMT -5
Oh my freak that was so good! I loved the way you said that my loquacious manner or something was quite adorable, because it's true! hehe and also I loved the conversation with Ann and me. The whole chapter was quite charming and I loved the way I was portrayed. ;D
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Post by QuagmireSnicket on Jun 21, 2004 23:04:11 GMT -5
Hmm...I thought you would say something more along the lines of 'EEEWWW THATS SO SUGGESTIVE"
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Post by Celinra on Jun 21, 2004 23:05:19 GMT -5
It was a good chapter... and I was mentioned again, so that made me happy.
I think it's cruel, though, to post the first couple chapters and get us all excited about the story, then leave for a month. -_- Oh well, I'll be looking forward to the next installment when you get back! And enjoy being whereever it is you're going!
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Post by BradyIsGreat on Jun 22, 2004 8:16:23 GMT -5
*puts right hand on red* I loved it was the best chapter yet that charlotte/ann conversation was hilaroius
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Post by timartwonis on Jun 22, 2004 9:15:01 GMT -5
Just one thing-- I did know what a Long Island Iced Tea.
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Post by BradyIsGreat on Jun 22, 2004 10:51:22 GMT -5
It was a good chapter... and I was mentioned again, so that made me happy. I think it's cruel, though, to post the first couple chapters and get us all excited about the story, then leave for a month. -_- Oh well, I'll be looking forward to the next installment when you get back! And enjoy being whereever it is you're going! maybe he'll write when he has like free time on the plane and stuff and then when he gets back he'll be on like chapter 70
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Post by Rikku on Jun 22, 2004 13:52:43 GMT -5
This is a really great story. I can't wait for more.
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Post by Hermedy on Jun 22, 2004 13:54:22 GMT -5
I'm so glad to hear everyone's enjoying this. But it's like I said. You'll have to wait about a month for the next installment. I really doubt I'll have time while traveling to write anything new. MAYBE on the plane. But I might not have the patience. I might end up watching movies Once again, I'm glad you like it so far.
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Post by Skalu on Jun 22, 2004 14:05:57 GMT -5
You know my opinion Tragedy, you know.
Oh yeah, Ann, B!Tc|-|!
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Post by timartwonis on Jun 22, 2004 14:39:12 GMT -5
hehe. I am a very random person and ym dad said that his brother is too...
I just re-read the first chapter and the part about the toilet paper is completely off!
I do know what a Long Island iced tea is. I have the little black book of coctails that my friends mom got for me. hehe
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Post by Charles Vane on Jun 22, 2004 15:53:31 GMT -5
Great chapter Tragedy, you added yoga in there too. ^_^
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Post by Hermedy on Jun 22, 2004 15:57:18 GMT -5
Glad you liked it, Pandora. I'm trying to decide exactly when to place Swandora I was also proud of myself because of the Charl-Ann convo. I think I nailed the spirit of both of them, but more Charlotte than Ann. That might be because I actually used snippets of past chatrooms with her to piece the whole thing together Swans, I'm leaving tomorrow afternoon.
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